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Published: 2010-03-16 16:06:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 173273; Favourites: 1000; Downloads: 4426
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Ok this is my 1st full colour TG sequence, and my 1st time trying cell shading so please let me know how i did on those fronts.This is a guy TGing onto peach when he puts on a crown.
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You predicted the toadette super crown..
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In away, I guess I did
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...why did you just give me a link to my DA page?
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Cool sequence. I'm not a fan of TG for the most part, and I know this is an earlier work, but I like the subtle changes made as the guy falls/TGs. The legs are a bit long in the fourth panel as earlier mentioned, but that aside it's well drawn. It's clear, precise, and gets the TG across well in 6 panels.
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hey thanks! now that's critique i can appreciate thanks a lot!
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very good work but, to keep with my habit, why did he put on a crown anyway?
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the original idea was that it was a plastic party crown
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thanks. and thanks for the fave
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love this. Princess Peach TFs and TGs are always a personal favourite.
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no problem, and thanks for the fave!
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yay, thanks. and thanks for the fave!
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Thanks, and thanks for the watch
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Hmm composition and coloring wise it's verry well done. The clothing change is also well executed. HOWEVER, being honest in my critiques, teh 4th panle has a problem in proportions. I know s/he's falling and her legs are going forward, however compairing it with the last two panles, the legs are disproportionantly large (especialy since they're, perspective wise, actually closer in the last two), and the torso is disproportionantly small, despite being roughly the same distance, if not further away, in the last two panles. Still, besides this one perspective scale error, it is a very high quality sequence and you should feel proud of this acomplishment. It's better than anything I could ever hope to do.
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ah, well thank you. and thanks for and actual critique rather than "it's cool" as a few people i've shown it has said. thanks again.
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When sombody asks for my honest opinion, I give it. But really, the piece is very high quality. As my only talent lies in writing, I probably am not the best judge of visual art, but I do study enough to understand theory, even if I can't perform it well myself.
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Just being honest about my thoughts and my credentials. A critique is only as good as the honesty and quality of the person who performs it. Lord knows I learned THAT firsthand in English paper peer reviews.
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Yeah, who knew so manny retards could get into college? Would it kill them to give me one half-way competant partner?
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Peer editing can get annoying. Especially when you're one of the only ones who actually tries to make it better. One time in an essay I knew I had a few problems with but couldn't fix... I had no problems according to my editor.
(This is one long comment by my standards)
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Sometimes people set standards for themselves too high, they're their own worst critic.
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Yeah probably but who doesn't know how to make a compleate sentance by then?
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It's really really bad. Still, I can take pride in supiriority by default.
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just don't let pride transform into arrogance.
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I"m sorry I couldn't hear you over the sound of the construction of my fifty foot statue, what where you saying?
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Alright, now then if you'll excuse me, I need to finish erecting my statue of Jesus.
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Ah but their's is thirty feet, this is fifty feet. And while theirs is over a cliff, mine will be much more noticeable.
*meanwhile in DC*
Obama: Why is thier a statue of the profet Jesus on top of the Lincon Memorial?
Secret Service Dude: Um, profit sir?
Obama: Muslim.
SSD: Ah right....I should do somthing about that shouldn't I.
Obama: Yes, yes you should.
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Now if you'll excuse me, I'm off to put a sixty foot one on Big Ben!
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