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C-A-HarlandFalling Into Starlight
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I am falling. I have been caught by a monster which cannot be seen, but for the path of destruction it carves through the cosmos. It pulls me in, and as I plummet the universe bends and folds back on itself, and for a brief moment I can see everything that is and ever was.

In the twisted relay of light I see the nebula that was my birthing ground. Its radiance surrounds me with heat and color. Bursting clouds and arching forms in writhing wings of gossamer, painted with hydrogen and illuminated from within by the glow of its children.

Mother nebula had formed me, along with my sisters, from parts of herself. Coaxing and coalescing until we were strong enough enough to shine on our own. Then she breathed into us life and our hearts began to flutter with the embers of fusion.

In our mother’s embrace, I played with my sisters, plunging into misted veils and swinging through spangled swaths of life-dust. She would tell us tales of the far reaches of the galaxy, where the giants danced and the pixies sang and all was filled with starlight.

We fed and we grew until we wore our blazing souls upon our skins. My sisters became celestial white, amorous gold and lustrous blue, but I outshone them all, growing until my heart burned crimson and dusted the cosmos with copper.

We were bright and we were strong and out light filled the void and brought the universe to life. 


When finally it was time to leave mother nebula, I brought my sisters with me, towing them along in my swinging, arcing, drifting wake. As a cluster we roamed, traversing the galactic breadths of our home. Through the dark and the cold, to the place where we could dance to the music of sprites, where the light of giants would encompass us. For though we wandered in darkness, we were beings of the light, and the light we would always seek.

Our golden sister was the first to leave us. She found for herself a child, small and rocky, misshapen and dull. But she called it a jewel and said her light in the void was enough for them both. Where we journeyed, her child could not follow, so she left our cluster and started out on her own path. We continued without her, to the place where the titans performed an eternal ballet.

My white sister, the little pearl of our cluster, was the next to depart. She met another, a speck of silver on black velvet, and the two entered into a lover’s dance. A spiraling tryst, an embrace in which they would never touch. But her dance was not for us, my last sister and I, for we were giants, and giants danced where diamond dwarfs drummed a symphony without sound.

And so we journeyed onwards, through the blackness that was made of nothing, until finally, amidst spiraling arms, we reached an endless sky filled with light. Here the giants roamed, hearts blazing gold, blue and red. Their bodies twisted, endlessly moving. Coronal arms swaying, sweeping, weaving as they twirled silken scarves of light and fire. An endless chasse in a celestial waltz. I danced among the giants, adding my own stellar flares to the cosmic display. Interspersed between us tap-danced the pixies, the diamond dwarfs that were the remnants of fallen giants. They spun faster than any of us, sending out their light in an array of bursts, each with its own song, sung for the stellar beauty it had been before.


Eons passed and still I danced, until finally, I could dance no more. My burning heart gave one last beat, one last pulse to fill the heavens with light and I shed my skin and the radiance it held. When the light faded and my heart cooled I was but a piece of myself. A crimson drop among the giants. I sought out my sister, the blue belle, but my light was so dim now that she could not see me among the brilliance of the others. Even the diamond dwarfs would not have me among their ranks, for though they were small, theirs were the hearts of titans and their light blazed across the cosmos with unmatched ardor.

I left the place where the giants danced, returning to the darkness. I willed my light to fill the void, but my heart was weak and my soul tired. I was but a speck in the blackness, and so it was that I did not see the monster approach. It’s heart swallowed light and gave none back, it was a being of pure dark and it had found me. I tried to flee but its pull was too strong, and I was too small, too faint to even call for aid. I was so dim now that none would even notice my passing, into this, the blackest of holes.

I watch the universe crease and overlap and everything is distorted. The distant giants continue to dance, their waving arms stretched from one side of the galaxy to another. I am pulled towards the monster’s maw, a pit of dark from which no light ever escapes. The edge nears and soon I will tumble over the abyss, into nothing, into darkness.

As I crest the horizon there is a warmth I did not expect. A gentle glow beckons me, then becomes brighter, stronger. It surrounds me and my soul is renewed with the radiance of a billion stars, collected over eons and kept hidden. Within the monster’s secret heart is the universe.

I am falling into starlight.



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Comments: 59

C-A-Harland In reply to ??? [2017-07-05 23:47:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it

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Sereida-Arts In reply to C-A-Harland [2017-07-08 16:59:53 +0000 UTC]

very much, yw!

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OxygenandDuchess [2017-04-26 06:45:56 +0000 UTC]

As a soon to be astronomer and long time lover of stars in general- this is gorgeous and brings a whole new meaning of stars to me. I'm so happy I stumbled upon this beautiful piece of art. Spectacular job!!!

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C-A-Harland In reply to OxygenandDuchess [2017-04-27 20:12:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you thought so. I've always loved stars too, so this was a really enjoyable piece to write.

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OxygenandDuchess In reply to C-A-Harland [2017-04-27 20:47:07 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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tech42cpu [2017-04-23 17:02:28 +0000 UTC]

This is by far my favorite so far. I love this piece so much. 

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C-A-Harland In reply to tech42cpu [2017-04-25 20:50:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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SpaceInquiries [2016-03-13 07:39:28 +0000 UTC]

I cried this is so beautiful

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C-A-Harland In reply to SpaceInquiries [2016-03-13 20:48:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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sd-campbell [2014-05-03 05:17:23 +0000 UTC]

All that I have to say is brilliant.

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C-A-Harland In reply to sd-campbell [2014-05-03 10:02:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Foxy-Knight [2014-05-02 20:38:29 +0000 UTC]

Nice to see this again, beautiful as it was the first time. Good show

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C-A-Harland In reply to Foxy-Knight [2014-05-02 23:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Foxy-Knight In reply to C-A-Harland [2014-05-02 23:15:46 +0000 UTC]

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Morning-Star-42 [2014-02-10 04:13:14 +0000 UTC]

I love the conclusion. 

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C-A-Harland In reply to Morning-Star-42 [2014-02-10 05:28:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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StarryStellary [2014-02-08 04:27:51 +0000 UTC]

This is beyond amazing... I wish I COULD favorite over 20 times.. -In love-

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C-A-Harland In reply to StarryStellary [2014-02-08 22:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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TerramArmsXIII [2014-02-08 01:54:13 +0000 UTC]

well then, i have to say this is exceptionally written, I've written plenty of things, but this i have to say was as descriptive as i would have made it.

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C-A-Harland In reply to TerramArmsXIII [2014-02-08 02:33:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I love experimenting with new styles and I was really pleased with how this turned out.

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TerramArmsXIII In reply to C-A-Harland [2014-02-08 02:35:38 +0000 UTC]

indeed, very well done here, would you like to read a poem from me?

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C-A-Harland In reply to TerramArmsXIII [2014-02-08 04:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Sure, send me a link.

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TerramArmsXIII In reply to C-A-Harland [2014-02-08 04:59:25 +0000 UTC]

masterofstorms17.deviantart.co…

here yah are!

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spiffydreamer [2014-02-07 22:59:31 +0000 UTC]

This is exceptionally well written.  The description is fabulous, it was like I was there!  

Congratulations on the DD

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C-A-Harland In reply to spiffydreamer [2014-02-08 01:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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the-ugliest-sweater [2014-02-07 22:30:06 +0000 UTC]

This was very good! Congratulations on the DD!  

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C-A-Harland In reply to the-ugliest-sweater [2014-02-08 01:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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TruthisTruth [2014-02-07 21:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on the Daily Deviation!

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C-A-Harland In reply to TruthisTruth [2014-02-08 01:44:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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TruthisTruth In reply to C-A-Harland [2014-02-09 02:31:06 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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cole8449 [2014-02-07 21:01:54 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. really moving.

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C-A-Harland In reply to cole8449 [2014-02-08 01:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it

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robson666 [2014-02-07 11:06:48 +0000 UTC]

congratulations to the well deserved Daily Deviation  

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C-A-Harland In reply to robson666 [2014-02-08 01:44:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Lintu47 [2014-02-07 10:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!

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C-A-Harland In reply to Lintu47 [2014-02-08 01:44:33 +0000 UTC]

Cheers

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sciencevsart [2014-02-07 08:54:46 +0000 UTC]

This would make a fantastic and wonderful piece for any astronomer to sing the power and glory of the heavens. Instead of cold displays of truly awesome power and the merciless cycles of life and death, you made the cosmos a beautiful life and dance of stars and their brief light fueled by the explosion of matter itself.


Do you mind if I make a sequel to this? I will cite you as my inspiration, as space and all its glory and danger is my passion. May I?

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C-A-Harland In reply to sciencevsart [2014-02-08 01:46:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad you thought so. That's really what I wanted to capture with this, not darkness, but light and life. 


Go ahead, but please let me know when it's finished, I'd love to read it

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sciencevsart In reply to C-A-Harland [2014-02-08 01:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I hope you have as much fun reading it as I did yours!

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C-A-Harland In reply to sciencevsart [2014-02-08 01:55:16 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to see it.

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Nathair77 [2014-02-07 08:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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C-A-Harland In reply to Nathair77 [2014-02-08 01:46:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Aerode [2014-02-05 20:40:17 +0000 UTC]

I just really, really love this piece. Fantastic imagery.

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C-A-Harland In reply to Aerode [2014-02-05 20:54:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. It was kind of an experiment, so I'm glad you liked it.

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Pepper-the-phoenix [2014-01-14 19:40:08 +0000 UTC]

There is some beautiful imagery in this piece. I love how vast the universe felt and I liked being a star traveling through space, seeing all its beauty. I also like how you gave personalities to the various stars. Well done!

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C-A-Harland In reply to Pepper-the-phoenix [2014-01-14 20:33:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you thought so. I had a lot of fun writing this and trying to imagine how a star might "feel".

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KomradApex [2013-12-19 14:23:02 +0000 UTC]

As someone who was obsessed with black holes, astronomy, and quantum physics in grade school, this is a dream come true. The imagery is fantastic and the metaphors are genius. Science and art can work wonderfully when paired, as you have demonstrated here.

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C-A-Harland In reply to KomradApex [2013-12-19 20:37:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much. I love astronomy too and any blending of science (particularly space science) into art and writing is something I enjoy. 

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vampeva-97 [2013-12-11 02:00:02 +0000 UTC]

This is really well written, though slightly hard to follow in places. I love how accurate and informational it is. I absolutely love the personification of the stars, its adorable.

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C-A-Harland In reply to vampeva-97 [2013-12-11 05:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. Were there any places in particular that you thought were hard to follow? I may be able to reword them.

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