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The brightest smile on your facecan’t hide the venom of your voice.
The bitter sounds I began to trace
drove me here, left me no choice.
Words became a knife in your hand
and you thrust it in without remorse.
Here I stood still, I made my stand,
I met with the impact of my course.
I will not cry over this broken heart,
or let myself feel sorry for tomorrow.
You played so well your favorite part,
so I will spare you now of my sorrow.
I’ll keep my voice down and retreat
to the dreams of days I’ll never live.
Until the next time our paths meet,
I hope I have no more heart to give.
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Comments: 18
ShadowoflifeXdeath [2005-09-24 03:27:19 +0000 UTC]
it was a good read without a doubt and nice structure
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catalyst2069 In reply to ShadowoflifeXdeath [2005-09-27 06:48:28 +0000 UTC]
glad u enjoyed it,thanks for reading and posting
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vampbabe [2005-09-24 01:28:59 +0000 UTC]
Very well written. It expresses the subdued remorse of the character so well and it's good to see professional consistency when it comes to format and poetic momentum. Well done.
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catalyst2069 In reply to vampbabe [2005-09-27 06:46:54 +0000 UTC]
thank you for reading and posting
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catalyst2069 In reply to Jade-Green-Storm [2005-09-23 11:44:13 +0000 UTC]
thanks for reading/posting
glad u liked it
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catalyst2069 In reply to Edwardsptyltd [2005-09-23 09:15:37 +0000 UTC]
thanks mate glad u liked it
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Edwardsptyltd In reply to catalyst2069 [2005-09-24 00:15:04 +0000 UTC]
hey what's a mate 4 dude
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catalyst2069 In reply to AntiReal [2005-09-23 09:16:28 +0000 UTC]
thanks for reading/posting and for the
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