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BrownieTheif ā Master Saruwatari's OC Zephi
Published: 2013-12-16 04:51:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 355; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 3
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a fullbody commission for of his OC ZephiRelated content
Comments: 22
nice, character design. i always enjoy your style and you have a lot of potential to your art. As far as critiques goes I would say what I noticed first that you could apply better is your coloring techniques. I don't know what program you use, but it seems to me you use too much of the burn tool and you could try some other brushes to lend different textures to your coloring. And also try simplifying your coloring more as well. You're style is already cartoony and flat already so I think a more simple color scheme would help make your characters my dynamic. and lastly you have a lot of points of shine in your character's hair and like i said earlier, simplifying things like leaving one shine to her hair i think would look better and won't over complicate it. but awesome work, you stay on the grind and pump out a LOT of drawings dude. i can tell you're motivated and like i said i think you got a cool style your developing so keep up the good work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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lol thanks! what is your character for? a story or manga your making?
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Hehe she was drawing my character. I like what you said though. Good points all around.
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thank you so very much! your review was very helpful!
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no problem pal! and keep up the good
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unbelievable beautiful, Ā
You have really done a good job Ā
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aww thanks so very much!!Ā Ā
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OMG she looks so cute. I needed another full body reference of her too. This is really awesome. Great work.
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thankss! and your welcome
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hehe i can't wait for the rest of the bits. Hehehehe i just made a funny reference.
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haha lol cant wait to get started on them to lol
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i mean the rest of your xmas pics and such. also angel zephi should be up by tomorrow tops.
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oh awesome i wonder what she looks like cant wait to see
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hehehe oh yeah.
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