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Published: 2007-07-07 18:19:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1187; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 19
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whew well not bad for 2 days says I
and my idea that no one else thought of was a Cyber Dog
his tail ish prettah yesh? :3Image, TOF belongs to me
Vendetta (lovely lady next to Bloodburn) belongs to
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o-o Woah, what'd I miss? xD; Anywho, I love your comics. :B You can really tell you spend a lot of time on them.
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haha thanks xD hehe i think i spend alittle too much time on them
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Okay, I really don't know what's happening now.
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Thank you!
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Yay its finshed it was worth the wait it looks great i really like the backgrounds
can`t wait until the next page keep up the good work.
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Ooh! Good job on the colouring I must say! Your latest pieces all look a whole lot more clean and smoother than your older pics. You've improved!
The only bad thing I have to say is, like someone else said in a comment, I got a little confused in the fourth panel with all the speech bubbles. Nothing serious though!
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thank you! :3
by the way is it the parents meeting thing tomorrow? and are Becky and Steph talking after all the sparks on Friday?
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You mean the one where we're off apart from our appointment? Nah, it's the 16th. Next week.
And meh, I dunno.
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oh and MGS is winning alot on the Gamefaq's poll
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Yay! I voted for it!
Of course.
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ah okies :3 well if they aint then we're gonna see a few sparks tomorrow
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WOW! 
though the words are kinda small..... but its still very good!!
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thankies!
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LOL eh its the best one so far though!!
ur techniques get better and better every time ^^
and ur welcomes!
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Woohoo!What gonna happen next....? I'm waiting for the next page.
(P.S. >>2days You work really fast.
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Yah! been hoping for this for ages! *gets all excited* yah!
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Aww~
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Bloodburn and Vendetta *-*
They look so coolie :3
And you'Ve got her markings very well :3
I also love Kronar, he looks nice ;3
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Yippie!! Done very nicely, J-wolf! Lots of talk! Absolutly beautiful!! Your art is definetly improving...somehow...
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thank you Travel's!
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Haha the introduction of Kronar kinda hit me by surprise. Here's me thinking this is an all-natural wolf thing then you find a cyber-wolf. Haha! o3o
If I may offer my critique, then I'd recommend that you work with your panel arrangement. In some places it's hard to tell what order the panels are in, especially the first four panels...those left me going "Wait...what?" and having to reread it. Just a hint, mkay? :)
But hey, great work nonetheless. It's coming alone quite nicely, and I can't wait to read more!
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Thank you Ribbons! 
Yeah its mostly because my screen has a light effect on it so it acually looks aload brighter on my screen than your 
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You're welcome. n_n
Well it's not the border of the panels (I can see the black divider lines perfectly), but the way you arranged them. It's...confusing.
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really? wow you have good eyesight xD i suppose ill just do them left to right or do them kinda like this but have arrows or something :3
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WOOOOOOT ITS HERE! It looks asome the coloring it wonderful. Can't wait till the next page.
I think that cyber dog is orignal idea. Although I think I've seen one other comic with one. But this is still asome!
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thank you!
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True that. Good Idea. Can't wait till the next page comes up. It will be soonish right? lol
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the bgs look amazing! and I like how many different views/poses you put in
omg I love how Kronar looks X3 cool markings and part metal, thats my kind of canine!
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Finally a new page, and this one is nice colored
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THAT LOOKS AWESOME!!!! 
Cant wait to see more!
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Um, no offence, but 'cyber dogs' are everywhere. I have one, named War. He's got a mechanical leg, ear and eye o_o;
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i ment that i haven't seen one in a comic
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