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Captain-Rilee — why?
Published: 2008-06-02 16:52:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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The feral cry of anguish was ripped from his throat, thrown from his body and flung to the heavens. As if his very soul was being ripped to shreds.A damnation of pain, An ejection of torment.
Why?
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I really like the writing behind it; it went well with the photograph. The photo is very indistinguishable, which I like, and the expression and emotion of the person really comes across from looking at the photo.
Did you write that little piece in the deviation comments? It's really good.
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You mean my signature thing?
The first line "she had fire in her soul it was easy to see" is from a song "into the night" by Santana
The second line is Shakespeare
I thought it went rather well
Thanks for all your comments they really are incredible!
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I really love the grainy quality. It's almost as if the person is disappearing along with their scream.
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I liked it too!
I was tempted to crop it so that the figure was more central but I like this effect much better.
Like you said, they're disappearing and no one but them will hear the scream, it's being swallowed by the...I don't know...the silence, the indifference, the evil, the agony?
D. All of the above
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i like the content, but the composition is central and slightly... not edgy enough. Try cropping it differently to add interest to the photo?
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