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Published: 2012-06-29 16:55:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 3623; Favourites: 129; Downloads: 6
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Hey guys! I'm creating a comic book called Colorstar's past. It's going to be a warriors fanfic inspired by a clan I rp in, LeafClan. Its just a little something I'm going to be doing in my Free time. Page one will be out soon!I was working on this a few nights ago while some other watched me on join.me owo Haha, I wonder how ideas like this pop up into my head out of no where! I'm Avoiding Commisions
Summary: Colors was a small domesticated house pet, who lived with his mother and two siblings, Paris and Reed. His father lives in the house next to his. One day, he stumbles upon the outside. Every day the outside grass and scents bring him closer to the forest. What will he find on the other side of the fence? lol jk
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Colorstar, Paris, Reed, (c) Brooklynkillsdream at DeviantART
Warriors (c) Erin Hunter
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Comments: 59
I actually just released the first page! ^.^
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My eyes were drawn to this, the lighting and coloring is great. The anatomy could use work (the cats seem more like foxes), and the lineart style is a bit strange in my opinion.
Overall, it's an eye catching drawing, but it could be improved. ^-^'
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Wow, this looks amazing, but as a cover to a comic, not so much. It shows the characters in the comic but nothing else, there is not hint of what its about which generally doesn't spark peoples interest, maybe if you added something a little more to the background that hinted what your comic was about, it may interest people a little more. But I love this work either way
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Thank you for the critique! It means a lot!
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You're very welcome
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The shading is great, makes it look like it actually has fur.
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I like the effect in the background!
Digital art has always been lost with me.
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Looks epic! I'm excited to see it. You're a brilliant artist! DRAW FASTER >: D
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FUUUU-
YOU NEED TO START THIS, WOMAN. SERIOUS SHIT.
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I FINISHEDDDD
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I need to get all of my commissions done ;A;
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I finished
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Colorstar is a boy xD
You'll find out in the fanfic
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That awkward moment when the title of the boll affects the cover picture
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No :c I had one, but my sis took my laptop to play Fantage or whatever she calls it ;A;
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D: ;A; Nuuuuuuuu
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ikr oAo heheheheh 69 favorites >
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Looks nice! 
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ahaha
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Awesome! 
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Haha, I might!
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No problem! If you ever run out of characters, I can make randomous ones for ya~
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Haha, Okay and thank you!
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Colorstar? What an interesting name! x3
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Haha xD
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TYCOS GUNNA BE IN IT
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YESSHH. How far does this go? :3
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WELL. YOU NEEDA GO HURRY DRAWING.
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This is so amazing Brook! I love the coloring that you've done with the kitties, well, to be truthful I love everything about this whole picture! I can't wait for when you finish page 1 ^.^
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