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ScottAnthonyAdams [2012-08-07 14:55:47 +0000 UTC]

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Hello , I am Scott and I will be critiquing your work today e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
Okay first we will start with the good things , The hair is lovely , you used the green perfectly , the makeup is nice , and the outfit is fitting to harmonix e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Now some work can be done . Okay the way you drew her green huge sash kinda looks like it is attached to her but and her the strand from her ear almost looks like it is laying sideways.

But other than that I thought this piece was awesome and sorry if the critique seems off this is my first time e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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FatimahBuzdar [2012-08-08 03:30:03 +0000 UTC]

It's very good.I love love your Harmonix fairies!

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