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i still hate dA's categories >:c

okay, so my first contribution as a corrector over at #Improvement-Club ! i was honored when invited to help others improve, so might as well start!

mmm, so here's what i have to say about the image in question; i congratulate the artist for taking a shot at such a complicated pose, it was pretty hard for me too, considering i'm used to simple stuff ( which you can tell by my lame-o gallery 8B ).
the only issues you have revolve around proportions and awareness of what the human body can do. i highly recommend references whenever playing with hard positioning~

don't forget the woman's torso is an hourglass, but the curves are not that significant. also, it's always good to attempt the pose yourself, so you know whether your body can actually perform certain stances; for example, the first thing i noticed wrong in the picture was the left arm. it can only stretch so far, so that's something to keep in mind.

another thing, be very careful with bent limbs. i know for a fact they're a bitch, but the way you drew it makes the lower arm look somewhat detached from the rest of the body.

i didn't want to mess too much with the head, because i think that's a matter of style really, but i can't draw something without starting there so |D

there's not much more i can suggest other than to keep practicing, and special bonus point for allowing people to correct your work, it's a great sign of bravery and true desire to improve <3

special thanks to ~timberioodle and my mom for helping me at the final stages C:

original work (c) *Ale-94-black-white @
correction (c) me <3

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i still hate dA's categories >:c

okay, so my first contribution as a corrector over at #Improvement-Club ! i was honored when invited to help others improve, so might as well start!

mmm, so here's what i have to say about the image in question; i congratulate the artist for taking a shot at such a complicated pose, it was pretty hard for me too, considering i'm used to simple stuff ( which you can tell by my lame-o gallery 8B ).
the only issues you have revolve around proportions and awareness of what the human body can do. i highly recommend references whenever playing with hard positioning~

don't forget the woman's torso is an hourglass, but the curves are not that significant. also, it's always good to attempt the pose yourself, so you know whether your body can actually perform certain stances; for example, the first thing i noticed wrong in the picture was the left arm. it can only stretch so far, so that's something to keep in mind.

another thing, be very careful with bent limbs. i know for a fact they're a bitch, but the way you drew it makes the lower arm look somewhat detached from the rest of the body.

i didn't want to mess too much with the head, because i think that's a matter of style really, but i can't draw something without starting there so |D

there's not much more i can suggest other than to keep practicing, and special bonus point for allowing people to correct your work, it's a great sign of bravery and true desire to improve <3

special thanks to ~timberioodle and my mom for helping me at the final stages C:

original work (c) *Ale-94-black-white @
correction (c) me <3