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Published: 2012-07-27 21:57:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 437; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 4
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Description Dreaded nothing
Whips and leaves my
Head burning
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Just wait, One more
Time to see the
Strangers' smiles
Glistening
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Let me know when
You've stopped
Shedding blood
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Don't cry! Don't scream!
Our daughter has
Already been left
Misunderstood
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Oh my dear girl
Stay calm and dream
For the Great Man
Asks to meet you
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Comments: 6

jochannon [2012-07-28 05:56:57 +0000 UTC]

I like this; if you want to publish any of your works, look me up: [link]

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Bytebullet In reply to jochannon [2012-07-28 15:09:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! If you haven't already, be sure to check out my other poems "The Hiker and the Cloud" and of course Poetic Envy, since it made this poem possible.

I will definitely check out your journal about publishing

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jochannon In reply to Bytebullet [2012-07-29 10:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Will do!

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HelixHartgrove [2012-07-27 23:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. . .this obe is great. It makes a lot of sense!

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Bytebullet In reply to HelixHartgrove [2012-07-27 23:29:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Check out some of my other poems and short works if you're interested, primarily "Poetic Envy" since its success spawned this idea.

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HelixHartgrove In reply to Bytebullet [2012-07-27 23:32:23 +0000 UTC]

Sure! Alright, I will!

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