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Published: 2007-06-22 00:20:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 96; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Blank canvasThat dances, wavers
Before my eyes
Turns to blue
Turns to blackness
Turns to skies
Blank with color
Swathed between it
Real or dreamed
It matters not
I create
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Random thoughts can be quite nice!
Do you paint or something? :]
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no, I draw sometimes but that's about it for that stuff. I'm mostly a writer.
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A-
Had to comment on this one after our last conversation
Happiness to you
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Dude, I am happy. Like, all the time. I mean, ok most of the time but still, I am like, really easygoing, which means no worries, which means hapiness, at least for me. You do whatever you want. F's totally going to be wasted tomorrow after letting me use his body so much today. I'm gonna cool it for a while, ok? Don't wanna total your BF XD
Don't freak out on me or anything though, he'll be fine, I just need to stop borrowing for a while. Talk to you later.
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um, sorry
after a while, things start to slip out of focus, hence the overdose of me-ness. That's why we need to have me not be out all the time or whatever. There's a personality transition period, then there is me or him, and then if it's me we run out of energy (I'm not too good at not doing stuff
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I like how much freedom you give so much of your poetry. Reach is the only poem of mine in which I allowed myself to not have three to five rhythmically identical stanzas, but you sortof jump outside the box all the time. It makes me smile.
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It sounds really great! I especially love the second verse!
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