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Published: 2007-08-27 03:55:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 223; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description One day, one thought, one tear
        Breathe the morning
Let the pain lodge deep inside

Look into my eyes and believe
For the world is
Oh so beautiful
I turn, disbelieving
So
       Much
                  Detail
A kiss, sensual pleasure
   Without the imperfect conveyance of touch
                                     It is overwhelmingly pure
Bringing the heart to the throat, tears to my eyes

Impossible to hold inside
                  To experience all
                                        All at once

         More than beauty
            More than love
              More than anything
                              Anything else

                                                    It is the World
                                                     It is our Earth


                                                    It is Everything
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canticum - The night is young
Comments: 31

Alien--Kitty [2007-09-09 03:43:38 +0000 UTC]

^_^
This one I like.
The format is very neat, it doesn't really look like anything but it's just...
*copies hand gesture of DE*
XD

The ending is fine, I think, but I don't really understand the begginning.

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canticum In reply to Alien--Kitty [2007-09-09 15:36:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the , I'm glad you liked it.
yeah, the formating was just sorta random.. It looked too boring just the normal way, so I changed it.

eh, don't worry, it doesn't make much sence and it's really hard to explain.

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Alien--Kitty In reply to canticum [2007-09-09 20:07:16 +0000 UTC]

ok^^

alright...

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canticum In reply to Alien--Kitty [2007-09-10 03:29:13 +0000 UTC]

sorry for not trying to explain, I really don't think it would go well..

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Alien--Kitty In reply to canticum [2007-09-10 04:18:39 +0000 UTC]

ok.

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626elemental [2007-09-03 16:35:49 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful poem! It's so... skittery. in a good way. But i really like it!

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canticum In reply to 626elemental [2007-09-04 03:28:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you! It was fun to write.

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DarlingAngel0565 [2007-08-28 02:01:37 +0000 UTC]

i love it, you did a great job

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canticum In reply to DarlingAngel0565 [2007-08-28 02:05:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you, and I appreciate the !

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DarlingAngel0565 In reply to canticum [2007-08-28 02:12:38 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome

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CountessK [2007-08-28 00:12:23 +0000 UTC]

Loving the format majorly. Makes everything just...flow.

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canticum In reply to CountessK [2007-08-28 01:51:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I had a lot of fun writing it. I'm glad you liked it!

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Tar1988 [2007-08-27 11:24:24 +0000 UTC]

You seem to be very romantic in your work of late. I don't know why or how, but whatever you do, don't stop it

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canticum In reply to Tar1988 [2007-08-28 01:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Getting a little first hand experience at romance may have a bit to do with it..XD
Glad you like it, and thanks for the

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626elemental In reply to canticum [2007-09-03 16:34:51 +0000 UTC]

? I haven't heard about THIS.....

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canticum In reply to 626elemental [2007-09-04 03:38:29 +0000 UTC]

What? really? opps, sorry well I guess we didn't really tell anyone, because it happened so slowly...
I'll talk to you about it in person, or you can note me, either one works.

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Alien--Kitty In reply to canticum [2007-09-09 03:40:22 +0000 UTC]

XD
I guess she STILL didn't know. Or she decided not to tell

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canticum In reply to Alien--Kitty [2007-09-09 15:33:45 +0000 UTC]

XD I don't know. I can't believe she doesn't at least suspect something.. but there are a lot of reasons she might not tell

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Alien--Kitty In reply to canticum [2007-09-09 20:09:41 +0000 UTC]

yah, I guess you are right.

XD
funny doesn't know, what with all the conversations XD

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canticum In reply to Alien--Kitty [2007-09-10 03:28:36 +0000 UTC]

Well yeah, but it's not usually in particuraly obvious places, and since it doesn't start like that, then it's less likely to be noticed, especially after people have already made one comment, or there's a number of large comment chains before it.
but it is sorta weird..

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Alien--Kitty In reply to canticum [2007-09-10 04:20:28 +0000 UTC]

yah XD

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sce-violinist [2007-08-27 08:27:48 +0000 UTC]

I love this one!

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canticum In reply to sce-violinist [2007-08-28 01:49:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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sce-violinist In reply to canticum [2007-08-28 12:44:12 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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n-g-e [2007-08-27 08:08:31 +0000 UTC]

Very good poem. I like the structure, it complements the content very well. I think the ending's fine, wouldn't worry about it.

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canticum In reply to n-g-e [2007-08-28 01:49:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay ^^ that's good then. Thank you for your comment!

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n-g-e In reply to canticum [2007-08-28 08:26:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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ephend [2007-08-27 06:01:18 +0000 UTC]

I am wwith Distant on this one ! 100%

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canticum In reply to ephend [2007-08-28 01:48:29 +0000 UTC]

yay!
and thanks for the !

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Distant-Euphoria [2007-08-27 04:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow... I like how it's... all over the place! XD MAkes it seem more... -makes wierd hand gesture- And that's a good thing! XDXDXD

~Distant-Euphoria~

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canticum In reply to Distant-Euphoria [2007-08-28 01:47:46 +0000 UTC]

XDXD okay, I'll take your word for it! Thank you!

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