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Published: 2008-01-02 15:20:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 2132; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 42
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finally my PC didn't die long enough for me to complete this :3 hurrhurrIts way different to the first page which is why i'm going to have to make some tweaks to it
i'e the shading 
Please leave a comment if your reading - Thanks!
ToF & Characters belong to Jadeswolf :3
Trades are still open if your interested :3
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Thank you!
Yeah plots are a pain to come up with, s'
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Welcome!
Gahh..I know....prolly have to stray away from a wolf comic......everyone's doing it and I feel like being diffrent. 8D
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Thank you very much! <3
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Nice job!! Like I said before - I love this shading style so much
The only thing I could say you could improve is the grass. Not that the bg's are at all bad (they're actually pretty good) - it's just compared to the faboo wolves (love 'em!) it just looks abit too...computery, if that makes any sense at all. Like, in the first two panels you can see what I mean the most. It's just a bit too obviously a piece of digital art - you want to feel like this is a real story you're telling, not to be distracted and brought back into the real world by the grass
Anyway, I don't know if you'll understand a thing I said in that paragraph but ah well XD. Keep up the good work - and it's nice to see you experimenting a bit with the panels 
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God thats an essay you wrote there Lydia!
Grass eh? xD do you mean the grass they're standing on or the 'bushes' by the trees? 
PS: Mind if i bring FF7 down?
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You're welcome
I know! I can't quite believe I wrote an essay myself!! I guess your little question in your journal inspired me 
I was mainly focusing on the bushes by the trees (sorry for calling them grass XD), I felt like they were the part of the page that could be improved the most. Yeah, no more grass tool I see! Good to see you've moved on from there
Sure, bring anything you like!
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Fixed it 
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Bravo! It looks tonnes better!
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oh! yeah they were a real pain D: (the bushes) to get right 
Alright then
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I don't know what Becky's bringing, other than her DS. I hope she brings the Wii
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Very nice! Awesome bgs! This looks great :3
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Oh, Shadar looks really handsome. 
Oops, poor, Xhal...I hope he doesn't get punished too badly.
I love the lighting here. It looks very realistic to how it would be while walking through a bunch of trees.
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hehe thank you muchly Purple!
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oo i love teh lighting effects and teh scenary is very nice.
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Thank you Twilight!
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Wow... this is SOOOOO much better than the old one, you've really improved!
I love the way you did the light on the wolves' bodies, how it definately looks like it's coming from the trees
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Thank you muchly kureika!
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nice page ^^
keep up the good work
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