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Tryout page for Marvel submission...Related content
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pycca [2012-05-17 01:33:11 +0000 UTC]
Great action. I can really feel it. I would relook at panel 3. Lady Deathstrikes face eems off and I'm not sure I'm a fan of the glints of metal. It seems distracting and creates tangents with LD's hand. Maybe less is more. Love the neck stab. Panel 1 LD's legs are too thick. She's very skinny.
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C-H-E-M-A In reply to pycca [2012-05-17 01:51:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Pycca, ItΒ΄s good to read your points...hugs!
I Really appreciate it.
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