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A really drastic scene from Chapter 6 of my MLP FIM story "Chaotic Order" [link]It's the scene where after all of Equestria as well as non-pony friends outside of the kingdom are desperately searching for Twilight because they assume Discord kidnapped her and Mordecai's having nightmarish thoughts about what Discord might do to her.
At least I put some child innocence on the bottom with Fanboy and Chum Chum.
Mordecai sat on the steps of the house as he tiredly read over another Equestrian book. He barely had any sleep last night and he didn't even bother to shower nor eat breakfast this morning.
All he did was focus on any type of work that would aid him in finding Twilight.
And lead him to capturing that monster.
The bluejay gulped, fear nearly swallowing him as his mind swam with so many possibilities as to what Discord might be doing to Twilight. Poor, sweet, lovely, innocent Twilight...
Would Discord take her horn away again? Would he simply torture her through his magic of chaos and cause her unrest and unhappiness?
Suddenly, a dark, scary thought came to Mordecai's mind as his pupils nearly dilated at that thought.
What if Discord tries to...? Against her will?
No! Mordecai's mind shouted, although that image never escaped his mind.
This was Equestria! Not Mordecai's town nor any of the other towns where non-pony, human people lived! These Equestrian creatures were innocent and pure, he obviously knew that.
And Discord was just some mischievous bastard who liked to mess with everyone...especially Twilight.
But still, as Mordecai's face became pale, the image of Discord gazing into Twilight tearful eyes as he held her down, looking at her with an evil grin as she gazed at him in complete fear...
"He's just the stupid Spirit of Chaos..." Mordecai told himself repeatedly, digging his fingers into his unruly blonde hair. "He wouldn't dream of taking her body..."
"Uh, is Mordecai okay?"
"He looks like he's constipated."
The bluejay flinched before turning to see that it was just Fanboy and Chum Chum, the superhero-wannabe kids that had stayed over at the house last night after assisting them on the search. Benson stood with them, keys to the golf cart in his hand.
"No, kids, Mordecai's just having it rough right now," the gumball machine told them. "Why don't you wait in the golf cart? I got to talk to him for a bit."
As soon as the boys left them alone, Benson turned and gazed at Mordecai with so much worry.
"Hey, you didn't eat anything today," he told him gently. "And..." He cringed as he held his nose. "Oh, my gosh! You stink!"
"Well, sorry," Mordecai retorted sarcastically as he went back to his work. "Maybe later I'll bathe for His Highness."
Benson sighed as he stood close by him. "Mordecai, look..." He began. "I know Twilight missing has really gotten to you-"
"Dude, I'm freaking scared here!" Mordecai cried, standing up. "Discord has Twilight, and we're nowhere close to finding either of them!" He tightened his fists as he glared at the ground. "Maybe we'd find them faster if some stupid red bird didn't suck at believing the magic of friendship..."
"Oh, yeah..." Benson winced. "Eileen told me. You know, that was kind of harsh."
"Me? Harsh?" Mordecai demanded. "That stupid, boy-playing waitress said that this shouldn't concern us! That Twilight missing shouldn't concern us! And I'm the one who's harsh?"
"Mordecai, please calm down," Benson rubbed his head, "okay, maybe Margaret deserved all that stuff you said to her."
"Yeah, sure..." Mordecai muttered as his eyes remained glued on the ground.
"Look," Benson told him gently, "I know how much you care about Twilight. And with that, I know you'll find her. We all will."
The bluejay finally looked at him amazed that his usually grouchy boss was actually being so supportive of him. "Wow, thanks, Benson..."
"Hey, anytime, Mordecai," Benson said as he turned and began to walk away.
"Hey, Benson?"
"Yeah?" He looked back at him.
"You don't think I suck, do you?" The bluejay asked nervously.
Benson chuckled. "Not as much as Rigby."
"Okay, that works," Mordecai managed to smile.
The gumball machine nodded before walking off. Mordecai's smile slowly faded as he sat back down and gazed at the book he was reading. While studying helped a little, he knew he needed to do better.
As soon as Benson was gone, Mordecai reached over across the staircase and took out something he bought on Ebay weeks ago.
It was a thick bo staff Mordecai wanted to have to add to his collection of action memorabilia. It just laid in his room, untouched unless he and Rigby were fooling around playing ninja.
But last night, while he was searching, Mordecai had spent time to place some special additions to the staff.
Mordecai's face darkened as he smoothed the staff in his lap, an expression of vengeance clear on his face.
"Hang on, Twilight..." He muttered. "I'm coming."
His grip tightened on the weapon as he thought of the monster that had taken her.
"Look out, Discord..." He muttered as he adjusted the tip of the staff. "I'm coming for you..."
Suddenly, out of the tip of the staff popped something small but sharp.
A tiny blade.
Mordecai pursed his lips as he gazed at the addition he placed on the staff. He wasn't one to kill, especially some creature who resided in Equestria...and killing Discord would not impress Twilight even if Mordecai did save her.
But that was a nice image to think of, like those action movies not intended for children.
Even though Mordecai wasn't going to kill Discord...he would give that beast the worst swipe of his life.
Mordecai from Regular Show (c) J.G. Quintel
Twilight Sparkle and Discord from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Lauren Faust
Fanboy and Chum Chum from FBCC (c) Eric Robles
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Comments: 257
PurpleWonderPower [2018-03-23 20:43:47 +0000 UTC]
Honest truth from my mouth: that is repulsive.
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FinestFantasy13 [2014-05-18 00:06:58 +0000 UTC]
This is... interesting. Would this happen to be posted on Fimfiction?
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Cartuneslover16 In reply to FinestFantasy13 [2014-05-18 01:28:16 +0000 UTC]
The non-cartune version.Β
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FinestFantasy13 In reply to Cartuneslover16 [2014-05-23 20:21:23 +0000 UTC]
Can I get a link?
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Cartuneslover16 In reply to FinestFantasy13 [2014-05-23 20:34:27 +0000 UTC]
www.fanfiction.net/s/7418369/1β¦
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Mitchtab [2013-11-21 23:02:14 +0000 UTC]
NO! Don't do that!!! Do not mix awesome shows like mlp and regular show, with stupid a** annoying as all f*** s*** like fanboy and chumchum
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Shinda-Akuma [2013-11-07 15:30:21 +0000 UTC]
Don't feel embarrassed for drawing something implied. Infact. Pornrofit. Seriously man. Give it a try. HAH.
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Moonstar0214 [2013-07-11 12:56:48 +0000 UTC]
Mordecai:TWILIGHT,i tought you loved me
Meiscord,i tought you loved me
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Allosaurus-rex123 [2013-01-29 23:09:48 +0000 UTC]
Damit Chum Chum!!!!!!!!!You are freakin hilaious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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EmmyMay00 [2013-01-13 00:46:44 +0000 UTC]
I dont get thes comics. :/ Discord, Twilight, Mordici, Fanboy, Chum Chum? I DONT GET IT!!!
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pikminfan65 [2012-12-30 10:01:02 +0000 UTC]
my friends dead cause of my little pony and i like this and thats the reason HAHA
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zonesadragoness [2012-10-19 18:51:02 +0000 UTC]
eeeeeeeeew i think i know what it is...
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FuyuStorm [2012-04-27 00:58:00 +0000 UTC]
oh jeez mordecai -__- i said it befor and i say it ag... YOU THINK TO MUCH and rly you had some dirty thought in your head mordecai and cartoonlover16 nice work and sould discord be little biger?
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Cartuneslover16 In reply to FuyuStorm [2012-04-27 03:38:10 +0000 UTC]
Discord changes to any size, remember that.
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CadetotheEndFTW In reply to Moondrao32 [2012-12-10 07:52:50 +0000 UTC]
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FlyingHobos--0 [2012-04-07 18:05:11 +0000 UTC]
sweetiepie : i just dont want to nnot be born even if i hate my parents togethher more than apart im keeping tehm
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SecretProdigyHeart [2012-03-31 16:59:04 +0000 UTC]
Wow, he really care about her dosen't he?
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BrutalityInc [2012-03-12 20:38:51 +0000 UTC]
If Discord does anything resembling that...even if the possibility of success is slim...
Anyone would had made sure he would not live to boast about it.
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DerpyDashdaBluejay [2012-03-02 00:48:45 +0000 UTC]
mordecai is gonna kill discord if he does..............
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D IS FOR DERP
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ChibiterasuXEevee [2012-02-28 23:41:25 +0000 UTC]
i also hope to Amaterasu and Shirianu no rapeing is involved
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jamcoptor In reply to ChibiterasuXEevee [2012-03-06 00:08:15 +0000 UTC]
Uwah~! Fellow Okami fan!
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ChibiterasuXEevee In reply to jamcoptor [2012-03-06 01:36:48 +0000 UTC]
yep i love okami and okamiden
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jamcoptor In reply to ChibiterasuXEevee [2012-03-06 01:40:04 +0000 UTC]
Same They're both the greatest games ever!
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ChibiterasuXEevee In reply to jamcoptor [2012-03-06 02:01:07 +0000 UTC]
I agree super fun, i have okami on the wii, do you have it on ps2?
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jamcoptor In reply to ChibiterasuXEevee [2012-03-06 02:03:09 +0000 UTC]
I have no PS2 XD I have Okami for the Wii as well
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ChibiterasuXEevee In reply to jamcoptor [2012-03-06 02:24:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh ok ............ Let's do the Konaha shuffle!!!!! i HATE that part i kept making the sun appear
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jamcoptor In reply to ChibiterasuXEevee [2012-03-06 03:00:31 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha! I hated the Konohana Shuffle SO much! It was such a pain! XD
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ChibiterasuXEevee In reply to jamcoptor [2012-03-06 19:27:24 +0000 UTC]
i kept messing up with the sun, It took me like 25 times, LAST ONE.. Circle,..... Sun (Dammit)
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jamcoptor In reply to ChibiterasuXEevee [2012-03-06 19:34:41 +0000 UTC]
Yeah XD it drove me insane
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jamcoptor In reply to ChibiterasuXEevee [2012-03-06 20:07:23 +0000 UTC]
Now I'm confused XD What's with the "Issun:"? We're not roleplaying
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ChibiterasuXEevee In reply to jamcoptor [2012-03-06 20:10:25 +0000 UTC]
i know, it's ammy who found it annoying with the shuffle but she can't speak so issun said it for her
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