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Published: 2008-09-14 01:14:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1854; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 100
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Yea I know bad name ...........just could not think of anything...........I do not like it and I am not happy with it........so I think it sucks big-time.............but I put it up so maybe you can help me fig what I did wrong..........PLZ HELP ME...........As always comments and advanced critiques are welcome and
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just a couple things like they said, but it looks awesome sweetie!!
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thanks lil angel that means so much to me
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Nice work Butch, yes u need to change a few things and it will be perfect...
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thanks........just not a good job by me
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Everyone is talking about the hills, and the colors, but I think they've never been out west - Those hills are 'good' they are the right color (they don't call it 'the Painted Desert' for nothing..__) ..
The issue here is the lighing and the camera angle. (I'm not being harsh- just tellin what you asked to know) - camera needs to raised and leveled - as that is how the hills image map was photographed - the lighting is next - Look at the top of the hills - your lighting isn't lighting them. So you need lighting directed to the top of the hills at the same angle as your distant light that is creating your truck and lady's shadow....
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thanks so very much...........the lighting is from a flash not the sun and the camera pov it a artist concept of mine .......but I think your right about all the other and again thanks so very much for you comment
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thanks.........got so much to learn .....long way to go for me
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The image as a whole looks great bro, perhaps just a touch more dodge and burn tools here and there.... I have never been a fan of the orange hills but that is a minor thing
Blessings
Opal
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well sis that is what they look like to my eye so I will keep orange hills will have to stay .....but your right I see now where I should have don but dodge and burn .......thanks sis
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I say, I like this as a whole, but do what you do best Butch and work on the little details. 
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thanks so very much my friend
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The cliffs look 'flat' to me. The tires were mentioned. She looks great! As does the snake...
Otherwise, pretty good.
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thanks bro .........maybe the cliffs are my prob..........
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Very post apocalyptic somehow! I think it's the cliffs. They look weird to me. I would probably try and find a background with cliffs already in it rather than use a rock prop type thing. The dog does look a little odd too, the way he's lying and the fur is a bit flat. Probably not much you can do about that though. Love her, outfit, pose, everything -yes even the hair 
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I have a long way to go to get better.....thanks so very much for the help
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I like the colors but the dog has an odd pose, he seems to me *he suffers*... 
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The truck rust textures are good.
The tires have none.
The snake looks real.
The dog does not (no balls either) 
The girls looks real, as does her outfit.
Her hair is 
Sky looks good.
Cliffs not too bad.
Eagle too orange.
Ground too fake.
Excellent POV.
Her expression a bit strange.
Lighting good.
My 
Hope this helps.
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did not see the tires till you said something
I like the dog but I see your point
and I love her hair
the Eagle needs something for sure
and the ground sucks a big one
the rest I don't see
and yes I asked and I thank you so very much for the comments it helps so much
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