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Kaliko08 [2013-12-19 01:57:13 +0000 UTC]

O.O uuhh....

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Asvoria1 [2013-10-24 00:36:15 +0000 UTC]

In the last panel, you could have Lanyse say "Enough filling my audial sensors with slag!"

*Frag* Is generally used to describe or insult beings. Example: "What a fragger."

*Frag* is also commonly used as a term of surprise, example: "What the frag are you doing?"

*Slag* is used to describe almost anything, examples: "What the slag!?" "What a slagger!" "I've had enough of your slag!"

not to be confusing, but this is what I have seen in almost every single fan-fiction I have ever read, and what you wrote doesn't sound quite right (to me). Feel free to ignore this, I just thoughtΒ it might be useful

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Battledroidunit047 In reply to Asvoria1 [2017-10-01 18:22:51 +0000 UTC]

Scrap works too.

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millylove1098 In reply to Asvoria1 [2013-11-01 00:37:51 +0000 UTC]

Frag is the official replacement now, Hasbro didn't realise Slag was actually offensive in Britain and Australia. But honestly (Coming from a Brit) we couldn't care less.

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Asvoria1 In reply to millylove1098 [2013-11-02 18:43:37 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I wasn't aware of that. Do you know why it's offensive?

I'll remember for future reference

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millylove1098 In reply to Asvoria1 [2013-11-02 22:46:49 +0000 UTC]

It's slang for a Cheap Prostitute. It can still be used in the G1 continuity for consistency, and no Cartoons will be altered, but from Prime onwards, it's Scrap, Frag and any other Offensive sounding mechanical terms.

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Asvoria1 In reply to millylove1098 [2013-11-04 02:08:03 +0000 UTC]

Ah, okay. I can see why that would be considered offensive. Thanks for the info

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millylove1098 In reply to Asvoria1 [2013-11-04 22:09:43 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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BTFly009 In reply to Asvoria1 [2013-10-26 15:10:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm vey confuse now.... really...Β  ^^""""

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Asvoria1 In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-27 18:24:15 +0000 UTC]

sorry... not sure how else to explain it though

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BTFly009 In reply to Asvoria1 [2013-10-29 22:36:20 +0000 UTC]

Ok... ^^""

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Notestryder [2013-10-22 17:06:58 +0000 UTC]

Ah, that last panel is a lot softer on the eyes now. I was quite shocked that Lanyse such a strong curse word, since I didn't think it suits coming from a Transformer's voicebox.

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But I think that's just because I flinch every time *anyone* uses profanity *rubs back of head*

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I'm off to read the new pages!

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raphiesgirl1 In reply to Notestryder [2013-12-10 19:20:15 +0000 UTC]

me too...

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BTFly009 In reply to Notestryder [2013-10-26 15:09:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh, sorry about that but Lanyse use this words when she very angry... She is very self controlled but sometimes, someone irritate her and... you saw... ^^"""

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millylove1098 In reply to Notestryder [2013-10-23 20:51:46 +0000 UTC]

You have Me to thank for the Cybertronian Cursing....

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millylove1098 [2013-10-16 21:21:33 +0000 UTC]

Maybe 'Fill my audio sensors with Frag' would be more Cybertronian.

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BTFly009 In reply to millylove1098 [2013-10-17 10:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you! I was uncomfortable with this phrase! I had no idea to write it otherwise. I love your suggestion!

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millylove1098 In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-19 17:47:20 +0000 UTC]

It's a Line I've noticed in fanfiction or two, Frag is one of the strongest Cybertronian curses we know.

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BTFly009 In reply to millylove1098 [2013-10-20 00:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Interesting!

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millylove1098 In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-20 01:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Yep. There's a less harsh one which is 'Scrap'. It's practically Arcee's catchphrase in Prime.

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BTFly009 In reply to millylove1098 [2013-10-21 20:53:11 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha! Ok... ^^

No, no ....Lanyse would use the term "frag" ...Β she isn't as soft when angry. XD

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millylove1098 In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-21 21:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Yep. I think it's just ArceeΒ  saying what comes to mind. She's a bit of a rust-mouth.

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BTFly009 In reply to millylove1098 [2013-10-22 11:29:36 +0000 UTC]

Humm.. like Lanyse... XD

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millylove1098 In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-23 20:55:43 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, yes. Hey, I just thought of a handwave for the dodgy grammar in some of the Cybertronians' speech. They can all be excused as English is their second language.

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BTFly009 In reply to millylove1098 [2013-10-26 15:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Yes, but I think they can learn faster than us....well, slangs are always been a trouble... XD

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millylove1098 In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-26 17:58:28 +0000 UTC]

They're not going to be fluent though. If you notice, the one thing that stands out with them in the Cartoons is their speech patterns, Optimus never uses Contractions, some of them use a certain set of words or use the same adjectives over and over.

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BTFly009 In reply to millylove1098 [2013-10-26 22:14:59 +0000 UTC]

It's true, now that you said that ... I had not noticed this detail.

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millylove1098 In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-26 22:52:39 +0000 UTC]

They'll also occasionally be confused by a word, then a few episodes later someone will start using that word.

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Lemniskate [2013-10-15 21:02:51 +0000 UTC]

Depending on what sort of bot Danarin is, this could go interesting ways...
Danarin as a Decepticon, out for revenge...
Danarin actually threatening huamns, or kidnapping Mindy...

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BTFly009 In reply to Lemniskate [2013-10-17 11:09:37 +0000 UTC]

^^

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TCHaerdth [2013-10-15 19:34:15 +0000 UTC]

I realllly hope the girl couldn't hear what he was saying. *I* started blushing pretty furiously and don't blame Lanyse for slapping him at all! Oh my gosh if I were trying to show someone that they don't need to be afraid or embarrassed around my people I certainly wouldn't want someone coming up and spouting off like that!


At the rate he's going he's only justifying the human race's fear of them, or purely making it even moreΒ awkward! Man >.<; If I were in the girl's shoes I would have excused myself and gone home right then and there if I was able to hear what he was saying. Talk about embarrassing. As if humans can help their own biology!


Love the gestures and the implied movements! And especially the expressions! Keep up the great work

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BTFly009 In reply to TCHaerdth [2013-10-17 11:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Mindy didn't understood a word because she was speaking in Cybertronian language. But even not understanding what is being said, we can understand the anger by the way you talk.
For this reason she looked uncomfortable. I'd be uncomfortable too.
Glad you're enjoying the story! ^ __ ^Β  Β 

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TCHaerdth In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-19 00:50:59 +0000 UTC]

PHEW I'm glad she couldn't understand ._.; she'd probably have died from embarrassment! She'll know the other is angry, but thankfully not about what!


I really am! Keep up the awesome work

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BTFly009 In reply to TCHaerdth [2013-10-20 01:39:51 +0000 UTC]

Danarin would be very cruel and rude if she said everything in the language of Mindy. I think Lanyse would not let her speak even half of what she spoke. ^^"Β 

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TCHaerdth In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-20 18:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeaaahhhh ._.;;; I think Lanyse would have either slapped Danarin before they got so far, or picked Mindy up and ran out of the train!

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BTFly009 In reply to TCHaerdth [2013-10-21 21:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Probably she would do both! XD

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TCHaerdth In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-27 01:39:37 +0000 UTC]

I don't blame her! XD

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Topkicker26 [2013-10-15 15:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah bitch slap Danarin!

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BTFly009 In reply to Topkicker26 [2013-10-17 11:09:07 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Topkicker26 In reply to BTFly009 [2013-10-18 00:44:31 +0000 UTC]

XDD

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Shikutoki [2013-10-15 14:47:52 +0000 UTC]

oh wow Β O.O
yup slaping is good to stop the anger and bring back to normal Β 

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BTFly009 In reply to Shikutoki [2013-10-17 11:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Yes, some people need this. Β Β  XD

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