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Calin-4 — A Little Less

Published: 2011-03-15 22:01:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 292; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 4
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Description A little less than willingly we moved her
From the porch to the stairwell.
We made her happy there.

Years went by
Happiness faded to contentment
Contentment to rutine
And we moved her from her stairwell to the garage
We made her forgotten there.

Forgotten, we did not worry about remembering
So our little girl,
Who grew on the porch,
Who agreed to comply,
Who stationed on the stairwell,
Who tried to agree,
Who faded away to a memory
Remembered that we had once known who she was
Until it was to late
Until we were all a little less than a collective.

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My writing is shot.

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Comments: 26

Electra1 [2011-03-16 22:11:50 +0000 UTC]

A beautiful picture that works on an imaginative level. The poem is really representative of the picture.

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Calin-4 In reply to Electra1 [2011-03-17 22:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Aw thanks Buddy! I quite like it myself.
I was thinking of making it a more orange-yellow color instead of pink...maybe that is a project for another day.
What do you think of the pink? Weird right?

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Electra1 In reply to Calin-4 [2011-03-18 00:22:16 +0000 UTC]

To be honest it looks really nice but do what you think is best.

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Calin-4 In reply to Electra1 [2011-03-18 00:27:12 +0000 UTC]

You are sweet.

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Electra1 In reply to Calin-4 [2011-03-18 00:30:01 +0000 UTC]

aren't i thought? thank you!

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Calin-4 In reply to Electra1 [2011-03-18 00:32:44 +0000 UTC]

{EDIT: thought => Though} You are welcome

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Electra1 In reply to Calin-4 [2011-03-18 00:47:09 +0000 UTC]

(Edit: )

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Calin-4 In reply to Electra1 [2011-03-18 01:01:46 +0000 UTC]

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maraaax3 [2011-03-15 23:02:18 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful.

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Calin-4 In reply to maraaax3 [2011-03-17 22:56:16 +0000 UTC]

Aw thank you.

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deadpool5 [2011-03-15 22:39:41 +0000 UTC]

...i feel sad now.......

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Calin-4 In reply to deadpool5 [2011-03-15 22:48:31 +0000 UTC]

Why?

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deadpool5 In reply to Calin-4 [2011-03-16 01:29:59 +0000 UTC]

idk, it seemed sad

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Calin-4 In reply to deadpool5 [2011-03-17 23:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Well then, I am sorry I thought it was deep at most...but sad?

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deadpool5 In reply to Calin-4 [2011-03-17 23:40:49 +0000 UTC]

idk it seemed saddish......

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Calin-4 In reply to deadpool5 [2011-03-18 00:02:48 +0000 UTC]

Quit IDK-ing, there must be a reason!

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deadpool5 In reply to Calin-4 [2011-03-18 00:06:11 +0000 UTC]

nope

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Calin-4 In reply to deadpool5 [2011-03-18 00:19:05 +0000 UTC]

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deadpool5 In reply to Calin-4 [2011-03-18 00:21:10 +0000 UTC]

.

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Calin-4 In reply to deadpool5 [2011-03-18 00:28:44 +0000 UTC]

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deadpool5 In reply to Calin-4 [2011-03-18 00:32:33 +0000 UTC]

.

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Calin-4 In reply to deadpool5 [2011-03-18 00:37:32 +0000 UTC]


FAIL

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deadpool5 In reply to Calin-4 [2011-03-18 00:42:54 +0000 UTC]

.

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Calin-4 In reply to deadpool5 [2011-03-18 00:47:29 +0000 UTC]


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deadpool5 In reply to Calin-4 [2011-03-18 00:50:32 +0000 UTC]

.......yeah well MEHHH!

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Calin-4 In reply to deadpool5 [2011-03-18 01:01:38 +0000 UTC]

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