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Description page 09 of Dragon Ball - Embraced Ancestry

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Ah, tharr we go. I know I said I was abroad...with a mere laptop, without mah pc, photoshop n proper mouse. But what I didn't tell you was the fact that I prepared these panels before I set off to my journey See? I'm THAT cool
Okay, not much action here, but sometimes you just need to have filler pages to assure cohesion...n you know, that's the curse of having so many characters there at once. They all have to do something, that is the way of life... So...there you have another inner thought of Freeza..aaaand, Sharot just said something...n it even made Auber say somethin'. Gawd... Well I hope you didn't expect lil Vegs to run immediately to his father crying...ya know, not that type o lad.. And as for Goku..sheesh...the only one who kinda starts to doubt that Goku is Bardock is Auber....as Freeza never saw Bardock personally, he believes the others.....foolishly
anyways, here's page 09 for ya..enjoy...or bear it

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mádzsár ögéjn:

Sharot: - Ez a herceg! Nézzétek! Bardock megtalálta Vegita herceget! Vigyük innét, mielőtt Dermesztő teszi meg az első lépést.
Auber: - Felejtsd el, Sharot... Egy lépést sem teszünk, amíg Vegita király nem utasít rá... Tartsátok nyitva a szemeteket, azt hiszem valami nem stimmel Bardockkal... Nem vagyok benne biztos, hogy még mindig a mi oldalunkon áll. Csak nézzétek a furcsa az egyenruháját és szokatlan a tekintetét.
Vegita herceg: "Hol vagyok?..Ott van Apám és Dermesztő Nagyúr.."
Dermesztő: "Hmmm..Szóval ő lenne az a hírhedt majom, akiről olyan sokat hallottam mostanában..Be kell valljam, rendkívül meglepődtem... Fel nem foghatom, hogy élhette túl azt a temérdek küldetést ilyen jelentéktelenül alacsony harci kapacitással. A jelentésekben az állt, hogy a piszkos népéből ő az egyik legjobb harcos."


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Na csókolom. Igen, tudom, azt mondtam, hogy külföldön vagyok, a jól megszokott számítógépem, egerem meg Photoshoppom nélkül. Deeee azt egy szóval sem mondtam, hogy nem rajzolom meg előre ezeket a paneleket Azért csak nem hagyhatom hetekig érintetlenül a dolgokat...igen, mert ennyire király vagyok Noh, ez egy amolyan filler oldal, ilyen is kell néha, hogy fenntartsuk a kohéziót, meg mindenkinek meg legyen az 5 perc hírneve...hát igen, ez az átka annak, ha egyszerre húszezer karakter szerepel. No mindegy.
Már Dermesztő is kezdi...hát igen, ragad a hülyeség, már ő is úgy hiszi, hogy Bardockkal áll szemben Épp érdekel, mikor szakad már meg a hülyeség...Egyedül Auber kezdi kapizsgálni, hogy Gokunak nincs Bardock-szaga Aki meg azt várta, hogy a töpszli Vegita könnyes szemekkel rohan majd apuci karjaiba, az nézze meg megin a mesét, vagy a képregényt, hogy ráeszméljen, hogy ez a kölök nem az a fajta.

no...ennyit mára...alásszolgája


*Dragon Ball Z characters (c) Akira Toriyama*
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Comments: 122

Deleamus In reply to ??? [2011-01-16 22:10:55 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure ^^
They're epic!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Deleamus [2011-01-16 22:15:27 +0000 UTC]

awww... epic? they do not have anything special...XD but thanks anyway...

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Deleamus In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-16 23:57:59 +0000 UTC]

Yes, epic >3<

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ladysora13 [2011-01-16 21:09:42 +0000 UTC]

Pure Awesomeness. Cannot wait to see what is to come!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to ladysora13 [2011-01-16 21:12:50 +0000 UTC]

daawww.... thanks for the nice comment i hope ya'll like my future pages..

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ShiningMoon In reply to ??? [2011-01-16 18:50:16 +0000 UTC]

Haha, how sneaky of you!
Heh, it does seem it would be nearly impossible for a bunch of people who don't don't really know Bardock in the first place not to mistake Goku for him!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to ShiningMoon [2011-01-16 18:56:57 +0000 UTC]

and those who saw Bardock once or twice (Dodoria..Zarbon, maybe...or certain saiyans) can easily get confused over him Like that saiyan... he seems to notice that something's wrong with "Bardock"..erm...that is..Goku.

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kitsuK8 In reply to ??? [2011-01-16 18:22:29 +0000 UTC]

aha 'bust a move' niiice!!!!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to kitsuK8 [2011-01-16 18:54:55 +0000 UTC]

B) yeah...saiyan slang

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Tatsu87 [2011-01-16 17:47:57 +0000 UTC]

Hát kíváncsi leszek mit fogsz kihozni a sztoriból... csak így tovább pecs.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Tatsu87 [2011-01-16 17:51:39 +0000 UTC]

öhöhöhö.... kár, hogy nem nagyon vágod az eredetit... mer csak úgy lesz értelme..

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Tatsu87 In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-16 21:32:13 +0000 UTC]

Há' mind1 akko... élvezem majd az artokat, ha a sztorit nem fogom vágni...

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Tatsu87 [2011-01-16 21:53:38 +0000 UTC]

majd tartok gyorstalpalót 5 percbe' öhöhöhö...

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Tatsu87 In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-17 18:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Ok. XD

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Tatsu87 [2011-01-17 18:29:51 +0000 UTC]

olyan gyorstalpalút kapol hogy jobban átlátod a lényegit, mint kárl XD

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Tatsu87 In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-18 15:39:10 +0000 UTC]

Idijót. XD

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SelphieSK In reply to ??? [2011-01-16 17:27:08 +0000 UTC]

I really like how you draw the characters in your own style, it's really making your comic very unique!
Plus I really like the story so far!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to SelphieSK [2011-01-16 17:39:53 +0000 UTC]

Well thanks a bunch, missy Let's just hope you'll like the future pages I have in stock for you guys, too

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SelphieSK In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-16 17:42:22 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Deactived [2011-01-16 17:14:44 +0000 UTC]

Yay, new page!

Looks awesome. Love the design on the OC in the center (though all of them look unique and interesting). I just about died laughing at Goku's expression in the last panel.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Deactived [2011-01-16 17:42:13 +0000 UTC]

Yepp, new indeed Well, I always planned on not introducing OCs, but I figured it would add a nice touch to the comic if I had OC soldiers...you know...no gary tus or mary sues, no significant characters, just random guys... (But I kept the tendency to name them after Vegetables)
yeah...Goku...ever so goofy he's like: "wut?"

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Paty-wolf In reply to ??? [2011-01-16 16:49:34 +0000 UTC]

ahj méé hozta ide lidöl Vegitát? xDDDDD tényleg..és önmagát nem látja? ott van a nagy Vegita is nem?

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Paty-wolf [2011-01-16 16:51:51 +0000 UTC]

höhöhöhö.... csak mer unatkozott Dehonnem lássa. A nagy tudja, hogy az a kicsi önmaga, de a kicsi hunnét tudja, hogy ő az nagyba?

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Paty-wolf In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-16 21:17:11 +0000 UTC]

hmmmmm..nemtudom D:..megérzés xDD szag alapján ítél

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Paty-wolf [2011-01-16 21:21:42 +0000 UTC]

Te éreznéd a saját jövőbeli vénasszonyos szagodon, hugy tö vagy? XD

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Paty-wolf In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-18 08:39:53 +0000 UTC]

biztos...mert olyan büdi csak én lehet..főleg vénnek meg még büdibb xD

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Paty-wolf [2011-01-18 11:38:06 +0000 UTC]

na egen..ferdeni nem ártana néha

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Paty-wolf In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-19 19:08:47 +0000 UTC]

minek?..csak baszod a vizet xDDD drága

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Paty-wolf [2011-01-19 19:50:28 +0000 UTC]

és közben mennyire igazad van :/

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Paty-wolf In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-20 10:22:20 +0000 UTC]

ugyehogyugye? D:

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BK-81 In reply to ??? [2011-01-16 16:17:09 +0000 UTC]

"There's yomething wrong with bardock"... well... maybe it isn't him? XD
Loved it. What if the real Bardock comes in right now...? Doppelgänger-alert!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to BK-81 [2011-01-16 16:21:19 +0000 UTC]

well thank you, miss Glad that such a hardcore DB-fan like yerself likes my silly-skethcy comic or at least some parts of it..

Yeah well..Auber seems to be the only one who doesn not take it for granted that it's Bardock... Freeza would be intelligent enough, too, I guess..but she never met Bardock in person...neither did King Vegeta, kid Vegeta... Zarbon is busy holding his acheing balls, and Dodoria is just not sure XD...
Well, dunno bout that...he is not there, is he?

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BK-81 In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-16 16:29:04 +0000 UTC]

hardcore-fan---? Well, if a fancomic has style and an interesting plot I really like to read it. so...
I'm waiting for the other pages to figure it out waht do you mean... ;D

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to BK-81 [2011-01-16 16:40:23 +0000 UTC]

well, not a hardcore fan of my comics, a hardcore fan of Dragon Ball in general I mean
thank you for keeping track of it...we'll see if you gonna like future pages or not

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XxArtsy-DragonxX In reply to ??? [2011-01-16 16:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Awesome that you had the panels ready before you left, I would have cried if I had to wait that long

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to XxArtsy-DragonxX [2011-01-16 16:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Daaaawww... thanks for that. I'm glad I made some people happy with it

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XxArtsy-DragonxX In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-16 16:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah of course you do ^^

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to XxArtsy-DragonxX [2011-01-16 16:22:16 +0000 UTC]

and again: awww..

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XxArtsy-DragonxX In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-16 16:23:16 +0000 UTC]

lol

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KarenGriff In reply to ??? [2011-01-16 15:53:46 +0000 UTC]

YAY folytatááás Nagyon ó lett ez az új oldal Kíváncsi vagyok mi lesz a következőben, Dermesztő nagyon csúnyán nézz xD

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to KarenGriff [2011-01-16 16:15:40 +0000 UTC]

Köszi Karen. no majdcsak kiderül, mi lészen

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KarenGriff In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-16 16:24:16 +0000 UTC]

Valami gonosz gondolat van a fejében az tuti... XD és szívesen

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to KarenGriff [2011-01-16 16:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Áh, ki tuggya aztat max a készítő..jah, az én vagyok..

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KarenGriff In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-16 16:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Na látod tudja valaki Én meg várom az új oldalakat

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2011-01-16 15:31:16 +0000 UTC]

Ya know, you'd think these guys would notice that it's not Bardock by the lack of, oh I dunno, the scar? lol

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2011-01-16 15:33:42 +0000 UTC]

scar... rough eyes...you know..being rough and tough... uhm..what else...armor...
yeah well... the funny thing is Goku doesn't understand a thing of it

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-16 15:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2011-01-16 16:16:47 +0000 UTC]

do you think this aspect of my plot is lousy, though? just curious

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-01-16 16:21:12 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm, dunno yet.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2011-01-16 16:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Well that's an honest answer...seems like you could go both ways with it

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