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j-dawg-64 [2018-09-19 22:10:15 +0000 UTC]

The background looks nice. The stars are drawn simply, yet effectively, being of varying sizes and in different patterns. Earth looks interesting. I like the detail of the storm clouds for accuracy, though they are a bit opaque. Perhaps some gray clouds could also be mixed in with the white ones. Also, it looks like the Earth has a big hole bitten out of it. I don't know if that was intentional or not but it certainly has a potentially interesting story/reason behind it.

Anyway, on to the focus of the picture. Bubblegum and Marceline are to the right of the Earth and it is unclear whether they are very close to the Earth and on the same plane, or somewhat to the front and in the foreground or back and in the background. In any case, the pose is somewhat unique with them being stacked on top of each other but upside-down. Their breasts meet in a kind of vertical "symmetrical dock" fashion. There are some subtle differences between their figures. Bubblegum's boobs appear to be somewhat more rounded an Marceline's, who split out more in the middle. One thing I might point out here is that Bubblegum's breasts look almost upside-down from what they should be, with the way-too-small clothes going kind of the opposite way. But I may be looking at it the wrong way. The belly shapes are both fine, being nice and roundish. If you were trying to be symmetrical, the bellybutton lines are facing different directions. But this isn't really that big of a deal. It is fine if they are not facing the same way.

Lastly, on to the inset. I'm not really feeling the way the line connects to it. The planet kind of causes a problem as it's kind of in the way. In fact the inset "borders" the Earth at one part. Lack of room was a bit of a problem here. If the connecting part and the inset were a little higher it would have looked a bit better. But for a muro drawing it's not bad. More space in general would have been helpful. Another thing is the connecting part of the inset is the same color as the Earth clouds. Not a huge deal, but it could be a bit confusing. As for the inset itself, it's pretty good overall. Bubblegum looks mostly fine. Marceline looks good except the black line under her hair should probably have been drawn over with blue. They look about how blob faces should look. The angle of Marceline is kind of vertical, so maybe the space above her head should be Bubblegum's pink. Lastly, the part where they're kissing. It's a bit hard to tell where the nose, lips, and chin begin and end. The lips probably could have been a bit more pronounced, and the noses a little more consistent. I like how the flab of Bubblegum's neck is going over Marceline's here. I noticed you don't really draw eyebrows much, but you do a decent job of making expressions with the eyelashes/eyes themselves.

In conclusion, it is, all in all, a pretty good picture of this type. The figures are clear and colorful, the background is effective - detailed, but not too intrusive, and the expressions are solid. For a muro drawing, it's fairly decent, but a bit small. Although I will say you did a good job fitting so much in such a small space.

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HeavyHitterConnor [2018-09-19 17:30:44 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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shygal27 [2018-09-19 08:44:29 +0000 UTC]

Still, the best kiss ever ^w^

....still wish that series kept going TwT

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