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FINALLY, chapter 14, part 2 of my MLP FIM cartoon crossover story.

The following characters from various shows featured here are: Ronaldo, Kendall, and Gunther from Kick Buttowski: Suburban Daredevil, Ruff, Blossom, Chet, and Henry from Fetch! with Ruff Ruffman, Oscar, Milo, and Mr. Baldwin from Fish Hooks, my ML OC Abjay from Mucha Lucha, my KND OC Rocky and ex-Delightful Child Ogie from Codename: Kids Next Door, Mordecai, Benson, Rigby, and Margaret from Regular Show, and Princess Celestia, Princes Luna, Mr. and Mrs. Sparkle, Mr. and Mrs. Cake, Shining Armor, Cadence, Rarity, Fluttershy, Spike, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Mayor Mare, Soarin' from the Wonderbolts, Zecora, Fancypants, Twilight Sparkle and Discord from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.


Well...A LOT of things have occurred in this following chapter that changes everything for everyone.


First off, about Twilight's brother and sister-in-law Shining Armor and Cadence, I first featured them in chapter 25 of my non-crossover version "Discordant Feelings" [link] Yes, the whole Sparkle family's here now. And just to let you guys know, the other cartoons met this married couple during the "A Canterlot Wedding" episode, which took place BEFORE this story.

And yes, Shining Armor really admires Baldwin, in other than what meets more than Royal Guard standards. Who knows? Maybe Baldwin WILL officially join the Royal Guard while balancing it with his teacher job back in Freshwater.

So looks like Zecora was right. Ruff would be repaid for his good heart: he was NEVER fired from his beloved job. Now it looks like his boss just might give him a raise, considering, thanks to Blossom, Discord seems like a good kind of creature to guest star on Fetch! So HOORAY for Ruff!

So looks like Kick finally let loose and he and Ronaldo have reached a truce...as well as the start of a new friendship for them. Admit it, some of you guys were getting PRETTY pissed with Kendall at this point, thinking it would be obvious she would dump her boyfriend. Now, thanks to a little help from the Spirit of Chaos and Disharmony, Ronaldo's won her back...with the help of a fire ruby Discord conjured up no problem. So looks like Kendall's still his girlfriend so it's sort of a happy ending for Ronaldo...at the misfortune of a certain someone whose heart is as broken as ever.

You just HAVE to cry for Rocky in this chapter. She blames herself for what happened to Discord, feeling like a complete coward and failure to her sister friend Twilight because she still had a bit of doubt in her. But now...look how her support of harmony brought realization to everyone they know and love. And to finally hug Discord, proclaim him truly the good guy, that just melts your heart, doesn't it?

And Spike...okay, so he's to blame for this WHOLE story. But at least all is forgiven; like Twilight said, he was only guilty of caring so much about her.

Now Abjay's heart has been mended after the whole thing had been cleared. Stay tuned for more swooning faints in the future.

Some of you were really upset with Mordecai in the last chapter, I wouldn't be surprised if you were downright pissed with him after what he had accidentally done to Discord. Even a PAPER CUT is deadly. But hey, at least he realizes the truth, and there actually isn't anything going on between Twilight and Discord, her best friend. That's resolved, and he's really happy the Elements of Harmony were able to bring back Discord from stone, and that he's fine in the hospital right now. But I think one of the main highlights about Mordecai in this chapter is his blonde hair...it's been a wig this whole time. Well, say goodbye to Blondecai. Although he only wore the wig for so long just to impress his crush, he mostly did it to frustrate Rigby.

Also, the song Twilight and Rocky sang is called "Anytime You Need a Friend" by the Beu Sisters [link]
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Comments: 76

MLPFiMRox [2013-11-09 10:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Dude, The Elements are COMPLETELY BROKEN now. They... They're broken. The...the gems. The gems...are shattered into pieces. Remember the last part? She...she ripped the Elements of Generosity, Honesty, Kindness, Laughter and Loyalty. They...are completely broken now. A faint light is just glowing...to show that they are slowly reviving Discord.

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MLPFiMRox [2013-11-09 09:54:10 +0000 UTC]

DIE TWILIGHT THE NON-SENSE, STUPID, MINDLESS, ****TY, BULL**** AND DUMB UNICORN! 

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MLPFiMRox In reply to MLPFiMRox [2013-11-09 10:02:19 +0000 UTC]

CELESTIA SHOULD HAVE REJECTED TWILIGHT FOR ALL OF THIS ****TY STUPIDITY! CELESTIA SHOULD HAVE TURN HER INTO ****ING STONE! *holds a pickaxe* DIE, DISCORD! *violently hit's the Discord statue*

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iolper23 [2012-08-24 23:41:19 +0000 UTC]

I hope I'm not bothering you but I was wondering if it wasn't to much trouble you could maybe put this on fanfiction?

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to iolper23 [2012-08-25 00:56:10 +0000 UTC]

This is crossover...

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iolper23 In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-08-25 00:57:50 +0000 UTC]

I know, but I saw you put some stories on your account on fanfiction so I was wondering if you could do it with this story.

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to iolper23 [2012-08-25 01:03:08 +0000 UTC]

I would, but because this is crossover and not many even bother to look at those, I never really thought of doing so.

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iolper23 In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-08-25 01:04:43 +0000 UTC]

oh, that's to bad! Could you maybe send me chapter 14 part 1 and 2 through a note? For some reason I can't see it, even when I try to download.

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to iolper23 [2012-08-25 02:41:47 +0000 UTC]

You can't see it? But because of DA upgrades, the text should be visible without download.

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iolper23 In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-08-25 02:58:41 +0000 UTC]

Nope I can't see it, only that amazing pic! So could you?

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to iolper23 [2012-08-25 03:22:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, some other time. I got to finish this story and some pictures, first.

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iolper23 In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-08-25 03:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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FriendoftheDoctor [2012-05-25 06:54:26 +0000 UTC]

Rats. I can only find the part where she forgives Spike. Where's the part where she tells everyone else that she forgives them?

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to FriendoftheDoctor [2012-05-25 06:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh, boy, I think the non-crossover, "Discordant Feelings" has it. It's the current chapter, 16. [link]

Chapter 15, the last chapter of this story, shows forgiveness between Discord and Mordecai.

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FriendoftheDoctor In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-05-25 07:00:29 +0000 UTC]

Heheh. Sorry about all this trouble. I guess for me, it only feels good if it's officially written when characters apologize and forgive each other. I mean, it could be just as well off-screen but it's nice to able to read it. Still though, I'm sorry if this whole thing has been annoying you.

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to FriendoftheDoctor [2012-05-25 07:01:17 +0000 UTC]

It's not. I'm happy to inform you of everything.

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FriendoftheDoctor In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-05-25 07:04:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I found the part on the fanfiction. It's probably on this one too. I just can't believe I missed it.

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to FriendoftheDoctor [2012-05-25 07:07:56 +0000 UTC]

It's alright. Sometimes reading it after the first time provides better observation.

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nightmaster000 [2012-05-23 04:45:07 +0000 UTC]

Great chapter Discord is free and everything has been cleared up Ruff still has his job and Ronaldo is still dating Kendall although the last one really isn't exactly a good thing if you think about it poor Ogie.

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Sada-Pazaki [2012-05-20 22:16:20 +0000 UTC]

Poor Mordecai! But HA! She IS in love with Discord! It's on paper! Er, the screen. And it's not your fault Rocky! I wanna hug her now. Mordecai's showing himself to be strong though. I'm impressed.

...the best friend thing again?! ARG!

Whoooooosh...she's finally telling everypony/one/thing/ about it. About all the guilt, her leaving, everything...gotta hand it to her, she certainly waited until she had no choice left

Let it out Spike! That's right, let it ALL out...poor guy, I feel for him. Rigby's side comments are funny lol but they deserve the smacks from Zecora

And YAY! It worked and he's ALIVE! Everyone/pony/thing converge on him now! Discord pile!

I have to agree with Rigby's "Just her best friend, huh?" -frustrated- Oh well. I'll live

And what's this? Discord's wounded?! Ooooh! More drama!

What could have been worse was that Mordecai had actually succeeded in killing the best friend of the girl he loved but that might not help him feel better either.

I KNEW THE HAIR WAS FAKE!! I kneeeew it~

Yay, Baldwin gets to keep the armor! And Ruff's not fired! Double-yay! And Kick was being nice to Ronaldo! Yaaaa-AAAAAH! It's Kendall! ...and she gets a pretty thing...and yeah...poor Ogie

And such a great ending to that chapter. Go Mordecai for NOT taking advantage of the fair mare! Whahoo for another great chapter!

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to Sada-Pazaki [2012-05-20 23:44:11 +0000 UTC]

One chapter left. I am SO glad you read this.

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Sada-Pazaki In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-05-20 23:48:44 +0000 UTC]

One more?! I'm so glad too! I'm sorry it took me so long I've got a LOT of fanfiction backed up that I need to go through.

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to Sada-Pazaki [2012-05-20 23:58:53 +0000 UTC]

It's alright. Can't wait for your review!

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Sada-Pazaki In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-05-21 00:01:13 +0000 UTC]

I'll get it soon!

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SecretProdigyHeart [2012-05-16 00:09:44 +0000 UTC]

When is the next chapter coming?

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to SecretProdigyHeart [2012-05-16 02:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Soon as I can finish it.

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SecretProdigyHeart In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-05-16 18:15:31 +0000 UTC]

So what do you have planned for chapter 15?

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to SecretProdigyHeart [2012-05-16 18:34:30 +0000 UTC]

Something...it involves Mordecai's wig.

I mean, you did see the episode that led him to become blonde, right?

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SecretProdigyHeart In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-05-16 19:31:29 +0000 UTC]

Yes.

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to SecretProdigyHeart [2012-05-16 19:39:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, big mention there...

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Eultima [2012-05-13 01:16:53 +0000 UTC]

Alright. I think Iv'e read enough of this story to give a review. ._. Seeing how obvious as how this will wrap up.

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SwordSparks [2012-05-07 00:00:31 +0000 UTC]

So much harmony in this chapter!

Man, in a way, I'm glad and dissappointed that Mordecai wasn't really blond.

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to SwordSparks [2012-05-07 00:07:22 +0000 UTC]

Got tired of his wig, huh?

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SwordSparks In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-05-07 06:38:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I guess...

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bbb35 [2012-05-06 20:20:57 +0000 UTC]

ar to see the next chapter. THis story me happy, sad, excited, tense and hopeful.

I suspect your gonna have that wedding in canterlot flashback in the next chapter, i can't thinfaything to add to make this story better.

Maybe your using my quote against Kendall with Miss Lemmure.

*Ronaldo dumped kendall for Oogie*

Kendall: I have no words, my words have failed me.

Vanessa: Then why don't you shut up!? *Sips punch calmly* So, what do you think about Ronaldo and Oogie?

Kendall: *frowns* I'M SORRY!! I thought you told me to shut up?

Vanessa: *sneers* And yet you talk.


But other then that, this story was wel thought out, long played but always keeping our attention. The ending helped clear up all matters and everything worked out well.

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to bbb35 [2012-05-06 20:25:54 +0000 UTC]

Um, the wedding...yeah, some other time. I already have things planned out, but still...

You know, I'm surprised no one mentioned the shock that it was a wig and there will be NO MORE Blondecai(unless it was an event BEFORE this story, like the wedding)and about Ruff actually being praised by his boss.

Or the fact that Mordecai might actually be QUESTIONING if he actually does love Twilight...

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bbb35 In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-05-06 21:24:17 +0000 UTC]

I thought you already said it was a wig

But yeah, I saw how subtle you made it so Mordecai and Margaret slowly connected.

It was a work of genius, i'll be sad to see it end. Maybe the time you'll let me co-help with your next work of art story spectacular.

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Dragon222 [2012-05-06 03:29:00 +0000 UTC]

Good Work and Hope see your next story also will the Queen of the Changlings aka Crystalies make a appearances

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to Dragon222 [2012-05-06 03:49:26 +0000 UTC]

This story isn't done yet.

As for the Queen and her subjects...yeah, that's something planned for the future.

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insectlover243 [2012-05-06 03:22:22 +0000 UTC]

really good story and i cant wait until the next chapter! There is no cliffhanger yet it still feels like one :/ I am not sure if you have already been asked this and im sorry if it is a annoyance but will there be romance (not just ship tease) between twilight and discord or twilight and Mordecai? My curiosity is just burning away so i thought id just ask

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to insectlover243 [2012-05-06 03:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Hints, that's all I can say.

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crispicroissant [2012-05-06 02:06:57 +0000 UTC]

this was a great chapter I love it i really do! I hate to see twilight so sad though

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to crispicroissant [2012-05-06 02:10:53 +0000 UTC]

She's fine now.

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crispicroissant In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-05-06 02:17:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah.I just finished reading it. Oh yeah and just one question. I'm possibly the only one who cares but:what ever happened to Tallest Red? I haven't heard anything about him since chapter 6.

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to crispicroissant [2012-05-06 03:13:50 +0000 UTC]

That's where I fudged a little, he will be mentioned in the next chapter...hopefully.

I've just been so focused with Ronaldo, Ruff, Mordecai, and Margaret.

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crispicroissant In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-05-07 01:52:28 +0000 UTC]

oh okay. nice to know

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Cartuneslover16 In reply to crispicroissant [2012-05-07 02:06:02 +0000 UTC]

But I might just cut that part off from chapter 6 and just make art to show Discord and Red meeting for the first time...

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crispicroissant In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2012-05-07 02:35:22 +0000 UTC]

or you could do that too ^^

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DreamyStar12 [2012-05-06 02:04:07 +0000 UTC]

Well Milo just killed the moment there didn't he? And Abjay No just just no. He's twilight's.

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bbb35 [2012-05-05 23:51:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow!!

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