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CallMeBlackBeauty — Hopeverse Main Story Part 1: The Apprentice

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Description Any here is the first part of the main story for my alternate universe for my MLP: FIM next generation and it's starts when Discord went to Equestria for the first time, back when he was younger. Also, if you don't know who Cosmos is she is a character that is from the MLP: FIM comics. 

Anyway, this story also shows my take on draconequus and Discord and Cosmos's relationship. 

Anyway, here is the first part:

Discord sighed in annoyance as soon as he heard the council declared Cosmos to be the one to take him under her wing; the very last draconequus that he wanted to be with. 

Discord knew that Cosmos wasn't exactly thrilled with the whole ideal either. He often saw her groan and growl more often after it had been declared, Mayhem insisted that this was the best option for the both of them, espeically Discord was a draconequus that desperately needed some more guidance. Discord was only a few eons old but what still consider young in draconequus years, but his chaos powers was growing faster than most young draconequus, and so he needed to learn how to control it faster.

"You know, I hate this just as much you do, Lady Cosmos," Discord blurted out as they walked side by side, but not talking to each other until now. "If not more so than you!" 

"Doubtful," She snarled, looking away from him. 

"Why are you so mean to me?" Discord asked, trying to not sound too sensitive. 

Cosmos wasted no time and looked face to face as fast as lightning, making Discord gulp. "Because you are weak, little Discord!" 

Discord actually took a step back due to her response and she actually chuckled in delight at his sudden demeanour. 

"You are weak!" Cosmos raged on. "You are weak, just like your parents!"

It was true that both Discord's parents were considered to be a disgrace, but he wasn't expecting this. This was low even for Cosmo. 

"The only reason why the council has so much faith in you is that you so happen to be those few that develop their chaos powers in a faster rate," She spat angrily at the younger draconequus. "Sooner or later will be an... inconvenience to our kind like your parents." 

Discord gritted his teeth, his fang looking sharper than before. He hated whenever another draconequus talks about his parents, because he knew even when they were trying to be more kind about it he knew deep down what exactly how they really feel about them, and because of that Discord, himself, have learn to soberly detest his own parents. Not that it was very hard for him that much, he barely remembers them anyway.

Discord's parents will go down in history as a couple of the very few draconequuses that had ever died, and that was considering to be one of the worst things that a draconequus can do. That is because even though draconequus are particularly immortal there is still a way for them to get themselves killed but first what needs to happen for death to come a draconequus must choice for it to happen, and that was one of the few things that most draconequus can't wrap their minds around. 

"Anyway, let's get to our assign dimension that Mayhem has order us to conquer," Cosmos repeated their mission. "And he wants us to take over a dimension that would be very tricky to take over with an iron fist, and that is a world with filled with powerful magical ponies. It's a dimension that our society has been planning on to take over for countless of years."

'Seriously? Ponies?' Discord thought and rolled his eyes. 

Mayhem was of the biggest decision makers in the draconequus council and he choice which draconequus go in which dimension to take over but if Discord could be honest out loud, he definitely would say that he can't really take Mayhem seriously for he had a duck head and can be funny when he pronounces some words and letters. 

"B-but...." 

"Don't you dare say any 'buts,' Discord!" She growled slightly, before started to get even more serious. 

To Discord surprise, Cosmos made her eyes light on fire... literally!

"W-why are you looking at me like that?" 

"Oh, there is something that I just want to make things... extra clear, little Discord." And before Discord Cosmos grabbed his chin to make sure that their faces was even closer.

"Hey! What's your problem!?" Discord forgot his fears for a split moment and shouted at her angrily. 

"Remember this, Discord, this is my last chance," Cosmos's eyes stopped burning but her eyes still visible showed anger. "The council says that I am a tad bit unstable, even for draconquus's standards, and if I don't conquer this dimension with you then they will finally cut ties to me, and there would be nothing I can do with that! Eons and eons of me just climbing up the ranks so I will one day become the head of council, will all go to waste! So, don't you dare even think about going rogue, you stupid pipsqueak!"  

Spit dipped from her mouth, her teeth looking bigger than was mere seconds before, and her scorpion tail raised straight up, like it was ready to strike at this very moment.  

However, Discord was actually unphased and just glared up at the bigger draconquus. He honestly still doesn't think that betraying Cosmos still wouldn't be a bad idea. 

"Do you get it, Discord?" She asked, never breaking eye contact. 

Discord began to snarl at her.

"Do you get it!?" Cosmos said louder, and her grip grew tighter. 

"Yes!" Discord finally shouted out. 

"Good," Cosmos said delightfully. "And remember this, Discord. You are just a weak draconquus, no matter what the council says!" 

Instead, of anger now Discord was now absolutely shocked.

'This again?' he thought. 'Why does she like to put me down so much anyway?' 

"Say it!" She demanded.

"What?"

"I told you say that you are just a weak draconquus, and nothing else!"

Discord just continues to stare at shock at her.

"Say it, or else!"

"Okay, fine...." Discord said quietly. "I am a weak draconquus...."

"I'm sorry," She sneered happily. "What?"

"I am a weak draconquus, and nothing else!" 

"Good boy," She sang happily, and then pat him on his head like he was her pet dog. 

With one snap of her fingers a dazzling bright blue portal that led to the pony dimension. 

"Now let's conquer all those pony scum!" she said before leaping into, not even. 

Discord sigh and before she followed her, he took another look at their dimension. He was going to miss this place; this was actually the only dimension that he had ever known so far, and he was going to miss the floating houses and random stuff, and the folks that was completely unpredictable. 

He sighed again before facing the portal to the land ponies leaped inside it....
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