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ForThe second part of intro story for this contest
Part 2)
Český překlad:
Algain: (zametá ve stáji)
Alva: (nervozně hrabe do země v boxu)
Algain: Hej, Alvo. Uklidni se, holka... Já vím, že se nudíš, ale musíš zůstat v teplém a čistém místě. Neboj se, brzo se zase vrátíš na pastvu.
Alva: (nervozně škube hlavou)
Algain: ...Co se děje, holka? Co tě tak znervózňuje? (koukne se na kýbl opřený o box opodál, ke kterému Alva otáčela hlavu) ...Mm? Tohle? Proč ti vadí ten kýbl? (zvedne kýbl a spatří na zemi mrtvého potkana) Svatá matko- ...Jak se to sem dostalo? Asi jsem to přehlédl.
Alva: (nervózně pozoruje Algaina)
Algain: Je to v pořádku, Alvo. Je to jen mrtvý potkan. Hned se toho zbavím.
Alva: (použije farroskou magii)
(díky magii od Alvy jde vidět temná aura kolem těla mrtvého potkana)
Algain: Matko Antharijská! Démon!
(Algain doběhl za Bughs)
Algain: Bughs! V naší stáji je Rey!
Bughs: Rey? To je nesmysl. Co jsi viděl?
Algain: (táhne za ruku Bughs do stáje) Dobrá, ukážu ti co mám na mysli.
Bughs: P-Počkej, neřekla jsem, že ti nevěřím! Jen si myslím, že se nemůžou do našeho světa dostat jen tak snadno.
(Algain a Bughs jsou ve stáji, stojí u těla potkana)
Algain: Tohle.
Bughs: ...Je to jen mrtvá myš.
Algain: To je jeden z Reyových triků. Můžou si z umírajícího těla udělat hnízdo. A potom čekají na tělo smrtelníka ze kterého můžou krást živou energii.
Alva: (začne se nervózně vspínat)
Algain: A když mají dostatek energie, tak můžou -
(do Algaina vletí temná energie z mrtvého potkana a Algain omdlí)
Bughs: (otočí se za zvukem a spatří Algaina na zemi) Můj hrdino...
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Comments: 38
Efirende [2016-01-03 20:04:51 +0000 UTC]
Mno som zvedavá I have an army od experts in fighting with demons
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BUGHS-22 In reply to Efirende [2016-01-03 21:52:40 +0000 UTC]
DD jo tak to je super. Je to právě pro tuhle příležitost, nakreslit zápas proti démonům.
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Efirende In reply to BUGHS-22 [2016-01-03 21:54:50 +0000 UTC]
Ako keby si ich v minulosti užili málo ale nenechajú si ujsť žiadnu príležitosť
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BUGHS-22 In reply to Efirende [2016-01-03 22:06:12 +0000 UTC]
Tak chápu XDD ale chci vidět ty battle formy mountů :333
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Efirende In reply to BUGHS-22 [2016-01-03 22:10:15 +0000 UTC]
Nemaj boj predvedú sa v plnej paráde
všetci
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BUGHS-22 In reply to Shadreym [2016-01-03 21:51:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^v^ Next part is finished.
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oreana [2016-01-03 01:39:09 +0000 UTC]
XDD Poor, poor, hero...I love how expressive Bughs' ears are in the last panel. It cracks me up all the more with what she's saying. You did such an awesome job with this, lovely! I cannot wait to see more~!
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BUGHS-22 In reply to oreana [2016-01-03 21:51:41 +0000 UTC]
Hehe ^^ Bughs' dancing ears
Thank you very much, dear ^v^ I am happy you like it!
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CharleetheCat-Bat [2016-01-02 21:23:28 +0000 UTC]
Demon possesion!! Ah, I wish to know where this is going, Bughs, why the cliffhangers? ;w;
But besides that, it's very interesting, especially due to how Alva could sense it, since I think animals can sense... um... I don't remember what it's called but things that aren't on the material, so I like that touch.
...And Bughs is so sarcastic, I love it!
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BUGHS-22 In reply to CharleetheCat-Bat [2016-01-03 21:51:05 +0000 UTC]
Hah I am sorry ^^" it was too long for one page so I had to separate it ^^
Yes, the farrosian horse breed is said they are magical horses used to fight with demons so I thought they also could sense demons better than other animals.
LOL Bughs the sarcastic bunny ^w^
Thanks a lot ^^
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CharleetheCat-Bat In reply to BUGHS-22 [2016-01-04 09:50:52 +0000 UTC]
Ah, it's fine. ^^ makes it more interesting since it leaves you to your imagination to what could happen.
Ah, that makes sense now. I do hope Algain get's some help. X'D
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G-e-o-L-o-g-i-c-a-l [2016-01-02 20:58:47 +0000 UTC]
At first I thought this would have something to do with the new star Wars movie- Rey is the name of one of the main characters.
This was a fun read
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BUGHS-22 In reply to G-e-o-L-o-g-i-c-a-l [2016-01-02 21:35:39 +0000 UTC]
Oh is it?? XDD That's cool Rey is my character from stories since 2005. At first he was Ray but then it made me mad it is confusing czech pronunciation so I changed it to Rey. The same happened with a character Grey as he was Gray at first. But I try to make my characters names being pronounced naturally in czech language so I mostly avoid english words.
Thank you, I am glad you liked it ^^
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G-e-o-L-o-g-i-c-a-l In reply to BUGHS-22 [2016-01-07 03:46:30 +0000 UTC]
I see! I It's a cool name.
Np
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FartingVampirePirate In reply to BUGHS-22 [2016-01-02 22:12:23 +0000 UTC]
If you don't mind my asking, what makes Ray different to pronounce from Rey, and the same for grey and gray? I am from England so English is my first and only language, so I am curious.
Also, great story! I can't wait to see what Rey has got in store for them!
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BUGHS-22 In reply to FartingVampirePirate [2016-01-02 22:31:42 +0000 UTC]
It's because every language has different pronaunciation of alphabet. And how we pronounce letters from the alphabet we don't change it according to word build.
So for example, in English letter A is pronounced as "ay" but in czech "ah". And "E" is english pronounced as "ee" and in czech it's "eh". And in word Ray or Gray in english is pronounced the same like in czech is pronounced Rey and Grey. Gray in czech would sound like Gr-I(like the word "I"). And that sounds weird. I know, complicated bullcrap...
Thanks a lot ^^ I am pleased you like it!
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FartingVampirePirate In reply to BUGHS-22 [2016-01-03 10:26:02 +0000 UTC]
That is pretty neat, thank you.
And you're welcome!
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BUGHS-22 In reply to LysallArt [2016-01-02 19:00:25 +0000 UTC]
Brzy vysvětlím ^^
Děkuju mockrát
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prte1 [2016-01-02 17:11:29 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, to bude zajímavý příběh!
Moc se těším na pokračování
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Irsibil [2016-01-02 17:01:46 +0000 UTC]
Chudinka Alva, ten vyděšený výraz...
Těším se na pokračování
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BUGHS-22 In reply to Irsibil [2016-01-02 18:59:45 +0000 UTC]
No jo no ^^" věřím, že farrosi vycítí, když je na světě něco, co tam nepatří.
Děkuju ^v^
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Hoseki-Danzu [2016-01-02 16:48:26 +0000 UTC]
"My hero..."
Nice
I look forward to the second part
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BUGHS-22 In reply to Hoseki-Danzu [2016-01-02 18:58:50 +0000 UTC]
XDD now I really doubt he could protect me if I was in a problem
Hehe but this was different situation I guess ^^ ... I hope...
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