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Published: 2010-10-03 18:34:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 231; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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     what? you're not supposed to eat children. that's unheard of. but i haven't had a cigarette in weeks, & here i am, meat spilling from my mouth, blood dribbling from my lips, hands covered in flesh that isn't my own, little hands feet legs ears on the ground around me.

     the meat isn't really any different from cow meat or anything, though it is a little more tender. i can understand it though, i'm sure children haven't gone through enough stimulation or whatever. but the meat, the flesh, it's like chewing a warm plum - the skin is slightly harder than the muscle & the muscle is kind of like really tender steak. really expensive, tender steak. a little chewy, yet thick & satisfying. when i was eating the underside of the left forearm, i managed to pull some veins & it was like rough spaghetti noodles mixed with the carni.

     the tendons are something different, i haven't really eaten them, it's a lot like the tendons in chicken wings or a really shitty piece of steak - really chewy, next to no taste, it kind of grosses me out. so, when i got to the elbow, i kind of gnawed my way around it all.

     once i got to the ribs, it was really fun. i mean, i had to crack the sternum, so you know, imagine having to break open a crab to get to the meat. except instead of a crab it's a child. eating the meat from each individual rib was exactly like what you'd imagine, but the meat wasn't cooked. personally, i like the warmth of the fresh meat, but you know. to each his own.

     the blood was incredibly enjoyable, but the smell is hardly present since there's so much. i'm still kind of flooded with the smell of skin & the smell of meat. but anyway, the blood is really warm & sticky, so it's almost like really thick grape juice or maybe sharp tasting orange juice. actually, it tastes a lot like orange juice, except the smell is darker & it's warmer & it tastes a little more like old pennies than orange juice.

   i was starting to finish, most of the meat cleaned off of bone (minus the genitalia) & i began to feel a little weak. like, have you ever felt that craving for a cigarette? where you're just sitting in your couch & all of a sudden, that craving comes, you see your lighter but you don't have any cigarettes, & you just have this immense hunger. i looked at the bones & tendons & blood & tiny bits of flesh that surrounded me. my stomach growled. my chest felt a tug. i needed more. i must feed more. i must feed more. i must feed more.
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Comments: 5

WordAsylum [2010-11-17 07:10:07 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty hardcore! Great job of evoking creeped out emotions >w<

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Cajek [2010-10-24 15:54:28 +0000 UTC]

"imagine having to break open a crab to get to the meat. except instead of a crab it's a child."

That reviewer person obviously doesn't understand the joy of eating chil'ren.

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AlleronxVintros [2010-10-04 19:38:00 +0000 UTC]

Ah, you're always so adorably gory. I dunno how that works but damned I'm glad you're back!

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silvicultrix [2010-10-03 19:02:31 +0000 UTC]

So because I'm a poor shlub who lacks a premium account, here are my two cents.

I actually don't have a problem with the subject matter, in and of itself. Good art can gracefully explore the extreme and taboo. It certainly comes off as if you're doing this more to try and disgust the reader than try to explore any sort of moral subtlety but if I'm mistaken--

--here's my beef (so to speak) with this piece: apart from the shock value, why should we care? Literature is driven by conflict. It doesn't have to be external-- it can be an intellectual, psychological or emotional warring (for which a piece about cannibalism is definitely ripe), but it HAS TO BE THERE in order to keep interest. Once I got past the inital grossness of the physical description of the scene (which you DID do a very good job with, by the way)... I was a little bored. The gross factor can't carry the piece. It has interesting potential as a character study and the beginnings of a premise, and your command of specific, vivid language is great, but in order to take the next step with this, I think there has to be more.

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bucketsofclass In reply to silvicultrix [2010-10-05 20:54:26 +0000 UTC]

the point behind it was kind of a dude just sittin' around, eating someone. the point was that there was supposed to be a casual-ness, probably the lack of emotion or whatever that you pointed out.

also, i wanted a critique just for the fuck of it.

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