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Published: 2009-06-07 14:17:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 4105; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 235
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beautiful design, very well rounded and certainly thought through - and it shows! Your presentation is great and of course, the designs are very effective. My one critique is about the tagline for the pizzas - "Enjoy the taste & best crust" ... it just doesn't sound right. It's not entirely memorable and doesn't really sound smooth when you say it, it's slightly choppy and it's like the grammar's just not right. Not really sure how to describe it, but there you go. Besides that, it's a great design.
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