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brokenperplexity — the pain
Published: 2004-12-05 03:35:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 64; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description what is this
      this pain
where did it come from
      and why does it stay
how long will it linger
and -
      and -
            wait where did it go
eh - no
      it's still very much here
            tis but hiding
how did this happen
      where did it start
            why won't it end
this pain....
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Comments: 3

nerdchick [2005-02-20 07:39:23 +0000 UTC]

I actually like this quite a bit, except for when you use \"eh\" and \"tis,\" which in my opinion disrupt the flow.

Many people have felt this way, and you\'ve expressed it quite well.

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brokenperplexity In reply to nerdchick [2005-02-20 14:42:33 +0000 UTC]

thank-you

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nerdchick In reply to brokenperplexity [2005-02-20 16:30:12 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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