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Description I remember somewhere in the day I told myself that I absolutely hated my OC's design.
So uh, yeah. I changed it. I really just didn't like that modern feel so I decided to
just stick with a fantasy element than whatever I did before.

Plus, I just felt it was too edgy and unnecessary- so the past needed some real refining.
I've come back after two days with a better storyline that'll be less horrendous that the other.

Let's start off with a simple bio.Name: Avery "Todd" Ayres.
Age | D.O.B: 20; October 30th.
Occupation: (previous) Apprentice Clockmaker.
Height:  (Wolf) 8"9' in total | (Human-like Form) 5"5' at top of head, 5"7' at tip of ears.
Weight: (Wolf) 450 lbs | (Human-like form) 110 lbs.
Species: Werewolf

Personality: A much more quiet and cynical being towards others in the beginning;
Until known, she can be rather vigilant and protective- and albeit a bit dim-witted in making decisions.

Brief Bio: Todd was raised in a forest, far from society by her family. She was home schooled at an early
age. Eventually she was old enough to begin and complete an apprenticeship, in which she chose clockmaking.
With no common knowledge for this technology- she struggled with doing simple tasks her job assigned her to do, yet
she kept a determination to do the best she can in order to make her parents proud- ( They were highly disappointed
their daughter couldn't transform into a wolf like they did at the time, so maybe she could impress them by doing what they can't.
Her parents weren't abusive, they were only strict with her lessons. She would refer to them as a usual calm bunch of two. )

Sometime in the middle of the night during a late night shift, she suddenly transformed in the middle of the job due to continuous stress and frustration (mostly due to countless failures),
the store owner called the guards in fear; She escaped the assault with a scarred/blind eye. The entire sense of her life in danger edged her to the
point of cowardice- not wanting to initiate an attack until she is in danger. Not knowing what to do next- and surely
she couldn't return back to the town; Her only incentive was to wander the country until she could find a new home.

Abilities: Werewolf form; The only way she could defend herself against an attacker. The creature poses
with incredible strength and bulk. In this form, she has an enhanced sense of smell and hearing- as well as being able to see in the dark.
And with as many perks, there is weaknesses. One weak point would be a solid hit eye sockets will cause immediate death.

Although her werewolf form is intimidating, she is rather slow and needs to observe the enemy before attacking precisely.
 

Weaknesses: Silver is able to kill/immobilize her instantaneously. Specific places would cause more damage (such as the neck and heart.)
Wolfsbane, an uncommon plant, if digested, she will not be able to transform and thus defend herself.
In her werewolf form, she is far slower and depends on taking down an enemy with brute force.

Extras: Although she won't admit it, she has an odd fascination with humans.
Todd was a self given nickname. As a child she was much more rowdy and preferred to be called said nickname, eventually, it stuck with her.
She is a vegetarian. Seeing the sight of meat or the color red can make her ill.
Absolutely hates ranged weapons, calls anyone who uses them a coward. She usually uses this as a threat, as she herself is scared of them.
She can transform at any time, although the time of day/weather can drastically effect the transformation.
  * I.e Transforming during the daytime will cause her form to be much more slower than it previously is.
Scared of anything made of silver- touching it could give her a small cold or fever.
Her emotions can be read by just looking at her tail- therefore, it is hard for her to hide any emotions.
Still tries to improve her craft of clockmaking, but still continues to make constant mistakes, angering her easily.
She poses a blue hood with similar horns to that of a sheep. A reference to a Wolf in Sheep's Clothing, except taken literally.
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Comments: 44

omegaragnrok [2016-03-15 21:29:49 +0000 UTC]

Nice! I was wondering when we would get a bio of her.  

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C0RPS3 In reply to omegaragnrok [2016-03-16 04:22:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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OliveWriter [2016-03-08 00:19:20 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS AMAZING AAAAAH

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C0RPS3 In reply to OliveWriter [2016-03-08 00:23:22 +0000 UTC]

/ sCREAMS



THANK YOOOOOOU

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OliveWriter In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-08 01:13:58 +0000 UTC]

screm

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C0RPS3 In reply to OliveWriter [2016-03-08 01:14:51 +0000 UTC]

SCREM SCRAM

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OliveWriter In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-08 01:17:52 +0000 UTC]

c:

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C0RPS3 In reply to OliveWriter [2016-03-08 01:20:39 +0000 UTC]

<3

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OliveWriter In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-08 02:07:53 +0000 UTC]

c:

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C0RPS3 In reply to OliveWriter [2016-03-08 02:08:16 +0000 UTC]

c:

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OliveWriter In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-08 02:23:11 +0000 UTC]

c:

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C0RPS3 In reply to OliveWriter [2016-03-08 02:24:44 +0000 UTC]

Dude something stupid happened at my school lol

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OliveWriter In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-08 04:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Same with mine 
what happened 

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C0RPS3 In reply to OliveWriter [2016-03-08 04:04:57 +0000 UTC]

Some kids be doing slap cam

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OliveWriter In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-08 04:06:31 +0000 UTC]

OH jeez

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C0RPS3 In reply to OliveWriter [2016-03-08 04:09:09 +0000 UTC]

Lol kir
It aint even funny

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OliveWriter In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-08 04:25:38 +0000 UTC]

My bro did that once

it was pain

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C0RPS3 In reply to OliveWriter [2016-03-08 04:26:36 +0000 UTC]

omfg
rip
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OliveWriter In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-08 04:30:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeh

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C0RPS3 In reply to OliveWriter [2016-03-08 04:30:16 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Cool30 [2016-03-07 20:11:09 +0000 UTC]

I really like this design a bit better too! The werewolf design is BOss!!!

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C0RPS3 In reply to Cool30 [2016-03-08 00:23:15 +0000 UTC]

Aww, jeez, thanks!

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Deidara-Clone [2016-03-07 19:37:55 +0000 UTC]

Dude that is so awesome!

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C0RPS3 In reply to Deidara-Clone [2016-03-08 00:23:05 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, thank you! c:

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DannyAndYoko [2016-03-07 14:00:54 +0000 UTC]

A girl named Todd? XD

Well her human form is really cute ^^

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C0RPS3 In reply to DannyAndYoko [2016-03-08 00:22:58 +0000 UTC]

Ah, yup! XD
I believe it's a unisex or neutral name, so I was going for something that wasn't too showy or feminine.


Thanks! And I'm glad you checked this out!

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DannyAndYoko In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-08 07:53:22 +0000 UTC]

Todd unisex or neutral?! HA! XD

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C0RPS3 In reply to DannyAndYoko [2016-03-11 23:41:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the name is uvu
Didn't want to have a long name too, idk why people have character with 4 words in their name.

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DannyAndYoko In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-11 23:45:14 +0000 UTC]

If the name Todd is unisex or neutral.
Then I'm the king of England... XD

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C0RPS3 In reply to DannyAndYoko [2016-03-11 23:47:23 +0000 UTC]

XD Nice one!
How'd you find this reference sheet?

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DannyAndYoko In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-11 23:56:01 +0000 UTC]

what reference sheet?

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C0RPS3 In reply to DannyAndYoko [2016-03-11 23:58:38 +0000 UTC]

This one.

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DannyAndYoko In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-12 00:03:58 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea....

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SyanTheBee [2016-03-07 07:54:22 +0000 UTC]

I like this desgin!

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C0RPS3 In reply to SyanTheBee [2016-03-08 00:22:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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SyanTheBee In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-08 07:19:46 +0000 UTC]

np *star*

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UnstableReactor [2016-03-07 07:20:52 +0000 UTC]

Okay, so first off angle and perspective are good! You've definitely been practicing and improving, and it shows. Colours are awesome as usual, very rich blue and brown really sets off the sections of white in the outfit and draws focus there. By the same token, the brown hair emphasizes the white eyepatch, which looks very striking as a result. Outfit's very cool for the human form, and as you know already I like the way you designed the werewolf form to utilize the canine skull in its design. 

Bio is pretty solid, personality makes sense and the werewolf form balances pros and cons pretty well; it's not overpowered, but it's not too difficult to use properly. It's a very balanced power. You have used the basic werewolf concept and done something new with it, very nice.

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C0RPS3 In reply to UnstableReactor [2016-03-08 00:22:03 +0000 UTC]

Woah, thanks! I'll keep this all in mind c:


I need to add just a few things to her personality or the werewolf form/weaknesses. Any calls?

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UnstableReactor In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-11 04:23:00 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

Little late in replying, but here are some thoughts:

What if the exposed skull on the werewolf form is a sort of weak point? Maybe the eye sockets(being close to the brain, and as many spiritualists theorize, the spirit's chamber) are vulnerable and can cause her great pain if hit. Another thing might be to make her very nervous and edgy at night, even when it's not enough of a full moon to force her into werewolf form, because she remembers what her other form caused?

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C0RPS3 In reply to UnstableReactor [2016-03-11 04:34:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks <3


Woah! That's cool, real cool! I think I'll add that <3
It would be nice to have her be really reckless if she's cornered- it's probably a real good flaw that could balance out that werewolf form.

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UnstableReactor In reply to C0RPS3 [2016-03-11 05:05:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem! Happy to help, sounds like you've got things mostly figured out.

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C0RPS3 In reply to UnstableReactor [2016-03-11 05:07:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks <3

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mister-jackass [2016-03-07 06:06:22 +0000 UTC]

yES SHES SO COOL AA

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C0RPS3 In reply to mister-jackass [2016-03-07 06:10:57 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAAAAAAA


THANKU

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