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So yeah
This will be either 6 or 7 pages, so here's the first half-ish.
Sorry about my handwriting, I tried to corral it into readability but it didn't quite work.

I've been doing some practice comic pages on and off for several months, and I wanted to see how I could tackle a multiple page thing. The answer is veeery slooowly, I started this in late November I think, so you'll probably see the lineart vary quite a bit in style.
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If I were paying for an asterisk, I would request a critique on this, but I'm not so I'll just request it the old fashioned way by saying "criticism is welcome in the comments". Specifically, with emphasis on:
- Graphic Punch
- Pacing and layout
-Dialogue

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Description
So yeah
This will be either 6 or 7 pages, so here's the first half-ish.
Sorry about my handwriting, I tried to corral it into readability but it didn't quite work.

I've been doing some practice comic pages on and off for several months, and I wanted to see how I could tackle a multiple page thing. The answer is veeery slooowly, I started this in late November I think, so you'll probably see the lineart vary quite a bit in style.
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If I were paying for an asterisk, I would request a critique on this, but I'm not so I'll just request it the old fashioned way by saying "criticism is welcome in the comments". Specifically, with emphasis on:
- Graphic Punch
- Pacing and layout
-Dialogue

Page 1[link]
Page 2 [link]
Page 3 [link]
Page 4 [link]
Page 5 [link]
Page 6 [link]
Page 7 [link]