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Published: 2008-05-09 05:29:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1120; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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This is a manga I am currently making. It's an original story and character designs are mine.This is, Haye, the main character. I was asked by my friend if I could make a sort of poster-like page for the said story so here it is.
The manga is currently in the works... so no releases for now.
I hope you enjoy this one.
And hopefully, when we are done with it, (since it's sort of a collaborative manga--different stories) I will tell you guys where you can read it.
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Woah! You're great not only with fan art but OC's as well
She's just lovely, her eyes and hair are great. The colour choice is really good and the pose hot. xD
However, there are some minor issues that could use a little tweaking: the way her hair seems to come out of her eye is (for me at least) highly disturbing... I know some mangaka's do it like this but I've always found it very unnatural. Sorry, I'm just being honest here ^_^;
Her right shoulder is a bit odd... it looks like it has a bump on it. Also the left hand's fingers look very thin in comparison to the right hand's. What's more they are very stiff. Well... I know the pain of drawing hands myself (I couldn't do it right to save my life...). Don't worry. Your hands are still good and n+1 times better than the ones I draw... sigh.
All in all it's a lovely piece. Keep up the good work! I hope to see more OC's of your's soon.
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yeah.. left hand fingers were the problem.. but you know the drill, I was too lazy to edit it... Laziness spoils the fun.
And about the hair and eyes thing.. The hair came out as a fault. I got it too long that it covered her eyes... I didn't want to spoil the loveliness of her eyes so that's the solution I can only come up with. and again, too lazy to edit. anyway. thanks for the critique. much appreciated... maybe next time i should stop going into lazy mode.
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You're welcome
The eye problem happens to me a lot as well, when I get too 'enthusiastic' while drawing the hair
As to the laziness, I know from my own experience that sadly it always shows. However, you can't be all that lazy. The amount of inked and coloured pictures you upload shows the contrary
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Wow! This is excellent! The colors are great! And she is so beautiful! Can't wait for the manga! It sounds like its going to be great!!
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Wow thats incredible! You've overdone yourself! Wow im so impressed, she's so beautiful! The gold fits so well with the red and the detail are killing me! Her expression is very beutiful too. The brown eyes are so dark yet warm and her eyelashes are so thic and detailed that it makes her eyes almost sparkly and more warm. Though the left hand needs a little checkout for the length of the fingers in comparism, the overall (or lets just say all) is amazingly beautiful and well done. You did so much greater on the colors this time. And im not saying theyre bad at all, but theyre better and look more professional than before.
And i cant wait to read that manga! It sounds exciting, but could you perhaps tell me a bit about the plot in it? Like is there any conflicts or powers they use? Well, if you just wanna keep it a secret then you just do that 
Yah Shiro got a new avatar, in time want it lol
And Sushi makes pretty new astonishing art. Yay!
See you around Sushi, take care ^^
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thank you for the nice compliment. Yeah. the left hand middle finger was a little 'off'. But I was soo lazy at that time I decided to just let it be and not re-do it. hahaha. me and my lazy streak. Yeah, I would like to give in the plot but it's kinda top secret right now. But to hint out on it, yeah. it has some 'magi' to it but not all of them.. it's a border between reality and fantasy if you know what I mean. Anyway, thanks again, and yeah see you too, take care.
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Aah youre welcome you know. And yay for magic and "two worlds" manga plot thing 
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Wow I really like the colors and the background O_O great job 
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