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Description Gently weave
And gently wove
A never-ending treasure trove
Full of riches, past delights
Drawn by dusk into new light

Softly spin
And softly spun
Light of lives again begun
Trust the winds and trust the wave
From all prevailing darkness saved

Cleverly tell
And cleverly told
Shield from hunger and the cold
All the dreams we have to come
Fallow truths into wisdom
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canticum - The night is young
Comments: 14

youliedanyway [2008-02-02 16:23:13 +0000 UTC]

THis is really very great writing indeed.

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canticum In reply to youliedanyway [2008-02-02 19:55:25 +0000 UTC]

^^ thank you, and I appreciate the fave!

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Coffee-Rules [2008-02-01 05:07:08 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I'm a huge literature enthusiast, and I'd just like you to know that this deviation was featured in my Literature Collections (issue IV) !

Keep up the great writing!

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canticum In reply to Coffee-Rules [2008-02-01 05:15:03 +0000 UTC]

^^ hey, thanks! I appreciate it!

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Coffee-Rules In reply to canticum [2008-02-01 05:20:59 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Alien--Kitty [2008-01-26 04:18:23 +0000 UTC]

your poetry is becoming not just good ideas, but good form as well. Is good^^

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canticum In reply to Alien--Kitty [2008-01-26 04:34:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you!
...what, exactly, constitutes good form?

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Alien--Kitty In reply to canticum [2008-01-26 04:40:44 +0000 UTC]

like....one that works.
More poetry than prose now

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canticum In reply to Alien--Kitty [2008-01-26 04:42:53 +0000 UTC]

alright, sure^^
I guess that means I'm still improving.. that's good!

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Alien--Kitty In reply to canticum [2008-01-26 05:47:44 +0000 UTC]

yep^^

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ephend [2008-01-25 23:35:22 +0000 UTC]

nice flow and the choice of words is Excellent!

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canticum In reply to ephend [2008-01-26 04:34:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks! glad you liked it^^

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626elemental [2008-01-25 06:09:39 +0000 UTC]

I do indeed know what fallow means

Like the rhyme in this, makes it seem older

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canticum In reply to 626elemental [2008-01-26 04:36:17 +0000 UTC]

I just didn't want people going, "hey, you spelt it wrong"

yah, it was sorta meant to seem oldish, like a story passed down from generation to generation.

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