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Published: 2019-07-24 03:58:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 8622; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 31
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It's back!

Oh hey look it's Tuesday, too, how about that?

Endemic was originally a transformation-inspired story that tried to have some deeper story behind it, but really just ended up falling into the trap of self-gratification.

This time, the story goes a little harder. More focus on the Circle, then we'll look at some more complicated stuff. Still your basic TF stuff, but I really want to give these characters novel-tier depth. So that's what I'll do!

I've been tossing the names Re-Endemic and Endemic New Game+ around with this one for a while. I do really want this to be the DEFINITIVE Endemic, even though I know I'll never be able to replicate the original. (AND BOY I NEVER WANT TO LOL)

I did several chapters of this already! The introductory arc to this series probably needs a bit of an update, too, but we'll move forward from here. 

Hope y'all enjoy! We're back at the beginning, folks!
(jeez...)

Disclaimer: I don't own Pokémon! 

...because this is a Pokémon story. (spoilers??????)
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toolazyforarealuname [2021-12-11 05:48:21 +0000 UTC]

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C-Mnesia In reply to toolazyforarealuname [2021-12-11 16:54:59 +0000 UTC]

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toolazyforarealuname In reply to C-Mnesia [2021-12-11 20:57:33 +0000 UTC]

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Readerlove [2019-07-24 16:06:29 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, a great start up of this story. Alphonse's pov is really great. apparently he has anger management pills or something? It appears that Alphonse has ok relationship with Emelina. Hmm, Ashley, who was that again?  Al truly wanting to know what is going on is great and you can feel the anger in the pit of his stomach. 


I am guessing that Al got kicked off the football team by beating the crap out of a member of a opposing team. Ah, the ever present theme of water, lovely! Al's father wants to keep his son and his family away from danger but is going about it the wrong way. Allen the detective, perhaps we will see more of him. Isn't Al's dad like a police chief or something? I hope that Al is going to be ok.



I do think that the previous chapters should be updated to be like this chapter was. After all, they are like 1 to 2 years old! like 2017. Perhaps this version of endemic, should be renamed "true endemic" or the like.


Stellar work!


Music:

Vanquish OST First Battle


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MrTherandomguy42 In reply to Readerlove [2019-07-24 16:27:28 +0000 UTC]

To answer your question, Ashley is Topher's nickname.

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Readerlove In reply to MrTherandomguy42 [2019-07-24 16:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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C-Mnesia In reply to Readerlove [2019-07-27 03:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah this guy generally knows the answer to most things.

Totally willing to admit my shame that he'll remind me of things that I forgot in the story over the months xD

OOPSIE

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