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You sat on the floor, staring at the setting sun from your bedroom window. It casted an orange glow across the whole island. It was your favorite part of the day. Not only because it was beautiful and it was a view you've had since you were a child, but it was because it reminded you of when you met your crush. You were a kid and was throwing rocks into the ocean at sun set, not paying much attention to anything. A little silver haired boy and a brown haired boy walked up and watched you. You got angry because they just stood there."What?!" You yelled at them. The brunet almost ran but the silver stayed still.
"Why are you throwing rocks?" The silver haired boy asked.
"Cause I can. Who cares if I do?"
"Your mama wouldn't be happy if you threw rocks."
"My name's Sora and this is Riku. What's yours?" The brown haired boy changed the subject. You told them your name and began a now longstanding friendship. You watched smiling when Kairi accepted Sora's offer to be his girlfriend though it partly tore you up because you knew Riku would never ask you. You nearly screamed while being dragged out of your memories by a hand grabbing your shoulder. You grabbed at your heart and glared up at the silver haired teen standing behind you. He smirked and you reared you teeth at him, turning back to the window to watch the last rays of light be chased out of the sky.
"You could have given me a heart attack."
"Could've but didn't, now did I?" You hated how much of a smart ass he could be and refused to look into his eyes, knowing that one glimpse would make you forgive him. No. You wanted to be mad for a little bit. You wanted to pout and make him feel bad. He sat beside you, watching the sky as well. Every now and then you saw him look at you out of the corner of his eye. It annoyed you to no end.
"What?! Why do you keep staring at me?!" You finally snapped.
"You're pretty in this light." He said not turning to you. You turned your head to hide the blush on your face. "You're pretty in any light." That was right next to your ear. You turned your head to find his inches away. A light blush across his face, even though it was barely noticeable, it was still there. It felt almost like a competition on who could stay away the longest. And finally, you won. He pushed his lips against yours softly and pushed himself off the floor a bit to get more leverage. You wrapped your arms around his neck and played with his silver hair. He ran on hand down your side as he laid sweet kiss after sweet kiss on your lips. He pulled away then looked deep into your eyes, smirked, and pulled you close. There was an unspoken agreement about you two dating from that day on. Even Kairi and Sora knew without even asking. You two loved each other, though Riku never said that he loved you since he met you.
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Comments: 154
grella-sutcliffe1223 [2013-05-11 22:33:31 +0000 UTC]
oh.....my god....this was so in character.....do yourp/ cosplay as him at all or do you just pay really good attention
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calming-thoughts In reply to grella-sutcliffe1223 [2013-05-12 00:26:11 +0000 UTC]
I just pay really good attention. I've never rp'd Riku. I never really plan to cosplay him. (Though I totally think I could pull his personality off.) I also research A LOT. I researched Kingdom Hearts for months before writing my first fan fiction of it. I try my best to stay canon and away from fanon. Mostly fanon that contradicts the character.
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grella-sutcliffe1223 In reply to calming-thoughts [2013-05-17 00:18:40 +0000 UTC]
oh i see....that was fumazing tho... no lie
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LongLostIntentions [2012-11-14 05:41:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you THANK YOU for not making him say I love you. I agree this was refreshingly in character. And his is a surprisingly complex character to grasp. Looking forward to reading your other ones~
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calming-thoughts In reply to LongLostIntentions [2012-11-14 08:00:51 +0000 UTC]
You honestly have no idea how much pride you just made me feel in myself. I try to make as in character as possible. And if you don't know how to relate to Riku, he can be a very complex character to grasp. I understand where he came from and why he's done what he's done. I not only have played the games a lot but I've done hours upon hours of research for every single character. I've done five hours alone on Vexen and his somebody.
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LongLostIntentions In reply to calming-thoughts [2012-11-17 21:58:30 +0000 UTC]
You deserve it! Its really good I love "For Lovers" stories that keep everybody in character. I feel I understand him too, so I'm really glad. Hopefully I'll get my own story out someday. Anyways. Keep up to good work ^^
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Building-Summer [2012-09-09 00:44:27 +0000 UTC]
AHH! I love it! There are like...none of these with Riku in them...except this one of course. Ahhhh so amazing! XD
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calming-thoughts In reply to Building-Summer [2012-09-09 05:30:46 +0000 UTC]
Aww... Thank you so much, sweetie! I know there isn't many with Riku which makes me quite sad. :c But I wrote one so that makes me happy. 8D
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Building-Summer In reply to calming-thoughts [2012-09-09 19:33:23 +0000 UTC]
Haha you're welcome! It makes me happy too! XD
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Toxic-X-Lust [2012-09-08 20:26:45 +0000 UTC]
You need to do Vexen XD! Mr. Mad Scientist o_o!
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calming-thoughts In reply to Toxic-X-Lust [2012-09-09 05:50:51 +0000 UTC]
Trust me. I'm working on it. I just need to figure out what universe and the plot. It's a bit rough at times but I'm gunna get it out. I will write one for EVERY SINGLE ONE of the Organization Members... Aside from.. Shit I forgot her name.. The girl who was actually a doll thingee..
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calming-thoughts In reply to Toxic-X-Lust [2012-09-09 06:04:04 +0000 UTC]
Yes! That's it. I probably won't do one for her.
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calming-thoughts In reply to emmiez [2010-12-23 02:57:29 +0000 UTC]
i hope im not riku needs lovin too
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emmiez In reply to calming-thoughts [2010-12-24 22:49:22 +0000 UTC]
but there are barely any
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emmiez In reply to calming-thoughts [2010-12-24 23:01:46 +0000 UTC]
how many does vexen have 2
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emmiez In reply to calming-thoughts [2010-12-24 23:42:27 +0000 UTC]
i was right and i just guest lol
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iamthemarvelqueen [2010-12-05 22:45:59 +0000 UTC]
ohmigod!!! this is so freaking sweet!!! I AM OVERWHELMED WITH HAPPINESS!!!!!!! and i love in the end when he says that he's always loved you/me/she!!!
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calming-thoughts In reply to iamthemarvelqueen [2010-12-06 05:40:59 +0000 UTC]
^^ glad you liked it
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bblondiegrl07 [2010-12-04 15:23:10 +0000 UTC]
Awee!!! This is sooo like him!!!
This is amazing!! Great job! I can't wait for more!
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calming-thoughts In reply to bblondiegrl07 [2010-12-04 15:48:21 +0000 UTC]
thanks im writing up zexion right now and right after that a certain brunette whose in need of much love
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bblondiegrl07 In reply to calming-thoughts [2010-12-04 15:52:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh Zexy
Awe yay Squall!
- It's Leon!!
- Sheesh, sorry!
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calming-thoughts In reply to bblondiegrl07 [2010-12-05 02:12:39 +0000 UTC]
stfu its squall, even though i believe theres someone cooler in ff8
I've lost my mind
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bblondiegrl07 In reply to calming-thoughts [2010-12-05 05:19:59 +0000 UTC]
OMG ZELL!!!
I was so mad that Seifer bullied him!! I was like I'm going to beat you up, legit. I will jump into this game and beat you.
I Say Leon and Squall, same guy I still love him though!
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calming-thoughts In reply to bblondiegrl07 [2010-12-05 05:22:34 +0000 UTC]
ya know what i dont understand if people do the reno-axel thing why not zell-demyx?
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bblondiegrl07 In reply to calming-thoughts [2010-12-05 05:28:19 +0000 UTC]
You mean how people say like Reno and Axel are the same person? I don't know why they do it I mean they made Axel to be exactly like Reno but different roles (KH wiki )
But Zell does act like Demyx!
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calming-thoughts In reply to bblondiegrl07 [2010-12-05 06:01:01 +0000 UTC]
I KNOW! ya they made axel so they could see howd people react to a character who was almost the same as a previous one. thats why they have the same voice acters
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bblondiegrl07 In reply to calming-thoughts [2010-12-05 06:34:35 +0000 UTC]
That and Axel and Reno are just beast!! I mean they are amazing!
Besides, their voice actor has done soo many things!
And what makes it better is that he's from where I live!
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calming-thoughts In reply to bblondiegrl07 [2010-12-05 06:38:53 +0000 UTC]
lol thats awesome
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bblondiegrl07 In reply to calming-thoughts [2010-12-05 06:43:21 +0000 UTC]
I thought it was ^^
I didn't think anyone like that would be from where I live. Me personally, I don't like it here. I want to move and travel!
Not stay in a state that has nothing to offer
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calming-thoughts In reply to bblondiegrl07 [2010-12-05 07:03:07 +0000 UTC]
where i live has some to offer, i mean Nashville is about half a days drive away
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bblondiegrl07 In reply to calming-thoughts [2010-12-05 07:05:04 +0000 UTC]
Lucky!
The only thing that is a half hour away is Cleveland!
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