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Published: 2012-01-09 13:23:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 2206; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 11
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trying to get fancy with the layouts. i read a lot of marvel (and a little DC)prev:[link]
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hehe take a look in marvel wolverine
the best layouts
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love the action in the pose on the bottom panel ~
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Gotta agree with the above post, although even the shading could use a bit of an improvement. Maybe you could smoothen the shading (pencil lines are so very visible) and use even darker tones of gray.. almost black. What I really like thought, and why I wanted to take a closer look to the drawing, is the last panel. Composition, pose and her fierce expression all work extremely well in it. Nice job and keep it up
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somehow this page lacks dynamic movement.
but the shading is great.
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ill strive for more dynamism going forward
thanx for specific feedback. deviants these days are often too nice to critique
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amen.. far too many trolls on here >__>
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