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Published: 2012-08-27 19:38:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 12878; Favourites: 534; Downloads: 54
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Love is when somebody gives you a shoulder to cry on.Love is when somebody makes you laugh when you're sad.
Love is when you miss somebody whenever they are gone.
Love is when whenever you see that person you feel glad.
Loving somebody is choosing not to see their flaws.
A human being will never be perfect.
Everything that person does you will give a loud applause.
Cause in your eyes everything that person does is correct.
You want them to smile.
You would work extra just to be with that person.
Even if it would be just for a while.
Love is unconditional, that's the truth.
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This is wonderful and it really shows your viewpoint about this particular topic.
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Lovely. You have captured this well. It comes in all shapes and forms. Lovely
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thank you, glad you enjoyed it
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Love is but a fleeting feeling
Fueled by selfish greed
Evolutionarily and psychologically explained
By our strong sexual needs
To say that love is unconditional
Is to spit in the face of the lonely
It's a lie that is embarrassing
To your intellectual honesty
You think that love is magic,
Equally deserved and equally received?
That the bullied, ugly girl you never spoke to
Felt a lesser need?
No, my friend, the world is shallow
And love is blind those
Who have yet to open their eyes
Love is conditional, that's the truth
And nothing good ever comes from
Living deluded by lies.
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Well said bro, well said.
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Love is not just a feeling filled by greed and sexual needs, love also exists between you, your family and your friends.
Trust me, I know what it feels like to feel lonely, and to people who are lonely it's actualy a big relief to know that your family will love you no matter what. Sure you can have your indifferences at times, but you love each other no matter what.
The love you're speaking off is the one created by a chemical inside the brain of every human being, the love I'm speaking of is not triggered by this chemical. Bullied ugly girl you say? Dude I was not only bullied I was nearly murdered by my bullies a few times, I know what it's like to be bullied so I always try to help people who are bullied. ugly? Every person is beautiful in their own way, be it on the inside or the outside.
The reality is cruel that I know. So why are you trying to take that what makes those happy in this cruel world? Love is not conditional, it's true that people who love each other have fights at times. But why do they stay together then? That's love, it's like an invisible glue making people stick together.
To say that love is a lie, will probably mean that love has betrayed you once before my friend.
If you are offended or anything then I'm sorry, but I have to stand up for my beliefs
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No hard feelings mate 
Let's just say that the conditionality of love has taught me a lot about this world, and to be honest, it's a knowledge that has brought me a piece of mind because it explains things. When I wrote about the ugly girl, what I meant was that ugly people, and generally unattractive people, do not experience as much love as beautiful people; simply because of shallow reasons. That is why love is indeed conditional. The same is true wether the relationships are sexual or not. Unattractive people, be it on the inside or the outside, do not necessarily feel a lesser need for love but will end up getting just that.
Why is it important to know this? Because the truth is important, no matter what the truth is.
Anyway, I didn't mean to offend. Consider my text an insight into another perspective of love. People like romance, and if I'd publish my response, it'd get less attention than yours since it's not what people want to read.
Peace
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it's okay my friend, and don't say that you won't get as less attention because you might get attention just because you think outside of the box
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Instant fave!
I think this describes very accurately the feeling. Well-written
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really good, i like this, i have one piece of advice if you want to hear it, dont have to if you dont want to, your choice, wont change my opinion about liking this
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well the first part of the poem was all love is... which was really cool, and then the secong part of the poem was so good too, but i found it didnt flow togetther because you had changed the structure form love is... to just writing, i know this is a style and im not trying to crush you creativity but i think you could make the transition of structure alot smoother
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I still have some trouble with structures and such
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practice makes perfect, and you're nearly there, keep working
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Thank you for reading
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Nicely done; you have given an accurate description of Love, and I love it.
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Such a poor poem.
Loving somebody is choosing not to see their flaws.
A human being will never be perfect.
Everything that person does you will give a loud applause.
Cause in your eyes everything that person does is correct.
So, love is being naive and condescending? Fantastic.
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Agreed. He is 16 though. He'll learn these lessons on his own soon enough.
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He seems to have his head in the right place. I guess that stanza was more of a filler, just to give the poem that little extra push.
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I actually think you have a good point XD. Just because you love a person doesn't mean everything they do should be correct to you. So if that person cheats on you that's correct? I'm glad someone noticed that.
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Well that's your opinion then
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And, unfortunately, it's not yours. If you're gonna be condescending towards people you love, they'll start noticing it, and they'll start to dislike you.
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Actually a lot of people happen to like it apperantly
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Well yeah. If they're needy, they're gonna enjoy every piece of positivity they get. But if people say or do something stupid, they need to be brought back to reality. Being a good friend/lover is allowing people to be people, and not just telling them everything they do is okay because oh, we like them so much. But you're 16, so you'll figure this out eventually.
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I don't actually tell them everything is okay, but a friend of mine who inspired me to start writing in the first place actually does that to his girlfriend. I guess when I'm writing I put a little bit of my friends in it too.
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As long as you realize how wrong it is to put them on a pedestal, you'll be okay. A good friend will help others, either by positivity, or telling them certain things are wrong. You wouldn't tell a friend who was on drugs to keep doing whatever it is they were doing, just because they were 'enjoying it'. That's what I mean. If they have enough of a brain, they'll be tremendously grateful for all the support you've given them, even when they didn't agree with you and, deep down, knew you were right.
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Yeah I know that, but some people are scared that if they say that something somebody does is wrong that person will start to dislike him. I actually helped a friend once who then started to hate me because I told him that he was doing something wrong and that I would help him. Some stuff is just strange
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Those people are too wrapped up in their own problems, and refuse to accept alternatives to them. Eventually, they'll realize you were trying to help, and never the opposite. If not, that's their problem.
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I see, thanks for the kind words
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You're welcome dear ^^
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