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Omg! Wat ish wrong?!
I really like the first panel
I really DISLIKE the last panel
The sequential panels are a little wonky because I didn't have any means to trace them and merely had to rely on looking and trying to recreate 8( so sorry about that. Drawing Sequential panels is so damn HARD to do purely by hand without tracing!
XD this is how I wake up in the mornings... only like... times 10. It was pretty late before Splinter finally got to sleep.
Meh, not my favourite page :\ moving on~
TMNT (c) Mirage
TMNT font (c) maple or Lionsgate
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Comments: 32
KnightGainax [2009-07-19 12:40:38 +0000 UTC]
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This one is pretty simple, but it gets the idea across.
I think the camera work is fine, there's not a lot you can do with a camera to help tell this little piece of the story. It's all down to the acting, really. And in that respect, I think you got it right.
Ugh, those eyes again...
I really like Splinter's body language in this one. He really looks like he's just woken up, and is taking his time to sort of blink the little tyke in focus. Whichever Turtle that is in the final panel there also has the right body language. That sort of imploring expectancy. Should've expected as much from a great animator in-training.
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C-Puff In reply to KnightGainax [2009-07-19 19:40:40 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much XD I can't really reply with much this time other than to continue my rant about camera work. Yes it's important to play with your angles, but it's also important to know when you don't need it. Splinter's just waking up and I didn't want to make him seasick by moving the camera every which way XD
Body language is my baby. I love it
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FFX2player [2015-08-27 00:21:06 +0000 UTC]
And of course I love the last panel, the emotion shone is quite poignant.
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Stitchpunk12 [2012-12-16 02:21:08 +0000 UTC]
How could you NOT like the last panel?! That turtles is ADORABLE!!
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C-Puff In reply to Stitchpunk12 [2012-12-16 17:56:37 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha! I drew this a long time ago, but I still have trouble drawing heads in that position. I need to practice more.
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ninjasoil [2010-07-17 18:58:03 +0000 UTC]
i acctually think the last panel is one of the cutest turtle tots pics iv seen!
even if you dont like it , i do, coz i love your style of work!
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ninjasoil In reply to C-Puff [2010-07-17 19:43:14 +0000 UTC]
welcome
anytime you need motovation (sp?)
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Jordancatgirl7 [2009-07-14 19:56:57 +0000 UTC]
Aw, but the little turtle tot is so cute!~ I really like the second to last panel just because of the kind expression Splinter is giving the little tot.
Oh, but Raph so ran away and Splinter needs to find him pronto.
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C-Puff In reply to Jordancatgirl7 [2009-07-14 20:01:13 +0000 UTC]
*nods* I felt it was important to show that Splinter doesn't hate the little guys, he was just really upset the previous night, poor guy.
And yes, yes he did
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KSTaki [2009-07-14 08:11:11 +0000 UTC]
Aw...is Raph crying...poor Raph. Having to heard it...mmm...even if Splinter is feeling alright now. Through I really like Splinter's face especially when he just woke up it very cool!!! ^-^
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Lily-Pond-Maiden [2009-07-14 05:54:29 +0000 UTC]
... that isn't raph this time is it... i get the feeling that this is a different little turtle hear to tell us all some bad news... or i could be wrong!
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C-Puff In reply to Lily-Pond-Maiden [2009-07-14 05:59:26 +0000 UTC]
You hit the nail on the head my friend said vad news is revealed on the next page
*sounds like she's shamelessly advertising her comic but is really just telling the truth*
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Lily-Pond-Maiden In reply to C-Puff [2009-07-14 06:02:14 +0000 UTC]
woot woot sorry i let the secret be know
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C-Puff In reply to Lily-Pond-Maiden [2009-07-14 06:04:29 +0000 UTC]
hey no worries XD I uploaded the page that reveals the secret today as well simply because I was afraid I couldn't keep it XDD
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54viruses [2009-07-14 03:40:24 +0000 UTC]
You know, Raphie looks so pathetic here I want to cuddle him... but I'm just sadistic enough that I want to see what papa Splinter would do if he burst into tears.
I have my guesses as to what the matter might be, but clearly you don't want to ruin the fun.
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C-Puff In reply to 54viruses [2009-07-14 03:47:01 +0000 UTC]
I don't want to ruin the fun at all so I can't say anything else XDDDD;; for my sanity I think I might upload the next page today as well.. otherwise I might burst
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C-Puff In reply to prefight-DONUT [2009-07-14 02:53:12 +0000 UTC]
:<
sorry I can't reply with much, I'm afraid of letting spoilers slip XD;;
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prefight-DONUT In reply to C-Puff [2009-07-14 02:57:00 +0000 UTC]
totally fine I like surprises
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Arwing [2009-07-14 02:44:43 +0000 UTC]
Well they look alright to me. The little hand on Splinters snout adds a special type connection with the turtle and PSlinter. Also how he's waking up as well you can see that he's shruging off the sleep and the pain from last night. Then just when you think all is fine, the little ones face says something else. And the last panel really shows the sadness in the little ones eyes. Nice work.
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C-Puff In reply to Arwing [2009-07-14 03:01:13 +0000 UTC]
thank you
Yeah, I really wanted to communicate the connection in the first panel. The little guy doesn't wake Splinter by whining or bothering him. He relies on Splinter, this strange person whose the only form of protection and warmth he knows. I was trying to say through the touch what the little turtle can't say out loud which is "please help"
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Arwing In reply to C-Puff [2009-07-14 03:08:28 +0000 UTC]
You do that really well. he's only young so this odd person must be someone who can help. And even though he doesn't say anything. You can tell by the eyes and the touch that something is VERY wrong. You don't need words as sometimes just by looking you can understand straight away.
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myXwoundedXsoul [2009-07-14 02:16:07 +0000 UTC]
*pout*
But come on, wouldn't you like to wake up to THAT? XD
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C-Puff In reply to myXwoundedXsoul [2009-07-14 02:17:51 +0000 UTC]
XDD I wouldn't mind.... if he was happy :'(
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