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Published: 2008-06-17 21:15:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 40000; Favourites: 1482; Downloads: 0
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This is my entry for my own contest about Couples & Duos !!! 8D I'm gonna let myself win hahahahaha.

Just kidding of course.
I can't join my own contest boohoo.


Changed the file to a cropped version. Like it much better this way!

~Nic




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.:Short story:.

"Mel..."

The tall guy didn't know how to finish his sentence. A few strands of his ebony hair covered his shoulder. The puzzled look in his eyes didn't tell any good either as his voice started to shiver.

"Melody... I can't do this no more. I mean-"
As soon as he noticed a tear fell down from his eye, he moved his face away. She didn't notice.

Melody, who was standing next to him, stared in front of her. Despite of the fact that she did know what he was trying to tell her, she didn't want to hear it.

"Please don't say it" she said, her gaze now aimed at his face. "I don't want to know. You're all live for. Don't make it end. Not tonight..."

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.:Explanation:.

My original character Melody with the one she loved the most: Dagen.

He's made of darkness, the opposite of Melody.
His age is unknown.

Dagen is an irish name and means 'black-haired'.



I wanted to draw the moment when Melody lost her voice. Sadly she had to let go her love for unknown reasons. He knew why, but couldn't bare to tell what it was.

He gave her a last kiss before he heard her heart breaking and fainted in his arms.
Ever since that moment she has lost hear healing voice and hearing. She hasn't seen him after that particular day/night.

Will she find him again?

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.:Characters & info:.

My other original characters so far:
Nora
Melody
Gaea


Reference used: Love Stock by ~Kaalvoet-Stock .


Stuff used:
  • 4H, 2H, H, HB, B, 2B, 3B 0.5mm mechanical pencils

  • 2 tissues and tortillions for blending

  • regular and kneaded eraser

  • reference image: Love Stock

  • HahnemΓΌhle sketchbook paper

  • imagination

  • Time spent: 2,5 days
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    Comments: 575

    Cataclysm-X In reply to ??? [2008-06-23 12:42:20 +0000 UTC]

    thanks!

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    carla-ng In reply to Cataclysm-X [2008-06-23 19:33:00 +0000 UTC]

    you're welcome!

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    IceFireAlchemist [2008-06-21 23:04:13 +0000 UTC]

    What was the unknown reason? (awesome, btw.)

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to IceFireAlchemist [2008-06-23 12:45:02 +0000 UTC]

    haha I haven't really figured out that part myself ;D
    I'm working on it though. I reveal more of the storyline with each OC drawing I make anyway

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    RipVanWinkle316 In reply to ??? [2008-06-21 18:15:03 +0000 UTC]

    Sweet

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to RipVanWinkle316 [2008-06-23 13:03:37 +0000 UTC]

    thanks!

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    RipVanWinkle316 In reply to Cataclysm-X [2008-06-24 00:19:57 +0000 UTC]

    Mmm

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    Fiskus [2008-06-21 14:01:11 +0000 UTC]

    sorry voor de late comment, maar ik moest ff blijven in os ziekenhuis

    trouwens, heb je erg mooi getekend

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    Finnaverre [2008-06-21 07:43:19 +0000 UTC]

    I love his hair... The detail in the picture is aboslutely beautiful as usual ^^

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    RTyson In reply to ??? [2008-06-21 07:41:00 +0000 UTC]

    aww you're such a romantic!

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    ccbgb In reply to ??? [2008-06-21 01:18:05 +0000 UTC]

    Nice ^^ I really clicked on it because of its name I'm obsessed like that....

    Wonderful pic! *envious of your amazing skills*

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    2753Productions In reply to ??? [2008-06-21 00:30:14 +0000 UTC]

    Beautifully done Sis! Fantastic piece of artwork!

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    drumgirl In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 17:33:17 +0000 UTC]

    Wonderful work! I'm so sorry you're not doing well I was wondering why I hadn't heard much from you lately. I hope you feel better soon! Take care and get some rest for us, will you? BIG In any case, great poses and details as always! I really love the girl's hair and dress, so pretty

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    sonyaznboi0312 In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 17:09:00 +0000 UTC]

    Nice...really kool...i like that glowing effect...

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    seraphic-whispers In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 15:16:56 +0000 UTC]

    OMG! this is super amazing!
    and the story line is so romantic yet bitter sweet*tear* i love it tho!

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    sweetnvicious In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 14:48:49 +0000 UTC]

    Awesome! I really like the glow around them too!

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    yanalee In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 10:56:54 +0000 UTC]

    Omg, this is so awesome....romantic and sweet!!
    I love it!

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    Night-Spawn In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 09:00:17 +0000 UTC]

    Do you add the black background with photoshop or is it done with pencils?
    Looks damn good!

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    Featherthorn In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 05:30:01 +0000 UTC]

    CataclysmX,
    It's good to stretch our wings with a little of our own work, isn't it?
    The writing explaining the scene makes the kiss more poignant. You should put that story out, I'll bet it's as good as your drawings.
    Cheers!
    Feather

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    AydenGracePhoto In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 02:31:30 +0000 UTC]

    While your shading is once again, impeccable, his facing arm looks much too short for him. It looks stumped, like he has really nicely scuplted biceps, but extremely short forearms.

    The pose it's self looks somewhat awkward and lacks the kind of passion I usually expect from you.

    However, beautiful style and shading, and keep working on your anatomy and original characters!

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    MIATaco In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 01:54:38 +0000 UTC]

    very pretty

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    LossingFeathers In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 00:54:32 +0000 UTC]

    You did a wonderful job with this. You depicted his hair very nicely even though you had nothing to go by! ^.^!! You are improving when I thought your art was already perfect!!

    ~Becca

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    RandomSpinda In reply to ??? [2008-06-20 00:19:38 +0000 UTC]


    that's just so beautiful . and the story makes it more so ...

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    VeraPeneda In reply to ??? [2008-06-19 23:20:38 +0000 UTC]

    Adorable and yet...

    Sad story... I would love to read it Do you have it on fictionpress.net or something like that?

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    Kianha [2008-06-19 21:49:29 +0000 UTC]

    Reads like something right out of an Amanda Ashley book
    Did you create that story or did it originate somewhere?

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    densteven In reply to ??? [2008-06-19 14:32:50 +0000 UTC]

    I feel like gramar's bitch for saying this, but you got a little mistake I think...

    "Ever since that moment she lost hear healing voice and hearing. She hasn't seen him anymore."

    Isn't it she lost "HER" healing voice and hearing. Well, if its not, just ignore this. I just wouldn't want such a beautiful piece of art to have such a little mistake on the bottom.

    Great work!

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to densteven [2008-06-19 21:25:02 +0000 UTC]

    with him I mean the guy, not the voice
    It was really late that evening to so kinda wrote it the wrong way. sorry for the confusion...!

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    densteven In reply to Cataclysm-X [2008-06-20 10:15:34 +0000 UTC]

    No problem thanks for clearing it out. Your drawing rocks!

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    SpanishDragon In reply to ??? [2008-06-19 11:22:15 +0000 UTC]

    The story is too sad!!!

    But I love the kiss.

    He kinda reminds me of Zack

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    IllusenOfTheEarth In reply to ??? [2008-06-19 11:12:15 +0000 UTC]

    Awww, that's so sad... I love the drawing though.

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    Talei In reply to ??? [2008-06-19 07:54:04 +0000 UTC]

    GET OWF MAH MAN!

    Just kidding. But he is hot.
    So pretty! I really love the hair, especially the guys, its loak woaaaaaah! And the glow around them really does bring them out. Love it as always.

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    Sallyrally2 [2008-06-19 07:29:19 +0000 UTC]

    OMG
    its beautiful! you are so talented!

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    Laminated-TeabaG In reply to ??? [2008-06-19 06:47:29 +0000 UTC]

    That guy lookz like that guy out of that thing. How fresh

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    LoneWolfKetsueki In reply to ??? [2008-06-19 06:38:50 +0000 UTC]

    wow beautifully done!

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    Nightgazer27913 In reply to ??? [2008-06-19 03:53:10 +0000 UTC]

    The detail is amazing on here! great job! =]

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    pirate-sparrow1380 In reply to ??? [2008-06-19 02:01:54 +0000 UTC]

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    xFallenLycanAngel In reply to ??? [2008-06-19 01:37:57 +0000 UTC]

    This makes me wanna cry T_T Sadly I can relate to it.. But none the less, it is amazing work as always<3 ^^

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    Gambler-of-Fate-X In reply to ??? [2008-06-19 01:08:31 +0000 UTC]

    they are both very pretty...and together they make a beautiful picture. :3

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    XxChibiChaserxX [2008-06-19 00:56:32 +0000 UTC]

    OMG. :tear: that story is so heartwarming..

    lol, when I saw him, the first thing I thought was Axel + Zack (Fair) (Cuz of the hair).
    I like this! (Is she about to pull his pants off?! lol, I that!! )

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    Kayou-chan In reply to ??? [2008-06-19 00:46:28 +0000 UTC]

    Your picture is so beautiful. I kinda want to be the girl. LoL

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    MissFreak In reply to ??? [2008-06-18 23:51:11 +0000 UTC]

    awww what a sad story!!! hope she finds it ^_^ great drawing

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    RoxyRoo In reply to ??? [2008-06-18 22:14:50 +0000 UTC]

    That is so romantic.... <33

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    TBascom In reply to ??? [2008-06-18 21:38:26 +0000 UTC]

    I like the way you made it look as if they were glowing .

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    cloudxtifa-ffvii [2008-06-18 21:20:52 +0000 UTC]

    Nice work! Lol! I thought it was Zack until I scrolled down!

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to cloudxtifa-ffvii [2008-06-18 21:41:16 +0000 UTC]

    lol well it was slightly based on him!

    thanks

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    SOULSSHINE In reply to ??? [2008-06-18 21:10:22 +0000 UTC]

    NiΓ§e ... forget about that thing i said about original characters ...

    You whon !

    Good luck in even more and even more realist like!

    Congrats!

    Ruben

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    mitchellnelson In reply to ??? [2008-06-18 20:43:10 +0000 UTC]

    AMAZING WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE MUST GO ON MSN GAAAAAA WE NEED TO MAKE SOME ARRANGEMENTS. The start time is coming to fast LOL.

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to mitchellnelson [2008-06-18 20:50:39 +0000 UTC]

    lol you're talking about the thing I'm thinking about or are you thinking about something we need to talk about without thinking what to talk about?



    yeah that didn't make sense but whatever!
    Can't be on MSN at the moment because I'm tired and go to bed soon

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    mitchellnelson In reply to Cataclysm-X [2008-06-19 08:01:47 +0000 UTC]

    I went to bed pretty much after i posted that message LOL so i couldn't go on msn either

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    rageofthematrix In reply to ??? [2008-06-18 20:37:12 +0000 UTC]

    Really good shading. Love that. And well done on their faces and hands.

    The guy's right arm looks a little funny, and after looking at the reference photo that you used, I saw that the guy in the photo has his arm tilted upward a bit. Maybe if you went back and tried to put his elbow more up, it would look a little better.

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