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Published: 2018-04-01 23:08:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 974; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 0
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Description Inspired by a fanfiction by , which is in turn inspired by a short comic made by . It hasn't been updated in a while, but I love it, just the same.

The Jettwins find themselves trapped, frightened and unable to escape as their captor, a feral Techno-Organic Bumblebee, is blocking their only way out. All they can hope is that the others will find them...

I've never been inside of a bee hive, or inside of a comb within said hive, so I have no idea if the colors are off or not. I'm also still getting the hang of drawing characters interacting with each other physically.

Oh well. You learn as you go.



Characters belong to Hasbro.
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MOONWATCHER404 [2019-10-13 03:15:43 +0000 UTC]

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Mora0711 [2018-04-02 04:02:26 +0000 UTC]

  OMG!! That's a scene from chapter 5 of my Imma Bee fic!!

I wasn't sure if anyone was still reading it, its been so long since I got a comment on it. I've been working through a serious case of Writer's Block in an attempt at writing the next chapter. I'm almost gotten a break threw and am fleshing it out. I hope to get it posted soon.

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Burningstarlight17 In reply to Mora0711 [2018-04-02 12:51:02 +0000 UTC]

It's great to hear you haven't given up on it! The twins are some of my favorite characters, and I love how close you have them being with each other.

I reread it every once in a while, but this scene is one of my favorites. The poor things being at the mercy of Bee's mother-mode, and just that Bee continues to see them as babies. It must bother them a bit to be treated like newborn protoforms.

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Mora0711 In reply to Burningstarlight17 [2018-04-04 21:49:11 +0000 UTC]

I figure it would be a mixed bag. Sure they'll get annoyed with it some of the times, but in a future chapter I'm working out, it'll be in their favor. Plus, I don't know why, but I get the sense that one of them is a Mama's boy at spark.

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Burningstarlight17 In reply to Mora0711 [2018-04-04 21:52:40 +0000 UTC]

It'll be interesting to see what you come up with! I hope you beat that writer's block soon!

Or you can send Bee over to beat it like he did Sentinel! 😉

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MOONWATCHER404 In reply to Burningstarlight17 [2019-10-13 05:54:38 +0000 UTC]

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Burningstarlight17 In reply to MOONWATCHER404 [2019-10-13 13:12:32 +0000 UTC]

I know, the poor baby...!

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MOONWATCHER404 In reply to Burningstarlight17 [2019-10-15 01:23:19 +0000 UTC]

If I had to summarize what happens next in one word it might be oof. XD

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MOONWATCHER404 In reply to Burningstarlight17 [2019-10-13 05:53:13 +0000 UTC]

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Mora0711 In reply to Burningstarlight17 [2018-04-14 00:58:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I'm working on it, believe me. That and other chapters from other fics to try and work around it. Reading newer stuff to keep up with styles help too when I can.

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MOONWATCHER404 In reply to Mora0711 [2019-10-13 05:50:56 +0000 UTC]

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Mora0711 In reply to MOONWATCHER404 [2019-10-13 06:02:26 +0000 UTC]

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MOONWATCHER404 In reply to Mora0711 [2019-10-15 01:27:02 +0000 UTC]

Np I’ll let u know if I get one.

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MOONWATCHER404 In reply to Mora0711 [2019-10-13 03:47:07 +0000 UTC]

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Mora0711 In reply to MOONWATCHER404 [2019-10-13 05:39:34 +0000 UTC]

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MOONWATCHER404 In reply to Mora0711 [2019-10-15 01:25:14 +0000 UTC]

I finished it yesterday. XD  curse my reading speed.

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