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GlobalSupport [2018-01-03 10:03:49 +0000 UTC]

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It's really nice! I love the way she is posing and that expression on her face really fits the pose. First off i'd like to start with the purple/pink shading on her face. Whilst it is a nice touch, i think it should've been made smoother rather than the spike that you did with it as it doesn't really reflect anything and looks odd with that large gap in between the spike and the larger area of shade. Also, i believe her dress shadowing could be improved since if you look at her right shoulder (from her perspective), there is a shadow on top but the rest of the dress has no such drastic shadow. This should've atleast been on the bottom part of the dress but i don't believe it is. However this may just be my delusional self!

Hope i helped in some way and it's still a really nice piece.

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DuWolfPlague [2018-01-03 02:49:08 +0000 UTC]

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The FitnessGram™ Pacer Test is a multistage aerobic capacity test that progressively gets more difficult as it continues. The 20 meter pacer test will begin in 30 seconds. Line up at the start. The running speed starts slowly, but gets faster each minute after you hear this signal. [beep] A single lap should be completed each time you hear this sound. [ding] Remember to run in a straight line, and run as long as possible. The second time you fail to complete a lap before the sound, your test is over. The test will begin on the word start. On your mark, get ready, start.

But anyway this is nice especially the details on the character itself.

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