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She was the kid who sat in the very back row in every single class. It didn’t matter which period, or what room, but she always managed to get to the farthest back seat in the left-hand corner every single day. Her English teacher even dubbed her the nickname “The Lone Ranger” because of her position in the classroom.Then, the second she sat down, out came the notebook. A battered five-subject stack of paper that had its lined pages divided up like this: first was science, but as the year progressed, slowly bled into a cross between real biology notes and her own complex genetic equations and observations. Next was geometry, the margins studded with doodles and a running commentary on the absurdity and occasional downright stupidity of the freshmen sitting around her. Third was left blank, just in case, and fourth was supposed to be English, but after 10 pages straight about the meaning of Genesis and Exodus, rapidly switched to layer upon layer of her own evolving novel. Fifth was a multitude of exotic sketches, for when her fingers began to hurt and she couldn’t stand writing anymore.
The teachers found her somewhat annoying, always writing and drawing and rarely taking notes, yet answering any questions thrown her way with only a brief glance up towards the board and absolutely no hesitation.
“Are you writing the next great American novel back there, Lone Ranger?” her English teacher called to her every once in a while when he noticed her working. She would look up at him and smile.
“Yes sir, I am.”
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fangalicous08 [2008-11-26 01:29:50 +0000 UTC]
That sounds a lot like me. My science teacher always asks me when I'll be publishing my first book, cuz I write, like, all the time, yet not so often nowadays cuz I've been into the Twilight novels and finishing up Maximum Ride, but anyways. Yeah, that does sound a LOT like me.
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vizoosh [2007-07-30 18:42:06 +0000 UTC]
Yee-ap. I always sit second from the back in the middle. Except when the desks are in a circle, I mean.
Eh, crit. I always feel so bad about it. OH well.
-Show, don't tell. Don't TELL me that your English teacher calls you the Lone Ranger, show me the situation where he first called you that.
-This is nitpicky, but "math" would be better to say than "geometry" unless you're going to add some sort of language that implies it. Too specific.
-You needn't refer to Genesis and Exodus. Because people don't usually associate these with English class, and it ruins the flow of the piece when people pause to think about it. It's like, Hold up, what's she studying?
-That little paragraph at the end--show, don't tell. Tell me why she thinks the teachers get annoyed with her. It would add length, yes, but it would improve so much.
-The end is alright, but if you could screw up the order of the notebook sections to connect the writing section to the great American novel comment, it would be a little better.
I dunno. Whatever you want.
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artfreak116 [2007-07-28 19:48:50 +0000 UTC]
haha....unfortunatly i have to sit some close to see the board..im so blind..but otherwise i would so be in the back..
i have no orgainization what so ever..but luckily we have laptops and so i can get distracted with games and being here..or puling some paper out and just randomly drawing..i hardly managed to keep my grades up..and im probably one of the few that pays some attention to whats going on..but that is hardly ever..lol..
ADD!!!! we awesome!! lol..
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caliwings In reply to artfreak116 [2007-08-13 00:37:26 +0000 UTC]
I'm totally blind too. The doctor says it's because I spend all my time on the computer. XD I'm actually picking out frames tomorrow.
The lower classmen get laptops this year. Since I'm now a junior (as of tomorrow), I don't get them. Bleh, but I'm probably better off without it. I'd spend all my time on photoshop and deviantART if I had one. XD
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artfreak116 In reply to caliwings [2007-08-15 21:29:37 +0000 UTC]
lol..
oh..well that sucks..we have to pay like 800 bucks to get one every year..and i spend like all my time on deviantART..lol..
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caliwings In reply to artfreak116 [2007-08-15 23:33:44 +0000 UTC]
I talked to the tech people today, and maybe they can lend me one for artwork. FUX YEAH.
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Polyhexian [2007-07-24 20:01:15 +0000 UTC]
Huh. I give up keeping notes organized on the first day. Straight to messy doodles and random numbers that might be whatever the equation was.
BTW, Hello, Lone Ranger! 8D
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caliwings In reply to Polyhexian [2007-07-25 15:16:01 +0000 UTC]
w00t. Yay for awesome, A.D.D. people like us! 8D
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Polyhexian In reply to caliwings [2007-07-25 15:17:11 +0000 UTC]
w00t!!! 8D My teachers get on my more for sitting in odd positions than they do doodling... XD
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caliwings In reply to Polyhexian [2007-07-25 15:23:00 +0000 UTC]
Lawl, like L right? I need to get the next volume of DN before I leave; I just finished 5 yesterday.
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Polyhexian In reply to caliwings [2007-07-25 15:26:12 +0000 UTC]
0_0 *zips lips*
You can just read it online for free. mangavolume.com
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caliwings In reply to Polyhexian [2007-07-25 15:29:46 +0000 UTC]
Naw, I want to support the artists. Plus, I hate reading manga online. The only one I put up with is Naruto Shippuuden.
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Polyhexian In reply to caliwings [2007-07-25 16:04:25 +0000 UTC]
I like buying manga in english, don't get me wrong. I just like to read the ones that aren't released in america yet. I tried hold out on Deathnote- read the end when it's actually released- but I couldn't do it. XD
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caliwings In reply to Polyhexian [2007-07-26 03:57:11 +0000 UTC]
Well, don't ever tell me any spoilers! *flails* D8 I am in love with DN!
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