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Battledroidunit047 [2017-10-01 18:20:57 +0000 UTC]

What a ranter...

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Lemniskate [2013-10-15 20:58:37 +0000 UTC]

Danarin needs to chill. That attitude won't help anyone.

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BTFly009 In reply to Lemniskate [2013-10-17 11:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Some people can't control themselves ...

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TCHaerdth [2013-10-15 19:27:31 +0000 UTC]

To help out on this one hon <3


"Do you heard the latest news" in english would be "Did you hear the latest news."


Do being present tense "I need to do this quick."


Did being past tense "I did that earlier"


Heard is used like this: "I heard about that earlier" or "we heard about it" where as if the character is asking someone about it they'd ask "Did you hear about the new rule?"


I hope this helps out hon I have to admit even with your permission I still feel weird correcting you on your english D: but man this mech is throwing a major tantrum! Kinda along those lines of he doesn't feel humans need to be scared of them and therefore cannot understand that they actually are. That it's actually natural for humans to blame things on what they're afraid of.


Lookit what you're doing >/ you're making me want to write about something like this with a whole batch of OC's both human, 'bot, and 'con alike! XD tisk tisk! Inspiring people how could you? XD

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BTFly009 In reply to TCHaerdth [2013-10-17 11:38:50 +0000 UTC]

I feel happy and honored to awaken these feelings in you. ^^ It was not my intention do something that would can be an inspiration for someone. I consider this a beautiful thing. Β 
The interaction between humans and bots is a vast and fertile field of ideas. The situations are endless and I'd love to read your stories and get to know your Ocs. ^ __ ^Β  Β 

Ah, don't need to feel weird with the fixes. I really need help and thanks for the explanation, too! This was also a great help to me. Β 

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TCHaerdth In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-19 00:50:22 +0000 UTC]

See I've been toying with the idea of what would happen after the war and all. I mean earth is a place that seems to always have energon, so I don't think the Autobots or Decepticons would leave it be. So it'd make sense to have diplomatic relations. The idea came to me that a trade of knowledge would be a good idea so the Cybertronian delegation team up with the United Nations to make a University where bots and humans work next to one another.


My fanfics never live long though XD So I might leave it alone lol!


As for the examples, examples help with understanding. It'd be rather rude of me not to show you why the english language uses words in the way it does.

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BTFly009 In reply to TCHaerdth [2013-10-20 01:18:52 +0000 UTC]

This main idea can yield many interesting situations! A fanfic not need to be long, you could write short stories addressing this exchange of knowledge and everything that can come with this integration.

yes, the examples complete the explanation. ^ ^

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TCHaerdth In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-20 18:59:34 +0000 UTC]

XD I'm a bit addicted to writing long pieces, after getting my degree in writing it's hard for me not to write at length XD


^_^

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BTFly009 In reply to TCHaerdth [2013-10-21 21:08:20 +0000 UTC]

Then try to write short chapters. Many chapters but short. I wanna read it! ^__^

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TCHaerdth In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-27 01:39:14 +0000 UTC]

I'll think about it, as it stands I have a lot of work I need to get caught up on art wise D: a couple gifts, a trade, and then a personal piece of mine.

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BTFly009 In reply to TCHaerdth [2013-10-31 20:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Ok, but do not give up on him! ^ __ ^

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ChibiBug [2013-10-15 18:13:05 +0000 UTC]

Danarin is a beautiful bot even though he's angry!

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BTFly009 In reply to ChibiBug [2013-10-17 11:42:22 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha! Danarin is a fembot.... XDΒ  Now she will get more angry! Β XD

I tell my friends that lipstick is important .... Β  XDΒ Β  Β 

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ChibiBug In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-17 19:06:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh, gosh, I feel like such an idiot now!

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BTFly009 In reply to ChibiBug [2013-10-17 20:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha! No, no! Don't feel it, dear!Β  I know is hard to see that Danarin is fembot. ^^

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Misstridd [2013-10-15 15:18:38 +0000 UTC]

Ah...Danarin you're very nervous :S

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BTFly009 In reply to Misstridd [2013-10-17 11:43:37 +0000 UTC]

She can't control yourself.Β  Β Β  XD

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Shikutoki [2013-10-15 14:44:26 +0000 UTC]

oh wow Danarin is realy pissed of Β 
i could understand *sigh*

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BTFly009 In reply to Shikutoki [2013-10-17 11:45:14 +0000 UTC]

She doesn't know human behavior enough to understand why they are accusing the bots ... (Β  or don't want to know ...) ^^"

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Shikutoki In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-17 13:43:44 +0000 UTC]

thats bad and sadΒ 

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BTFly009 In reply to Shikutoki [2013-10-17 20:34:10 +0000 UTC]

Yes, this happen in our people too.Β  =/

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