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Published: 2006-08-12 00:00:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 73; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Wow, it's a drawing! It seems kind of pointless to upload my drawings here anymore, but I figured I might as well try one more time to receive some real critique from more than just one person...Well, anyway, this is a picture I drew a couple of weeks ago of my sister's character, Dendei. We decided to do an art trade, but she still hasn't drawn my picture. XP Please ignore the pitiful attempt at a background...
I'm not sure whether I like it. I was going to color it digitally, which is why the background lacks detail, but I'm too lazy. >_<
Sorry for the cruddy quality; I had to use my camera instead of my scanner.
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Comments: 7
This is really cute^^ The body shape and poportions are really good, if slightly long. And the outfit is cute^^
As for crits...her back is facing us, right? The only thing is the head. It should be tilted more forward, so you can only see part of the right eye. Other than that, it's really nice. You're improving form your first humans^^
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-copied Kay's plaid- It's quite simple...
Or neck= too small. >.< 'Cause if the shoulders were smaller, wouldn't her body be even more unnaturally skinny? o.o;;
What kind of an angle were you thinking of for the head?
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Aww she so cute! I love the skirt! -wishes she could draw plaid-
Well... as c.c would go what I see is her shoulders may be to wide for her neck. As for the head it would not be looking straight on but perhaps at an angle?
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-copied Kay's plaid- It's quite simple...
Or neck= too small. >.< 'Cause if the shoulders were smaller, wouldn't her body be even more unnaturally skinny? o.o;;
What kind of an angle were you thinking of for the head?
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Rawr, you're so specific. >.<
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