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canticum — Fall's Fear
Published: 2007-08-15 00:28:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 177; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description You fly
then you also know
the taste of the fall
The terror
the lack of control
spiraling down on broken wings
When your soul is bound
and the tears spring
uncalled for your sorrow
For the pain of falling
Is all the greater when one knows
freedom's flight
It is a pain and sorrow
so much it could never be borne
Yet it must be borne
Because without the strength
to withstand the fears of falling
once can never
never ever ever again
Fly
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Comments: 13

Alien--Kitty [2008-01-24 05:44:24 +0000 UTC]

Thought I already read this one...

ah well

remembers it nonetheless

it is a good poem^^

...albiet sad.

but sad is ok, too

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canticum In reply to Alien--Kitty [2008-01-25 05:30:36 +0000 UTC]

I think you did, it was part of a poetry conversation though, so you probably saw it there.

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Alien--Kitty In reply to canticum [2008-01-26 04:26:40 +0000 UTC]

ah, right. I remember.

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DarlingAngel0565 [2007-08-18 15:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Very deep and beautiful, not to mention true.
You know this is an instant fav from me.
Great work

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canticum In reply to DarlingAngel0565 [2007-08-18 17:59:00 +0000 UTC]

^^ thank you!

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DarlingAngel0565 In reply to canticum [2007-08-18 18:01:43 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome

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lamortnoire [2007-08-15 21:33:37 +0000 UTC]

I love how you responded to the other poems, for one, the poems you wrote are brilliant and two, it's an interesting idea to do that,

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canticum In reply to lamortnoire [2007-08-17 05:28:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you, poetry conversations are very interesting and quite fun.

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lamortnoire In reply to canticum [2007-08-17 13:19:51 +0000 UTC]

oh yes

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n-g-e [2007-08-15 09:02:07 +0000 UTC]

I hate flying... Very nice poem, I like it a lot.

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canticum In reply to n-g-e [2007-08-15 18:12:29 +0000 UTC]

XD you hate flying?
really?

anyway, glad you like the poem!

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n-g-e In reply to canticum [2007-08-15 18:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I loathe it with a passion.

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canticum In reply to n-g-e [2007-08-15 18:52:41 +0000 UTC]

Well, I don't like airplanes, but I've got nothing against the idea of flying without one. Sounds like fun ^^

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