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Published: 2007-08-19 02:19:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 209; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description Hope
It comes, wavers, turns
And when all is dark and bleak
It springs again

Hope
It changes as the moon does
Sometimes hidden deep in shadow
Then moves to guiding light

Hope
A wish, an idea, a dream
That the future will be better
Better than the now

Hope
Foolish or strong, wise or weak
It may tie us together or hold us apart
But we may all

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Comments: 27

135711cal [2007-09-09 19:22:25 +0000 UTC]

is it not the concrete that holds our lives together.

nicely done

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canticum In reply to 135711cal [2007-09-12 04:20:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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135711cal In reply to canticum [2007-09-12 08:59:55 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome

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BurntFae [2007-08-28 02:41:06 +0000 UTC]

Something I used to have. All I had, really.

Sweet poem.

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canticum In reply to BurntFae [2007-08-28 04:23:14 +0000 UTC]

Well, I hope you have achieved what you hoped for ^^

I'm glad you like the poem!

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BurntFae In reply to canticum [2007-08-28 05:05:41 +0000 UTC]

>_> Not at all, but thanks.

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canticum In reply to BurntFae [2007-08-29 04:26:32 +0000 UTC]

but you don't hope anymore?

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BurntFae In reply to canticum [2007-08-30 06:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Not much, sure have lost a lot of it.

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canticum In reply to BurntFae [2007-09-02 18:10:47 +0000 UTC]

aw.. sad

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Alien--Kitty [2007-08-26 03:42:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this is a very good one ^^

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canticum In reply to Alien--Kitty [2007-08-26 04:16:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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n-g-e [2007-08-20 08:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Hope is the mother of stupidity, but stupid people always get lucky (it's an old Polish saying ). I like it, I really do

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canticum In reply to n-g-e [2007-08-20 19:08:29 +0000 UTC]

XDDD
that's a great saying!
Glad you like it

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canticum In reply to canticum [2007-08-20 19:09:09 +0000 UTC]

oh, and thanks for the fave too!

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Grey-dayz [2007-08-19 21:12:40 +0000 UTC]

Hope hope hope..can't live without it
Absoluely love the poem

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canticum In reply to Grey-dayz [2007-08-20 19:09:25 +0000 UTC]


Thank you!

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DarlingAngel0565 [2007-08-19 16:13:25 +0000 UTC]

Well i love it, it kind of answered my poem Hopes Loss,
Thank you, your words are very inspiring, and much needed.
As always my friend your poem has touched greatly.

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canticum In reply to DarlingAngel0565 [2007-08-20 19:11:16 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, it is rather an answer to your poem^^ awesome
I am very glad you liked it, and thank you for the fave

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DarlingAngel0565 In reply to canticum [2007-08-20 19:12:30 +0000 UTC]

You are quite welcome for the fav
As soon as i read your poem, i felt the connection

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canticum In reply to DarlingAngel0565 [2007-08-20 20:14:19 +0000 UTC]

ah.

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matt-taylor21 [2007-08-19 15:25:31 +0000 UTC]

hope is a good thing

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canticum In reply to matt-taylor21 [2007-08-20 19:11:28 +0000 UTC]

that it is, that it is.

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Tar1988 [2007-08-19 06:38:51 +0000 UTC]

I generally liked it, but somewhere in the third stanza, it failed me a bit. have you tried putting 'a wish' at the end of the line, and in the last line leaving out the 'is' ? something like this;

Hope
An idea, A dream, a wish
That the future will be better,
Better than the now.

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canticum In reply to Tar1988 [2007-08-20 19:13:18 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, yes, I agree with the deletion of the 'is'.
I think I will move 'wish' to the beginning instead of the end, though.
Thank you for your suggestions!

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canticum In reply to canticum [2007-08-20 19:22:47 +0000 UTC]

great, DA's not letting me edit deviation again...

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Tar1988 In reply to canticum [2007-08-20 19:36:41 +0000 UTC]

waiting a day usually solves all problems with da

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canticum In reply to Tar1988 [2007-08-20 20:16:03 +0000 UTC]

ahaha! I got it to work!

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