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Commanding Protest Moves The Absinthe.By Rachael
A ponderous altitude on contiguous minutes passing on snooze
Grown on wanted apparatus
Prevailed on terms for bags of placed faces that have no headlights
On separate highway laughs
(Your face is on fire)
quick nervousness seems to escape as a whole form of price and policy
Consume a resource
Interest a thirst
A degrade of conceptual acts hidden for self-defeat
Tire tracks
Sets apart a non-dimensional pin point of dealing with control
Designed crashes replicated by daily rates of hedonism in cautious social selection
A stigma in a cadaverous state
stolen by a blood stream of prospective effects
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Comments: 8
laura-beth467 [2007-08-16 08:24:05 +0000 UTC]
Yes, the complexity astounds me. It is a good thing, but it makes me feel stupid, lol.
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BulletProofPrincess In reply to laura-beth467 [2007-08-18 04:58:39 +0000 UTC]
I love that my poetry is complex ,but I don't like that it makes
you feel stupid.
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BulletProofPrincess In reply to televisionfission [2007-07-27 19:10:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm hoping that's a good thing
because I believe it is.
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Engel08 [2007-07-26 15:49:46 +0000 UTC]
Lovely set of words. I sometimes use the word degrade quite often when describing nature and human nature within its own interaction. I did a porno-figure drawing and titled it Degradation of nature.
And nothing could change the title!
Anyways. I love this piece as I do most of your others.
And although it never visited the theme of the first few lines it was quite the flowing piece. And strangely did not leave the topic.
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BulletProofPrincess In reply to Engel08 [2007-07-27 19:07:57 +0000 UTC]
I often use the word degrade when talking about mainstream rap.
But I'm glad you like this poem.
And I'm also glad nothing would change your title.
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Unclrenzo [2007-07-26 01:13:37 +0000 UTC]
Okay, first of all, I believe I've already used all the adjectives I can think of to describe your work. So...I'm just going to not say anything and it.
And, last but not least, here's a
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