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CalebP1716 — I'm Sorry

Published: 2013-04-30 02:52:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 3505; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 6
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Description Rainbow Dash, kneeling before Scootaloo’s tombstone, could feel her heart begin to drop as though it was a stone falling into a deep abyss, as she relived the horror in her mind of when Scootaloo had tried to fly with her just the night before. Tears came to her eyes as she remembered how Scootaloo had jumped off of her window sill from high above the ground to be with her in the sky, however, Scootaloo had forgotten that she could not yet fly until she began to descend towards the ground below. Rainbow felt the tears come down harder as she remembered how close she had been to catching her, and seeing the fear grow in Scootaloo’s eyes as she knew that Rainbow wasn’t going to be able to make it in time, no matter how fast she was able to go. It was the last Rainbow ever saw her eyes open, as she had closed them and allowed the inevitable occur, as Rainbow came only a second too late to catch her before she hit the ground.
Rainbow now, feeling the guilt overwhelm her, slammed her hoof against the tombstone’s hard surface as she cried into the night “I….. I’m…….. I’m so sorry!!!”


*I want to say thanks to for helping me out with the description, I really appreciate you helping me out man.
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Comments: 39

KraangTheConqueror [2014-09-13 12:47:58 +0000 UTC]

So deadly! AHAHAHAHA! And so... bloody!   AHAHAHAHAHAA! Her blood must be tasty!

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Thunderbroneh [2014-03-12 18:34:56 +0000 UTC]

NUU scootz!! D: We still didnt get to finish dat game of Cherades! Oh well..i win :3.... NOOOO SCOOTZ!! xD

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estacadomatador [2013-12-17 21:45:58 +0000 UTC]

Caleb ur gonna make me cry man and I'm a guy *cries uncontrollably* dammit Caleb :,(

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MisterKaos [2013-05-09 07:48:52 +0000 UTC]

No...It's not true....THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE!

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knightarkness [2013-05-07 04:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, right in the feels! I started a fix where rainbow dash died... IT'S TO MUCH!!!

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HohoeminoBakudan [2013-05-04 01:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Awwww! Poor Rainbow Dash. D:

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supermarikfuntime [2013-05-03 23:31:59 +0000 UTC]

She's dead.

She's dead, Dashie.

SHE'S DEAD, DASHIE!!

SHE'S MOTHER FUCKIN' DEAD, DASHIE!!

AHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!

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SeaWeedBrain012 [2013-05-03 06:32:30 +0000 UTC]

N'aaawww, that's sad

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PhantomSix598 [2013-05-03 03:30:10 +0000 UTC]

Ooh could you imagine what she looked liked when she landed on the ground. Oh men. You could see scotaloo's body twisted and turned everywhere and her bones sticking out of the body and imagine what rainbow dash heard when scotaloo hit the ground. Its like hearing a crackling sound when you step on a bug. Eewww.

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CalebP1716 In reply to PhantomSix598 [2013-05-03 11:41:34 +0000 UTC]

Dang that's sick bro, wasn't thinking if that until now. But yes I imagine that's probably what would have happened to her, poor Scootaloo.

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PhantomSix598 [2013-05-03 03:25:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow this is really wonderful. Great i shouldnt read the description, i feel so depressed now. Great artwork btw.

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ElementOf-Loyalty [2013-05-02 19:02:53 +0000 UTC]

*SNIFF* And here comes the mega sorrow from this image.
Bravo to the author.*SNIFF*

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CalebP1716 In reply to ElementOf-Loyalty [2013-05-02 20:54:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked my writing... haven't written in a long time, but thought this piece needed a good description. So I'm glad you like it... even though it was sad.

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Easle-Darkpaws [2013-05-01 15:07:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm....sad now..

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blade-prime [2013-04-30 20:10:12 +0000 UTC]

Out of the entire series I have quite a few favorites, with Scootaloo being 1 of them. This picture can only move even me to tears. :.(

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starlow1 [2013-04-30 13:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's so sad, it makes me want to cry. I really feel the regret and sadness of Rainbow Dash.

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Rozzi-dk [2013-04-30 12:43:15 +0000 UTC]

Aww... So sad :3

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SycoArtworks [2013-04-30 12:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Nice work man. Lots of feelings here.

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CalebP1716 In reply to SycoArtworks [2013-04-30 12:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man, had a tough time doing this, especially with the description that I wanted. Glad you like it, and yes I could feel them feels as I worked, that's what made it tough. Poor Scootaloo.

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That1MegaLeaFan [2013-04-30 12:37:36 +0000 UTC]

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somepony13 [2013-04-30 10:56:01 +0000 UTC]

*sob* Dammit, these arent even manly tears! *cries uncontrollably*

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CalebP1716 In reply to somepony13 [2013-04-30 12:52:50 +0000 UTC]

"It's okay, feel free to cry, these are emotional times, there's no shame in it..." *Cries too*

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Diebro210 [2013-04-30 09:58:07 +0000 UTC]

very nice should i be crying now?

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CalebP1716 In reply to Diebro210 [2013-04-30 12:54:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man, and if you feel you have to, just let it out, there's no shame in it.

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Diebro210 In reply to CalebP1716 [2013-04-30 19:10:45 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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BB-K [2013-04-30 08:52:31 +0000 UTC]

Take her for granted until when she crashed, all that concussion already killed the poor filly. I knew Scoo's quick flapping on her wings is driving too much air around and thus give little lift. Sorry Rainbow, your conscious will remain haunted for what you have done to poor Scoo.

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hypershadow2010 [2013-04-30 05:17:37 +0000 UTC]

...i'm sad now.

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Ravirr94 [2013-04-30 04:38:47 +0000 UTC]

Just too sad. Bu the sky looks just beautiful.

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CalebP1716 In reply to Ravirr94 [2013-04-30 12:56:03 +0000 UTC]

nice optimism, and yes the sky is beautiful. Perhaps Scootaloo is among the many stars up there looking down on RD with forgiveness.

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TechRainbow [2013-04-30 03:37:05 +0000 UTC]

So sad.

On a happier note; Rainbow Dash is fuzzy!

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DarkLordDashie [2013-04-30 03:31:38 +0000 UTC]

This gave me a heart attack .-.

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Cosmic-Grain [2013-04-30 03:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Nice.

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animegx43 [2013-04-30 03:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Ow...my feels...

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linkwolf998 [2013-04-30 03:08:30 +0000 UTC]

...

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D3Rave [2013-04-30 03:03:26 +0000 UTC]

I cant even................ just.........................

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ashambbelle2 [2013-04-30 03:02:23 +0000 UTC]

IM GUNNA CRY!!!

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Hordaks-Pupil [2013-04-30 03:01:07 +0000 UTC]

Poor Scootaloo a powerful and moving pic

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jrscoolio [2013-04-30 03:01:05 +0000 UTC]

.................... I can't even respond...

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CalebP1716 In reply to jrscoolio [2013-04-30 12:57:19 +0000 UTC]

It's alright, you don't have to, sometimes there just aren't words that can describe such sadness.

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