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Five things the avengers (besides his fathers) taught little Charlie Stark and one thing he taught them (about his fathers)#1
"No, no, hang on kiddo, you're holding it wrong, you're gonna take someones eye out like that."
Charlie sighed as Clint corrected his hold on the practice bow again. They had been at it for hours, Clint trying to teach him how to shoot, but he was so hopeless at it! They'd tried guns, arrows, darts, and he never once hit the target, not once. The only weapon he showed any prowess with whatsoever was the throwing knives, like his father, but Clint insisted he needed practice on other mediums of long-distance attack. He was the son of two of the Avengers, after all.
Clint stepped back, standing behind and to the left of the little boy, so as not to disrupt his drawing back of the arrow. The kid wasn't as hopeless as he seemed to think, he was only young, and today they were practicing firing in rapid succession. Clint corrected his hold and aim when he got it wrong, but when he let go, it all seemed to fall apart. Now he stood behind him, encouraging him with soft words to use his senses appropriately.
"Close your eyes, little Stark. Feel the arrow in your hands, listen to the room around you. Picture the target in your mind before you look at it, that's it. Now open your eyes and give it all you got."
Bright green eyes snapped open, determination written across the features of the young child as he fired arrow after arrow, each one landing either on the bullseye, or just shy of it. The usually stern-faced marksman let a wide smile slip easily onto his face, pulling the young boy into his arms as he finished firing. The amount of progress the young boy had just made was astounding, considering this was only his third day of training in any weapons at all. They'd only just convinced Loki to let them start training his son, the Trickster being afraid of pulling him into violence at such an early stage of life, as well as what injuries that could cause. Clint had argued that the kid was in danger anyway, considering his family, he may as well have some way of defending himself, should the worst happen. It had taken a while, but they had finally worn Loki down, until he gave in with little more than an admittedly terrifying threat about what would happen to anyone who allowed anything to befall his little boy.
He swung the little one in his arms, grunting at how big he was actually getting. It seemed like only yesterday they'd had to rush Loki to the medical suite, him screaming bloody murder.
"Hey, why so happy?" Tony leaned against the doorway, amusement glittering in his eyes. Clint knew that look all too well. It was the look he wore when he knew the answer to a question, but wanted to give his son the joy of answering for himself, of showing his father his accomplishments.
"Daddy, daddy, look how many arrows I got on the board! Arrows, not knives! Clint taught me to centre myself and use all my senses and be one with the arrow and it was amazing! Are you proud of me daddy?" Clint had to stifle a chuckle at the pride that filled Tony's face. Was there anything this boy did that wouldn't make that man well up with pride? Tony Stark, once considered heartless, wiping away tears just at seeing how happy his son was at learning a new skill.
"Of course I am, bud! Come on, let's go get you some cake and ice cream, little warrior. Then you can show your Dad your knife throwing, and beat uncle Thor at Halo again, sound good?" Tony picked up the beaming youth, turning to leave the room. He stopped in the door frame, turning back ever so slightly so the laughing boy could call out:
"Thanks Uncle Clint, you're a good teacher."
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#2
"Shhh...shh..no giggling, now, or it won't work. You ready?"
Charlie nodded, his hand pressed against his ear to keep the slightly too large earpiece in. He crept silently into the room, finding his target at the desk, and ensuring he stayed out of their line of sight. Almost there...almost..
"It's not going to work"
Charlie sighed as his father spun in his chair to face him, a mischievious smirk present on his pale face. "Not many people can sneak up on me, my own son included. I presume Aunt Tasha has been teaching you espionage skills?"
The little head in front of him bobbed up and down dejectedly. Loki sighed softly, placing a finger under his son's chin and lifting his head until green eyes met.
"It is not a fault of yours. I have had too many try to sneak up on me for it to work yet, for one so young. You are still a child, your teachers forget this. A few more lessons with Aunt Tasha and you will be sneaking up on even her. Understand? You're doing so very well, little prince, and I am very proud of you, but you still have lessons to learn. Run along now, I'm sure Natasha is waiting for you, since I turned your communicator off a few minutes ago."
Charlie made his way back to Aunt Tasha's room slowly, not wanting to face her disappointment in him. When faced with her, however, he saw a devilish smile playing at her lips as she gestured him over to the computer on the desk. On one side of the split screen display was him, talking to his father, and on the other side was Natash, emptying out a bottle of his fathers shampoo and filling it with a white substance. He turned back to his aunt, the question written in his face.
"Blonde instant hair dye. How pretty do you think Iron man will look with his hair white as the sand? Loki wouldn'tve let us do this, you know he likes to be the only one pulling pranks" She muffled a giggle into her hand, but Charlie was still confused.
"But why-" He was cut off as Natasha gripped his shoulders, smirk still on her face, and pulled him so she could whisper in his ear.
"Lesson 1: When to use a distraction."
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#3
The music started up, softly, wafting through the room from the old record player Steve set up in the corner of the room. All of the tables were pushed back, creating a massive space in the centre of the lounge. Charlie moved forwards, gripping Steve's hands in his own, gritting his teeth as Steve corrected him. There was an important gala coming up for his Daddy's company, and everyone insisted he must learn to dance, and show up the other kids there. Charlie had argued that there probably wouldn't be any other kids there, because no other kids had parents that made them go to this stuff, but Aunt Pepper had been adamant that he had to support his Father's company, because one day it would be his.
"And..1,2,3...1,2,3...Let me lead for now Charlie, you can lead in a minute once you've gotten the hand of it okay?"
Charlie tutted and sighed, but agreed that he probably shouldn't be in a leadership position right now, considering how much he was stepping on Steve's feet. Not that it seemed to bother the super soldier, but Charlie winced each time anyway, knowing it probably hurt, even if not much.
They danced through three songs with Steve leading, and by then Charlie felt he had grasped the waltz, simple as it was, and so reversed the roles, getting Steve to follow his lead. They danced through another song before Charlie made his first mistake whilst leading.
He had lead them a bit far to the side of the room, over to where some of the furniture was, but Steve said nothing, confident that Charlie would lead them back when he noticed. Unfortunately at that moment, Charlie caught his shoe on the edge of one of the rugs, send his toppling sideways, Steve with him. Steve was fortunate enough to land on the couch, but Charlies head connected with the corner of a table, a sharp crack sounding on contact. Charlie let out a yell, crying for his father. He knew that when he was hurt, he just needed his Dad to come fix it with magic.
Loki, hearing his Son's cry from his room, rushed to the rescue of course, healing the bleeding wound on the side of his head and soothing the frightened child with his silky words. Steve sat off to the side, staring at the blood on his hands from Charlie's accident. He was startled when Loki put a hand on his shoulder, indicating with his head he should rejoin the young boy, now happily sitting on the couch, watching them. Steve calmed his face and hopped off of his stool.
"Alright kid?"
"Yes, Uncle Steve. Can we carry on dancing now?" Steve sighed, not wanting to risk Charlie hurting himself again, but knowing he couldn't really say no.
"Alright, one more try. But what have you learned?"
Charlie laughed softly, knowing when he was being gently adominished.
"Pay attention to where I walk...or dance."
Steve smiled, took the small hand in his own, and the music started once more.
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#4
"Alright...Hydrogen?"
"1 electron. Uncle Bruce, why am I even learning this? Daddy said Chemistry and Biology and psychology were soft sciences, that physics and maths were the only ones worth knowing!"
Bruce nodded, pushing his glasses further up his nose and turning to face the young man seated on his desk. He gave the boy a soft smile, letting him know he wasn't cross at being interrupted about this.
"Your father would say that, Charlie. Tony has a...bad habit for blocking out what he doesn't need at the time. But since he uses Physics and Maths all the time, he never really blocks those out. Can you keep a secret?" Bruce let out a chuckle as Charlie nodded so hard he almost banged his head on his knees in his excitement. Like Loki, Charlie always longed to know the secrets he probably shouldn't.
"There have been times...before I knew Tony, when he could've used a good psychiatrist, to help him with his PTSD. Same for your other father, he had...slight issues with food. They have both had dark times in their past when they really needed some help. As for Biology and Chemistry...well without those, who would help us when we're sick, or injured? Doctors use Biology and Chemistry in their work, and not everyone is as fortunate as us to have a sorcerer to heal our wounds when we need it. Plus, when your father gets hurt himself, or is in Asgard, we still need the doctors and nurses to patch us up. Understand?"
Charlie nodded, understanding now why his Dad always tutted when Daddy went on his long rants about how useless other Sciences were. He saw the worried look on his Dad's face every time Daddy got injured, and he remembered the nice Doctors in the white coats that helped Daddy when he broke his ribs and Dad couldn't fix it.
"Uncle Bruce, did the Doctors help Dad when he had me?"
Bruce laughed, carding a hand through his hair, submitting to the fact that while his original lesson may have been ruined by this diversion, he could at least know he taught Charlie something about appreciating other fields of science.
"Yes, Charlie, they helped him alot. I remember how he screamed.."
And when Tony passed by the lab half an hour later to find Bruce teaching his son about Genetics, and where he got his eye colour from, and why his hair was dark brown...well...biology wasn't all that bad.
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#5
"Well done, Tiny LokiStark! You are triumphant yet again!" Thor beamed as he watched his little nephew best the competition on his video gaming device. He knew not the name of the game, but knew it involved a vast battle, and many lives lost. Together thay had chosen a fearsome weapon, that would be best for smiting his foes, and now he was content to watch the action unfold.
"Uncle Thor, watch me slay the monsters! They're really ugly and they all died and I killed them! Am I a good warrior, Uncle Thor?"
Thors booming laugh echoed through the mansion as he ruffled Charlies dark hair. Inside, however, anxieties made themselves known.
"Uncle Thor...why do I kill the bad guys in this game? They didn't do anything to me, but it says I have to kill them. It's not that I don't like the game....but I don't understand why"
Thor sighed, moving to sit in the plush armchair, inviting his nephew to scramble up to sit on his knee. He laid a hand on the bony shoulder, noting how he needed to feed his Nephew up some more.
"It is a complex question, you ask, but I have some experience with battles such as this, so I shall answer as best I know. Sometimes....Sometimes, little one, people dislike others simply because they are different. Because they have been told all their lives that the other people are to be feared, and never spoken to or liked. It is a sorry state, but it occurs more often than you think. Once...there was a time when I vowed to Odin Allfather that I would slay those I thought monsters. But one I loved, more than anyone else in Asgard, happened to be one of those I had vowed to slay. I had been brought up my entire childhood, with Frigga telling me at the knee that I should fear the Jotun-kind, that they would destroy Asgard. What she failed to tell me, was that your father was actually Jotun, adopted into our Aesir family." Thor dropped his head sadly to look at the young one he held. Charlie's eyes were wide, not expecting this revelation.
"Dad was one of the monsters?"
"They are not monsters." Thor was quick to reply, not wanting to lead his young charge down that road. "I was a fool, and I was young, easily influenced. It was because of this foolishness that all of Asgard pushed your father away, because even with his glamour on, he was so obviously different. But Loki was mischievious, and light-hearted, and a free spirit. He remains my best friend and bother to this day. We must not immediately hate what scares us, or what appears different from us, or what we do not understand. We must take the time to know them, before we assume they mean us harm. Do you understand?"
Charlie nodded solemnly, having taken his Uncles words to heart. He would not judge people for their differences, for sometimes it was that which made them special. His Dad was different because of his magic, but the magic was invaluable to their team. He moved back to his game, bringing up the mission plan and reading the profile of his enemies, eyes glued to the screen.
Well, he had to get to know them before he killed them, right?
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+1
"Where the Hell is Stark? And Loki...the other Stark?" Fury paced in front of the long table in the conference room. The Avengers each gave him the same response, that they had no idea, and he had had it up to here with those two being late to his debriefings.
"I swear if they're off making another baby somewhere-" He was cut off, unexpectedly, by a young voice in the doorway. The entire team, minus the missing duo, turned to face Charlie as he stood in the doorway, tear tracks on his face, fidgeting nervously as he spoke to Fury, voice wavering slightly.
"My Father is injured, Mr. Fury sir. Father refuses to leave his side, and is tending to him. I thought someone should let you know.." His voice shook towards the end of his statement, and they all knew how scared he was. Charlie rarely referred to his parents as just Father, as he knew it confused the heck out of the team. Bruce was the first to respond.
"Which father is hurt, Charlie? Dad or Daddy?"
Charlie fidgeted, pulling at the hem of his shirt, the other hand gradually having the fingernails bitten down to the quick. They had to lean forward to hear him as he whispered one shaky word, shocking them all.
"Dad."
Thor scooped the shaking child onto his lap as the room exploded in sound, everyone expressing their confusion. It was very rare that Loki got hurt, his magic often protecting him - and Tony for that matter- from harm. Naturally, when something did happen, everyone assumed Loki had made some sort of mistake.
"Bastard probably wasn't even looking at the target, too busy getting lost in Tony's eyes" Clint expressed from his nest in the rafters. Natasha snorted.
"Yeah, or planning his next kid."
"How could he let his guard down like that? No thought for the team.." That one was Steve.
Something broke in Charlie then, jumping up from his Uncles lap and turning to face his family, growling slightly. They fell into silence, never having seen the little one so angry before.
"You shut up right now! You have no right to say such mean things!" He felt his face reddening, and felt Fury's disapproving eye on his neck, but he didn't care. Bruce looked at him carefully, probably thinking of his manners or something.
"Now Charlie-"
"No! You stop it! My father puts everything he has into battle, and he doesn't have to! He does it all, he looks after me most of the time, he cooks, because none of you guys do, he makes time for Daddy, he goes into battle and he tries his best! I heard what you all said just now, you think he doesn't try hard enough! Let me ask you, did any of you know there's a limit to his supply of magic? Or not so much a limit, but if he goes past a certain point it draws energy from him, and it hurts? Today, in that battle, he teleported each of you to safety when you were at risk of getting hurt, I know, Daddy told me and showed me the videos of the battle! Did you all not realize that every time you became a bit overwhelmed, a few of your foes would suddenly disappear? Only to reappear in front of Dad? He takes everything he can from you because he loves you all so much, and he does it without complaining, even though it hurts him. He was actually busy working an enchantment to save Uncle Steve from being stabbed by the horde surrounding him, when one of the bad guys hurt him. And he didn;t have the magic to heal himself! Let me tell you, if nothing else, my father tries his very best to keep you all safe, because he cares about all of you, and now he's hurt, and you're standing up here finding blame to put on him? I love you guys, but you're not acting like a family right now." Charlie finished off his rant, shaking from the adrenaline of it and breathing heavily. He didn't think he had ever gotten that angry at his family before.
"Well said." Seven heads swivelled to see Tony stood in the doorway, a frown on his face and arms crossed on his chest. He walked into the room, picking his son up and rubbing his trembling back, rubbing a hand through his hair. He was slightly stunned himself. He knew Charlie was intelligent, how could he not be, with who he had for parents, but to understand what had just happened...and to be able to argue his point like that...he had never been more proud of his son than right now. Standing up for your family was hard, he knew, but standing up for your family, against your family, was even harder. He gave a cold look to the rest of his team, some part of him knowing this had been coming for a while. He knew what the team thought of Loki sometimes, that he didn't care, that Tony and Charlie were the only things keeping him here. He was disappointed, he'd hoped they would realize that wasn't the case eventually, but evidently not.
"He's right, you know. You guys need to get it through your head that Loki is one of us now, and he loves you guys. Sometimes I think he loves you more than I do. If any of you actually care, he'll be okay. he lost a lot of blood, and his magic is weak right now, because of that, but he'll live. He was unconscious when we got back, which none of you seemed to notice we didn't come back with you, by the way, but he woke up a few minutes ago. Anyone want to hazard a guess as to what his first words were when he woke up? Np? No-one? He asked me how you guys were. Asked if any of you were injured. Almost passed right out again trying to sit up in case any of you needed healing. How many times have one of you asked how he is? Think about that. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna take my son to see his Dad, and leave you all to wallow in your guilt. Come on Charlie, lets give them time for the lesson to sink in."
As the genius led his son from the room, the Avengers sat in silence, each contemplating what they had just heard. When they finally moved from the conference room, all of them headind down to the infirmary to visit their fallen friend, they all knew the same thing. They had a lot to thank Loki for today.
They had learned their lesson.
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Comments: 50
QuinnMercer [2012-07-28 07:19:03 +0000 UTC]
Clint--
OMG THAT IS SO AMAZING OF COURSE HE WOULD TEACH HIM TO SHOOT OMG OMG YISS AT LEAST HE DIDN'T TEACH CHARLIE HOW TO STALK PIGEONS IN THE PARK AND STEAL THEIR BREADCRUMBS XD In all seriousness I really love their relationship! I can see them being like really close; of course he's going to love all the Avengers but like they have something special and just bond really easily! So sweet, and amazing! GO CHARLIE WOOOOOT!!! <3
Natasha--
HAH that was so cute!! <3 Loki's just like "ok ok you're cute and all but seriously Dad is busy -.-/" and Charlie's like ";A;" then Tasha's like "lol I kick butt this is going to be freaking hilarious" OMG hahah LOVE IT!!! <33 At least it teaches him that girls can do just as much as boys!! *girl power lol* SWEET <3
Steve--
THAT OMG THE TEARS. I don't know why that just struck me as so touching and I got all teary and my feels screamed! I just loved it! Teaching him how to dance...he'll be a proper gentleman! I can believe he took to dancing well and can do it fairly good! Soooo sweet! Though I squeaked out loud when he hit his head ;A; I think my bro was concerned because I was quietly reading then all the sudden "*squeak* NO CHARLIE!" xDD he just gave me a funny look! And mama Loki run in like AHH MY BABY XD Steve must have felt bad ;//A//; poor Steve! But it's nice of him to teach him how to dance, who taught Steve? xDD
Bruce--
SHE BLINDED ME WITH SCIENCE! SCIIENCE!! hahah that's a great song *cough* anyways.. TONY SHUT UP BRUCE'S SCIENCE IS THE BEST SCIENCE IN THE WORLD AND YOU'RE JUST JEALOUS BECAUSE HE'S SO SWEET AND SHY AND SMART JDKLSAJDLKSAJD LET YOUR SON LEARN HIS GUTS OUT IT'S GOOD FOR HIM YISS~!!! But he accepts it in the end, of course, 'cos Charlie's interested XD ahha adorable!
Thor--
I GOT THAT REFERENCE!!! ahaha the whole time I was thinking of the Thor movie (which might I add I watch every night before I go to sleep! :3) XD Yes Thor will teach him right from wrong! When honestly it's hard to tell! YES! NO CHARLIE! YOUR MOMMYDADDY IS NOT A MONSTER HOW COULD YOU?!?! *cries* *quickly gets over it* Thor and Loki's brotherly relationship.... fjkdlajfls <3 fantastic~ So great!
Charlie telling them all off--
YOU GO BOY!!! YEAH!!! TELL THEM WHAT'S WHAT BECAUSE THEY'RE ALL A BUNCH OF...MEAN PEOPLE!! ;//A//; THAT WAS SO MEAN AUGH I WANTED TO CRY AND PUNCH THEM AND TELL THEM THEY'RE WRONG BUT INSTEAD I JUST ROLLED ON THE FLOOR AND RUBBED MY FACE BECAUSE MY FEELS WERE SO STRONG. AND THEN CHARLIE STANDS UP TO THEM AND I'M JUST LIKE AW YISS AND I COULD SIT IN MY CHAIR (STILL CRYING) AND FINISH THE STORY AMG THAT WAS JUST SO AMAZING OF HIM HE'S SO SMART AND TALENTED HE'S JUST LIKE HIS DADS AND NOTHING WILL EVER CHANGE THAT HE WILL BE THE MOST AMAZING BOY TO EVER GRACE THE EARTH WITH HIS PRESENCE BECAUSE....BECAUSE I SAID SO, SO THERE! >//W//< FJKDLAFJLDSKJ THEY WILL ALL FEEL TERRIBLE!! TERRIBLE!!!
To you<3--
OMG YOU ARE SO FREAKING AMAZING AND I LOVE EVERY INCH OF YOUR BEING! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TAKING MY STUPID LITTLE RANT AND TURNING IT INTO THIS BRILLIANT STORY AND WOWING THE WORLD YET AGAIN WITH YOUR ENDLESS AMOUNTS OF TALENT THAT I JUST LOVE TO READ AND READ AND READ AND LAUGH ABOUT AND CRY AND SCREAM AND SQUEAL AND SMASH MY FACE INTO THE KEYBOARD AND OMG JUST EVERYTHING YOU ARE EVERYTHING! I LOOOOVE YOU AND I WANT TO SPEND EVERY MINUTE OF MY LIFE WITH YOUR FICS AND TALKING TO YOU AUGH YOU JUST MAKE MY LIFE WORTH IT, I'M NOT EVEN KIDDING, I HAVEN'T REALLY HAD A BAD DAY SINCE I STARTED READING YOUR FICS! <3 YOUR WRITING JUST COMPLETELY CHANGED MY LIFE FOR THE BETTER AND I CANNOT THANK YOU ENOUGH FOR YOUR WRITING BECAUSE IT HONESTLY JUST MAKES ME SO HAPPY NOTHING CAN BRING ME DOWN <3 I EVEN FORGOT I'M SICK AND I STILL CAN'T FEEL IT BECAUSE THIS IS JUST BLISS I LOVE YOU SO MUCH <3 YOUR FICS JUST MAKE ME SMILE WITHOUT FAIL EVEN WHEN I'M CRYING OR GRUMPY OR JUST FED UP WITH EVERYTHING ALL I HAVE TO DO IS SEE A NEW STORY IN MY MESSAGES AND I HAVE A MINI HEART ATTACK AND I CAN'T STOP GRINNING BECAUSE YOU'RE THAT AMAZING AND NO ONE'S WRITING CAN EVER BEAT YOURS <33
omg we're a little married, it's brilliant. xD
SERIOUSLY never stop writing because you can only get better, and you're already the best now! <33
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to QuinnMercer [2012-07-28 07:27:19 +0000 UTC]
you realize im already writing a sequal to this like...as we speak? Its about how the Avengers apologize to Loki and itll be kinda cute I FEAR FOR YOUR FEELS WHEN ITS DONE. OMG I ACTUALLY LOVE YOU Xd YES WERE A LITTLE MARRIED, I KNOW, I LOVE IT
I LOVE YOUR RESPONSES TO ALL THE STORIES ESPECIALLY YOUR INTERPRETATION OF LOKI WITH THE YES YES YOURE CUTE BUT DADDY'S BUSY BECAUSE OMG ITS SO TRUE AND I DIDNT EVEN NOTICE IT AT THE TIME XD YOU MAKE ME FEEL LIKE MY FICS ARE WORTHWHILE AND I LOVE YOU FOR IT <3
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QuinnMercer In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-28 07:37:47 +0000 UTC]
you are....? *prepares feels* I CAN'T WAIT!! <3 My feels probably will be killed..but they enjoy it because it's your writing!! <33 I ACTUALLY LOVE YOU TOO <3 CX LOL I JUST POINT OUT THE OBVIOUS THAT'S ABOUT ALL I'M GOOD FOR LOL XD I LOVE YOU TOO DEAR AND OMG WE'RE MARRIED NOW OK? WE'RE MARRIED I'VE DECIDED THIS. x')
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to QuinnMercer [2012-07-28 07:41:09 +0000 UTC]
IM SURE YOURE GOOD FOR MUCH MORE BUT THIS IS DEFINITELY MY FAVOURITE OF YOUR TALENTS SERIOUSLY PREPARE YOUR FEELS BECAUSE IM WRITING THIS FIC RIGHT NOW
WE ARE MARRIED. IT IS DONE
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QuinnMercer In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-28 07:43:52 +0000 UTC]
PSHH NAH I JUST SIT HERE, READ, COMMENT, AND THEN DRAW FANART...WHICH I HAVEN'T DONE IN A WHILE! TOMORROW, YOU WILL HAVE FANART THAT DOESN'T SUCK IN ONE WAY OR ANOTHER, I'M GOING TO PUT EVERYTHING I HAVE INTO IT <3 OMG MY FEELS, THEY'RE BRACED, I'M KEEPING SHARP OBJECTS AWAY FROM THEM TOO XDD YAAAY I HAVE A WIFU! ='DD
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to QuinnMercer [2012-07-28 07:54:20 +0000 UTC]
AHHH FANART YES PLEASE YES PLEASE YES PLEASE IT CAN GO IN THE FANART FOLDER OF MY FAVOURITES I LOVE YOU.
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QuinnMercer In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-31 17:03:35 +0000 UTC]
IF I CAN EVEN KEEP MY PROMISED *dies* I AM SO SORRY SHIT CAME UP AND I WAS LIKE 'NOOO THE COMPUTER CALLS ME...!' ON THE PLUS SIDE I SAW THAT NEW STEP UP MOVIE OAO I LOVE YOU TOO!! *new story senses tingling, FLIES AWAY TO YOUR GALLERY*
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to QuinnMercer [2012-07-31 17:35:56 +0000 UTC]
OMG OMG OMG YOUVE RETURNED I DIDNT KNOW WHERE YOUD GONE BUT THERE WERE NO LONG COMMENTS AND I WAS PINING. PINING.
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QuinnMercer In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-31 22:01:17 +0000 UTC]
I DID RETURN I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT HAPPENED I JUST GOT BUSY LIKE BOOM ALL OF THE SUDDEN! I'M SORRY I CAUSED YOU TROUBLE! D':
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to QuinnMercer [2012-07-31 23:30:35 +0000 UTC]
I FORGIVE YOU BECAUSE I LOVE YOU THAT MUCH YES I DO. I HAVENT RESPONDED TO YOUR MEGA-LONG COMMENT YET BECAUSE IVE BEEN HAVING SOME HEALTH COMPLICATIONS AND TBH I WANT A BIT LONGER TO JUST SQUEE OVER YOUR PERFECTION. MAYBE IM JUST HOLDING IT RANSOM FOR FANART. I DONT KNOW, PICK ONE ALL MY LOVE, DARLING <3
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QuinnMercer In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-08-01 03:59:38 +0000 UTC]
OMG YOU!! XD I PICK RANSOM BECAUSE I'M MAKING SUPER AWESOME ART TONIGHT NO EXCEPTIONS, NO EXCUSED! HEALTH COMPLICATIONS?!? AHH WHAT'S WRONG DEAREST?!? ARE YOU DYING?!?! DD:
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to QuinnMercer [2012-08-01 09:42:09 +0000 UTC]
ART ART ART OMG YAY im okay, not dying, i just keep getting dizzy and really feeling sick for a while and I had a really bad panic attack s altogether yesterday i was a bit of a wreck
better today though. DONT YOU WORRY MY SWEETHEART <3
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QuinnMercer In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-08-01 22:35:12 +0000 UTC]
YES I WORKED ON IT ALL NIGHT AND MOST OF TODAY, NOW I HAVE TO GO RUNNING xDD I ONLY GOT ONE PICTURE DONE OMG IT WAS SO COMPLICATED TO DO WITH JUST A MOUSE ;A; Oh my God you poor thing I just wanna hug you and hide you away from bad!!!! D': I'm glad you're feeling better though honey please don't die, I would die with out you! <3
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to QuinnMercer [2012-08-01 23:54:35 +0000 UTC]
i promise you darling i wont die omg i love you so much <3 still holding your reply to that comment ransom though, just saying. I think i might have to talk to my parents about the panic attacks, go to a doctor or something, its getting on my nerves that theyre more frequent now :/ oh sweetie, I WANT TO HUG YOU TOO. SUCH HUGS WE WOULD HAVE, ME AND YOU AGAINST THE WORLD. <3 Let me love you?
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QuinnMercer In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-08-02 00:35:05 +0000 UTC]
I love you too dear <33 [link] Here is your fanart! I posted it about an hour ago ehehe XD You should see a doctor :/ I only ever had one panic attack and jfdlj it felt like the world was ending D: I can't imagine having them frequently!! v//v you poor thing! Go see a doctor or I will make you!! >//w//< I WANT TO HUG YOU TOO OMG WE WOULD KICK THE WORLD'S ASS xD Of course you can love me!~ \^o^/
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to QuinnMercer [2012-08-02 00:55:27 +0000 UTC]
OMG OMG OMG IM LIKE HAVING A HEART ATTACK IN ANTICIPATION OF LOOKING AT THIS FANART BECAUSE I KNOW IT WILL BE PERFECT BECAUSE ITS YOU SORRY I DIDNT NOTICE IT BEFORE, I WAS WRITING BUT NOW OMG OMG OMG FANART I LOVE YOU MY BABY <3
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QuinnMercer In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-08-02 01:03:39 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE YOU TOO DARLING <333 EHEHE THAT'S OK I'M JUST HAPPY YOU LIKE IT THATS MY ONLY GOAL!! ^//o//^
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to QuinnMercer [2012-08-02 01:06:42 +0000 UTC]
*chest bursting open with love for you*
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QuinnMercer In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-08-02 01:11:11 +0000 UTC]
D8 I-isn't that dangerous?! *hugs it better* ;//w//;
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jayL1398 [2012-07-27 03:56:55 +0000 UTC]
Aww, very sweet. I absolutely love the Frostiron fics you write.
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MaryannDarkandCie [2012-07-26 21:54:09 +0000 UTC]
Very sweet story. I loved all of those little moments, and the last one is just a perfect conclusion, just... so touching, so simple and so complex in the same time. I love that kid
Thanks for the story!
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to MaryannDarkandCie [2012-07-26 21:58:25 +0000 UTC]
Im really glad you like it, thankyou for the awesome comment, and of course thankyou so much for reading!
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MaryannDarkandCie In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-27 14:00:04 +0000 UTC]
It's been my pleasure, really
(and sorry for my bad english, btw)
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to MaryannDarkandCie [2012-07-27 14:29:17 +0000 UTC]
thats fine xD im one to talk in some of my fics, probably including this one, youll find many spelling mistakes. not because im bad at english, im awesome at english, i just have trouble typing sometimes
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MaryannDarkandCie In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-27 15:13:16 +0000 UTC]
Well, I'm a native french speaker, so, I do my best ^^ But I didn't spot any mistake in that text. But maybe I was to busy squealing about how adorable it was to notice them XD
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Howlecho [2012-07-26 21:27:30 +0000 UTC]
i'd love to read more if you're planning to continue this
very sweet story and a cute kid
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to Howlecho [2012-07-26 21:43:04 +0000 UTC]
ive got no idea how to continue this....yet. if you have any ideas id be glad to hear them and i could make a series
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Howlecho In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-26 21:51:56 +0000 UTC]
well you could do loki's recovery and have the rest of them show their gratitude for his help since charlie told them whats what then if you haven't already included thanos? (sorry if you have i have quite a few loki fanfics on here i read and they've ethier had him in or not XD) or create a new bad guy to cause trouble which could be fun cause then you can give him/her advantages etc, its more dangerous for loki now hes got a weak point in his kid, and for stark too of course...... just a couple ideas of the top of my head.... hope they help
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to Howlecho [2012-07-26 21:57:26 +0000 UTC]
wait wait wait im truly really sorry ive just gotten confused with the pile of ideas youve give me xD can you like...put thenm in a list, spearate them for me? am i just being stupid? sorry xD its late at night im very grateful that youre giving ideas though!
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Howlecho In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-26 22:03:14 +0000 UTC]
ah sorry!
loki's recovery
new bad guy, you could create someone which imo would be better as, much as i like them, everybody's doing thanos/amora or victor von doom but i won't mind if you find them easier to write (i wouldn't mind creating something if you wanted ^^)
he/she causes a few big problems which means they need the avengers etc
fight with henchmen or the big boss at the end and of course the avengers win.... but you could have some casulaties
the risks would be higher as loki and stark now have a BIG weak point target, charlie, so they'd need to keep him safe while they fight against the enemy...
just some ideas
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to Howlecho [2012-07-26 22:09:28 +0000 UTC]
these are all amazing ideas and im genuinely going to have to do pros and cons of each to decide which i want to do! creating a new enemy would be purely awesome but im not sure i have the talent for it xD writing about loki;s recovery, maybe a relapse? and tony uses their son as a reason to recover? (ive had some...issues like this myself and i know how often you relapse) ...a weak point sounds like an awesome target for some ANGST!!! ooh ill have to think about it because i cant decide!
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Howlecho In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-26 22:15:07 +0000 UTC]
i don't mind creating some bad guys for you if you would like that ^^
yeah a relapse is quite realistic and yes angst is fun to write
look forwards to reading what you come up with and i'm glad i could help
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to Howlecho [2012-07-26 22:18:58 +0000 UTC]
yes omg yes right...draft some baddies, ill draft some baddies, we can compare and contrast and COMBINE to create the best baddy ever, and ill make it into a fic eventually xD I have lots of fic trails at the minute but THE BAD GUY ONE WILL BE DONE. im pretty sure ill do the relapse one too, because its realistic.
Thankyou so much for being so lovely and for helping, you're an angel!
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Howlecho In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-26 22:24:22 +0000 UTC]
will do! i'll note you with the descriptions
ahh excitement brewing
i have some creature concepts in my gallery already if you need some creature/henchmen that do the dirty work and create a tough thing to battle, then the bad guy gets cross beacuse they destroy his favourite pets XD ->[link]
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to Howlecho [2012-07-26 23:00:51 +0000 UTC]
omg art yes art beautiful art theyre so amazing! in a really creepy way...because theyre creatures...
NOTE ME YES PLEASE AHHH THIS EXCITES ME. THIS COMMENTER, I LIKE THEM, ANOTHER!
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Howlecho In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-26 23:02:56 +0000 UTC]
thanks XD i like to draw creepy things
I will so just descriptions and im guessing they'll need to be humanoid
haha x i love that joke!
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to Howlecho [2012-07-26 23:03:59 +0000 UTC]
yeah kinda humanoid id prefer it if they were a sort of earth sourced kind of villain...they could have magic though...or maybe just the ability to control magic? possibilities...
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Howlecho In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-26 23:11:26 +0000 UTC]
okay XD *starts to think of ideas*
well they'll need someb kind of power if they wanna last five seconds... ooh someone that can tackle the hulk... ahh the imangation
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to Howlecho [2012-07-26 23:38:19 +0000 UTC]
dude, nothing can tackle the hulk. nothing.
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Cat-Masta77 [2012-07-26 20:44:47 +0000 UTC]
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That was the most adorable thing I have ever read.
Charlie is fucking precious!
The ending was just asdfgahdk
I can't even
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to Cat-Masta77 [2012-07-26 20:48:31 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou so much! The name was actually chosen by ~Quinnmercer as well, did you like that? I thought i was cute
Im so so glad you found it cute!
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Cat-Masta77 In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-26 20:52:35 +0000 UTC]
It is a great name!
It was cuter than kittens playing with puppies, baby squirrels and baby birds on a rainbow.
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BrokenUnicorn In reply to Cat-Masta77 [2012-07-26 20:55:13 +0000 UTC]
omg that would be so cute i would just die. im glad you liked it on some of the "avengers teach charlie something" i got a bit stuck but altogether this was probably the easiest thing ive ever written.
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Cat-Masta77 In reply to BrokenUnicorn [2012-07-26 20:59:56 +0000 UTC]
Well you did a great job, it didn't really show if you got stuck which is great! ^^
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