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Published: 2007-09-30 02:07:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 181; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Draw your bow across the string
Let the music fly
You are just a tiny part
Of a universe’s symphony

Lend your mind to music’s wing
Your soul unto life’s sky
Let your small imperfect heart
Create beyond what you will see

Fill yourself let music sing
No questions how nor why
For what you now unknowing start
Will become new worlds to be
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Comments: 10

Alien--Kitty [2007-10-07 04:50:11 +0000 UTC]

You may be just a tiny piece in the universe's symphony, but you have the solo XD

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canticum In reply to Alien--Kitty [2007-10-09 00:52:17 +0000 UTC]

how so?

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Alien--Kitty In reply to canticum [2007-10-10 02:29:08 +0000 UTC]

I don't know, just a thought.

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canticum In reply to Alien--Kitty [2007-10-14 17:18:42 +0000 UTC]

XD I half thought you were referenceing my screen name.

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n-g-e [2007-10-01 10:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Interesting concept and most beautifully executed

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canticum In reply to n-g-e [2007-10-03 01:06:04 +0000 UTC]


Thank you!

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Tar1988 [2007-10-01 08:46:03 +0000 UTC]

Nice grasp of concepts, and I mean it.

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canticum In reply to Tar1988 [2007-10-03 01:06:24 +0000 UTC]

^^ thank you!

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135711cal [2007-09-30 13:13:46 +0000 UTC]

I love the Idea, the subject, the meter, and the rhyming scheme but the words feel a little awkward in places. It is good, but only good.

playing with the words a bit
like practicing the Violin
will make Vivaldi
sound like Vivaldi
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canticum In reply to 135711cal [2007-10-03 01:05:49 +0000 UTC]

eh I'm probably a tad rusty; haven't written much in awhile.
But thanks

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