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Check out the others! (If a chracter is not on the list it'll mean that character doesn't have a ref yet)Undyne
Gaster
Asriel
Chara: **you're here!
Frisk
Sans(Anti)
Script
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Plz comment! it gives me DETERMINATION
(tho comment what you think sbout the character,not the art itself,unless you have something positive to say! So no constructive criticism plz,sorry,just can't take that atm)
also the chara in the middle is part of an arttrade with animegirl77 (she did a sketch and i'd do lineart and color)
BIO
name: chara/Kirai
age: 500/600 (stopped aging at 7)
species: human/black magic made demon
powers: blood magic,this means hse can control someone's blood,meaning she can kill you without touching you.
weaknesses: same as Balance,chara does have a weakness to light,yet it's not that bad,more like she can't handle direct sunlight. Cause she always weared sunglasses her eyes aren't used to it.
Also,when she gets scared she looses control of her magic,this cause her arms to fall off. (Since they are prosthetic and are controlled by her magic)
and has an allergy to Chocolate. (Poor chara) or well...more like an allergy to milk.
fears: the humans finding her,Balancetale 0.0 Frisk,and most of all,Asriel dying.
hp: 999
atk: 998
Personality: chara has more of a "Frisk personality" she absolutely doesn't like to fight,but she is handy with a knife. She can be impatient which makes her snap at people sometimes. (I'm super bad with describing personalities! Sorry!)
Demon form
Chara's demon form got created when she was brought back to life (don't know what this means? Read the huge story below and you'll understand)
it has a mind of it's own,which Chara simply calls "Akuma" normally Chara has her demon side under control,yet when she's experiencing extreme negative emotions,Akuma can break free and do whatever the hell they feel like,normally this only lasts for a couple of minutes. Yet Akuma's powers are way stronger then Chara's and they have NO fear since it "isn't their body anyways." If chaar dies,Akuma will just find a new host.
NOW! Brace yourselves for the huge history i wrote!
here it is!!
(Also,thank animegirl77 for reminding me to say that Chara always had a little magic with her,so she could 'grab' little things with magic,but not for too long/heavy objects won't do)
It was when humans and monsters still lived together on the surface. Were they allies? Absolutely not. They hated each other. They worked with territories. Neither dared to cross the other's territory. That would lead to immediate death. Monsters were peaceful while humans often had wars. If a human would kill a monster on monster territory,it would mean war between the two races. Same goes for the humans.
Things were normal until something unnatural happened.
One day a baby was born. However,the baby was born with demon eyes and hideous claws. The child was abandoned at sight by her parents and ended up in a village near Mount Ebott. These people were happy with the child,yet for the wrong reasons.
All hate,sins,misery,and sadness were to blame on this kid. It was to clear their souls,cause if the child was the embodiment of all that's evil,how could they not have pure souls?
The child got her arms chopped cause people thought they were ugly,and unnecessary.
She was also forced to wear sunglasses to hide her "devilish eyes".
Later,the name Kirai was given to the 'demon' which meant "Hate" in a faraway land.
(A/N: this later changed to "Chara" as you might have guessed)
Kirai was horrible abused and got the blame for everything. This went on for years. Scars build up on Kirai's body and without arms to defend herself she was completely helpless.
Kirai got half of her face burned when someone poured lava over it. This was meant as punishment for stepping on some rare flowers. The poor girl had tripped and landed face first in the flora.
Needless to say the people of the village weren't pleased with this.
When she had just turned seven the Inevitable happened: suicide.
Being abused all her life,she just couldn't take it anymore. Not only that,yet she felt like everything would be better with her gone. Two nighs after she turned seven she snuck out of the village,going to the ancient woods,only monsters were supposed to visit. Since people had always called her a monster it would be appropriate to end her life there. She did this by slitting her own throat with a knife she had stolen from kitchen.
The people of the village could care less,they were happy they finally got rid of the pest. Of course they couldn't kill her themselves cause that would "make their pure souls corrupt."
Many years went by,yet the magic in the woods kept the body fresh and stopped it from rotting. A young prince Asgore was taking his daily walk through the woods,but decided to take a different route for a time. He was rather shocked when he found the body of a young girl. The prince if monsters mistook this girl as one of his own. A monster. He came to the conclusion that the humans must've broken the law,and so the war. Between humans and monsters began.
Of course,he had burried the body,a flower resting on the girls chest. She now laid at the place Asgore had found her. He knew that the forest would keep the corpse fresh.
Monsters were on the winning side,that is until the humans started to use black magic. Monsters were posioned,turned to stone,or plain burned to death. Earth's strongest magicians came together and banished monster kind to the underground. They created a barrier that would only be broken if the monsters somehow got their hands on 5 human souls.
An insane amount of magic was used to make this barrier. Magic sparks flew everywhere,it was black magic however.
Some sparks found their way into the ancient,and long abandoned forest. The ground opened at the places corpses lied. Mostly of animals since humans didn't come there,and when monsters died they'd turn to dust,so there wasn't much to burry on the monster side.
However there was one sentient being,one that had been burried there by the prince himself. It was the 'demon' the 'unwanted child'. Magic had filled her veins,giving her supernatural abilities,and giving her new life.
It had created what was taken from her long ago. Arms. They were like a doll's but worked with magic. When she finally opened her eyes she was shocked to see the world in thermal vision. The black magic had messed with her sight.
(A/N: thermal vision is This
Kirai was even more surprised that she now had arms,but quickly found our that they would fall off if she didn'g focus her magic on them. She didn't know what happened. But there was no way she was ever going back to the humans. She had heard people talk about the mysterious mountain,otherwise known as a suicide location. Feeling confident with magic flowing through her veins she wanted to finally take a look at it.
She had to go through a village on her way there,with the sunglasses still on and the sleeves covering her arms,she looked like a normal girl. Kirai asked what was going on and the people started to explain everything. After everything was explained she thanked them and got to the mountain.
Finally having reached the top,Kirai noticed that there was a hole in the middle. Wanting to take a closer look child tripped over a loose vine and fell into the darkness.
She landed on a patch of golden flowers,not long from then,she heard a voice "you must've fallen down? Haven't you?"
Kirai looked up and saw a young goatboy,worry painted on his face. He helped her up and asked her name. "Ki-...chara..." she asnwered. Not wanting to use the name the people who made her life hell gave her. The goatboy smiled "i'm Asriel."
From then on chara lived with the monsters. However. Ten years went by,and no one had aged,this meant that she wouldn't grow up and would always stay seven years old,the magic of the underground had put a stop to the aging process.
Everything went well until a another being fell down into the underground,this time,it was neither a human or a demon. And it was the biggest problem the underground would ever have.
{GOOD LORD! SAY "PEANUT" IF YOU READ ALL OF THAT}
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Comments: 96
BunMelon In reply to Orez-Suke [2017-07-07 20:03:06 +0000 UTC]
You think?
just wait till you see 0.0 frisk,who's absolutely not cute
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Orez-Suke In reply to BunMelon [2017-07-07 20:07:23 +0000 UTC]
yeah !
I saw Frisk~ (But I forgot to favourite it aaaaaaaaaaaaah XD)
I like her ! (Be cause I like the demoniac character~)
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BunMelon In reply to Orez-Suke [2017-07-07 20:10:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh absolutely,if ya have time ya should read their stories,you'll see that Frisk is alot more then a simple a demon XD
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BurgerRainbow [2017-06-18 04:24:42 +0000 UTC]
" chara has more of a "Frisk personality" she absolutely doesn't like to fight, but she is handy with a knife. She can be impatient which makes her snap at people sometimes. (I'm super bad with describing personalities! Sorry!)"
I can help you with the personality if you'd like
If you'd like to feel free to use this
Determined/Irritable/Neutral/Impatient/Skilled
How does that sound for a personality :3
(You don't have to use it)
Determined: Because Frisk Is a Determined characer
Irritable: Because they snap easily
Neutral: Because they can still snap
Impatient: They aren't the most patient
Skilled: Because they are handy with knives
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BunMelon In reply to BurgerRainbow [2017-06-19 06:57:48 +0000 UTC]
Ah thank ya u! So sorry that i was late!
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BurgerRainbow In reply to BunMelon [2017-06-19 07:26:29 +0000 UTC]
Anytime :3! And you weren't late at all!
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BunMelon In reply to BurgerRainbow [2017-06-19 14:41:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank yu again! You wre very kind!
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BunMelon In reply to BurgerRainbow [2017-06-21 10:40:47 +0000 UTC]
I'll add it as soon as i can
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BunMelon In reply to BurgerRainbow [2017-07-27 12:56:05 +0000 UTC]
Ah sorry i still haven't added this yet! I've been busy!
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BunMelon In reply to BurgerRainbow [2017-06-22 08:11:10 +0000 UTC]
Yes!
(i'll add it when i get better)
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Terra-universe In reply to BunMelon [2017-05-21 22:56:16 +0000 UTC]
dang that was a long story though, very well done XD
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Zontickles [2017-05-17 07:44:23 +0000 UTC]
PEANUT!!! AMAZING!!! Love the backstory and the BIO!! And I absolutely LOVE CHARA YAY!!! Brilliant work!
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Constructio [2017-05-16 09:32:36 +0000 UTC]
Honestly, the way you described her personality there was just fine. Describing personality as a whole can be a bit tricky without showing it via dialogue or action. So, once again, you did fine there.
Aaaahhh, Akuma is like Silk, but WORSE, because at least with Silk, the only thing Annie had against her was that if she died, then Silk died, and Silk didn't want to die.
But, with Akuma, that factor is not even an issue. I would hate to be in Chara's position. Even the original Doctor Jekyll and Mr Hyde, if one died, then they both died, this is like a level up for the evil half!
Chopping the arms off of a baby *slow clap* That's some gooood eatin' ...Oh, dear, I forgot that these aren't titans who just regenerate their arms and legs...
Step on a flower and lose half of your face? Man, Mother Nature can be a bitch.
Wait a minute, how did she slit her throat without arms? I mean, it can be done if she knows how to us her feet, or if she throws herself on the blade.... ouch
Ooooooohh, dear, that's a hell of a way for the war to start.... via a little girl's suicide. BUT, You remind me why I do like the way you do things, I like darker stuff
Good job having that little part where Kirai gets caught up with what happened. Little things like that help answer big questions, like "How does the character know this?"
Aaah, so that's how you got her the Chara name.
Also, great detail with the knife wound bleeding in demon form
Hmmm, you didn't mention Akuma in the story, BUT I did love the meeting between Chara and Asriel
Overall analysis: Anna, there were very few errors in this, in fact, I will say that there were virtually none. At this point, hell, the story looks as good as if I had written it. There is a story with dialogue, and then there is a story without dialogue, in what I call a "Storybook" format. This, is honestly amazing and the fact that you were able to type something this long and this well shows what you can do when you're passionate about something.
From now on, you are hereby capable of writing a story. Yes, I certainly won't mind still writing stories here and there, BUT, your writing is not shitty, it's good! This is a damn good example of it!
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BunMelon In reply to Constructio [2017-05-16 09:40:25 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhh thank you! I'm so happy you like it!
(I was reading this in class and was literally beaming from happiness and kis where like "what are you smiling about?")
And yep,poor poor chara,life really was a bitch to her. And honestly still is.
Would you want to give a review of Frisk too?
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Constructio [2017-05-15 21:19:34 +0000 UTC]
Woah! Dat description! Okay, gimme a good minute...
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BunMelon In reply to Constructio [2017-05-15 21:20:49 +0000 UTC]
XD
If you're done,i have another one right here:
annashingekinokoijn.deviantart…
Opinion plz XD
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Milkyshu [2017-05-15 19:14:57 +0000 UTC]
I wanna roleplay with her now, freaking adorable, yet scary
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Milkyshu In reply to BunMelon [2017-05-15 19:16:43 +0000 UTC]
If you'd like to! Please message me in notes!
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Mythicalgamer05 [2017-05-14 22:21:15 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh this is awesome!!!!!!! Omg some time we need to do a art collab! Well if yaaa want..idk... Ok I'll shut up now..
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BunMelon In reply to Mythicalgamer05 [2017-05-15 05:04:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! And sure! Just lemme finish some old work XD
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