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Published: 2005-09-23 08:24:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 144; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description The brightest smile on your face
can’t hide the venom of your voice.
The bitter sounds I began to trace
drove me here, left me no choice.

Words became a knife in your hand
and you thrust it in without remorse.
Here I stood still, I made my stand,
I met with the impact of my course.

I will not cry over this broken heart,
or let myself feel sorry for tomorrow.
You played so well your favorite part,
so I will spare you now of my sorrow.

I’ll keep my voice down and retreat
to the dreams of days I’ll never live.
Until the next time our paths meet,
I hope I have no more heart to give.
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Comments: 18

catalyst2069 [2005-10-03 07:29:34 +0000 UTC]

thank u so much darkstarsara

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darkstarsara [2005-09-30 20:23:05 +0000 UTC]

tis impressive

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ShadowoflifeXdeath [2005-09-24 03:27:19 +0000 UTC]

it was a good read without a doubt and nice structure

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catalyst2069 In reply to ShadowoflifeXdeath [2005-09-27 06:48:28 +0000 UTC]

glad u enjoyed it,thanks for reading and posting

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ShadowoflifeXdeath In reply to catalyst2069 [2005-09-28 02:09:09 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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vampbabe [2005-09-24 01:28:59 +0000 UTC]

Very well written. It expresses the subdued remorse of the character so well and it's good to see professional consistency when it comes to format and poetic momentum. Well done.

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catalyst2069 In reply to vampbabe [2005-09-27 06:46:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you for reading and posting

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Jade-Green-Storm [2005-09-23 11:23:04 +0000 UTC]

Great work!

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catalyst2069 In reply to Jade-Green-Storm [2005-09-23 11:44:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks for reading/posting
glad u liked it

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Edwardsptyltd [2005-09-23 08:30:37 +0000 UTC]

great work dude

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catalyst2069 In reply to Edwardsptyltd [2005-09-23 09:15:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks mate glad u liked it

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Edwardsptyltd In reply to catalyst2069 [2005-09-24 00:15:04 +0000 UTC]

hey what's a mate 4 dude

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catalyst2069 In reply to Edwardsptyltd [2005-09-27 06:45:36 +0000 UTC]

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Edwardsptyltd In reply to catalyst2069 [2005-09-27 07:41:32 +0000 UTC]

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AntiReal [2005-09-23 08:26:45 +0000 UTC]

GOOOOOD!!!!

Damn neat!
Keep it up!

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catalyst2069 In reply to AntiReal [2005-09-23 09:16:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks for reading/posting and for the

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AntiReal In reply to catalyst2069 [2005-09-23 09:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for writing it

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catalyst2069 In reply to AntiReal [2005-09-23 10:27:39 +0000 UTC]

u r welcome

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