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Published: 2015-09-04 07:23:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 480; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description This beast here is Sun Whistle, she is a proud and noble Aurabura no older than 22. Sun has actually has 6 wings, the 3rd pair is very small and is hidden underneath the 2nd pair.

She is one of the leading warriors of her tribe and destined to be the next tribe leader. She is noble and always speaks formally (much like Luna), she does not show expressions very much making her hard to read. Sun is known for not only her brute strength and aerodynamics, but her cunningness during battle.

One day when patrolling her borders she stumbled across a small number of young outcasted Auraburas fighting over food. Some had no wings, other had deformed or severely damaged wings, some had deformed or small weapons on their tails. Sun broke up their fighting and also giving up her own rations to feed the youngsters. Sun may not have expressed it, but she felt guilty as her tribe as well as herself were to blame for their suffering. She wanted to change their fate, prevent the withering away of innocent lives that did nothing but grow as to what they are.

Sun met the council of her tribe thinking of ways to increase the living standards for those outcasts who did and did not have jobs within the tribe. The council refused to listen, and warned Sun if she were to continue down this path, she would not be allowed to succeed in the role of tribe leader. Leaving angry and hurt Sun Whistle made the boldest decision in her life, gather up the outcasts and leave.

Sun managed to gather 30 outcasts aged 4-17, and journeyed to the mountain regions between Backbreak Gully and Broken Gulf. On many occasions her tribe sent warriors after them as they needed outcast for the less glorious jobs (and not have to pay anypony for it), but Sun fought them off and gained the title "Dragon Dancer" due to the graceful movement of her fighting skills. She was determined to let her people have a free, worth living life.

Years have past now, and Sun had grown her own tribe hiding at the base of the mountains, she trains those who have developed weapons on ground or in the air (depending if they have wings or not). Some have tried to interrupt their equality and peace but Sun with her small band of warriors as well as the clever use of their surroundings manage to prevail.

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So yeah, I know it is a lot to read. Sorry, not sorry.

Credit to SerMouse and SerSparrow for this amazing species
(let me know if there is anything wrong with this story, as I do not want to break away from the lore to much)

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The Contest:Β Aurabura Pony MYO Contest! 1500 points+ in prizes
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Comments: 6

AshCatArts [2015-09-06 19:42:00 +0000 UTC]

intricate designΒ 

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Caldercloud In reply to AshCatArts [2015-09-06 21:36:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ScenicGrace [2015-09-05 23:46:53 +0000 UTC]

Love it! Very detail, much pretty, such winner, wow. Β 

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Caldercloud In reply to ScenicGrace [2015-09-06 00:21:29 +0000 UTC]

XD thanx Grace

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SerMouse [2015-09-05 01:50:14 +0000 UTC]

I adore the time put into the work itself as well as the accompanying piece. Excellent work!

Good luck in the contest!Β 

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Caldercloud In reply to SerMouse [2015-09-05 02:22:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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