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catalyst2069 — disillusionment
Published: 2005-07-04 07:48:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 126; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description My time is slowly ticking away,
devouring still my petty thoughts.
Leading my wavering soul astray,
tying my tongue in endless knots.

My world is no longer evolving,
feels like I am locked in the past.
Too fed up with problem solving,
I feel the taste of my heart’s rust.

My sanity now hangs from a thread,
I stand here facing myself once more.
So many voices clouding my head,
like layers hiding an invisible core.

My freedom is but a sickening lie,
laid before me to distract my mind.
Born in bounds, in bounds I’ll die,
such is the nature of  human kind.
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Comments: 11

Just-Jo [2005-07-11 12:34:53 +0000 UTC]

What can I say... pretty again, you'll never let me down with your poetry, I'm sure

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catalyst2069 In reply to Just-Jo [2005-07-11 12:37:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for all your kind words,and especially for taking the time to read what i wrote...i feel so nice to know u like them

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Just-Jo In reply to catalyst2069 [2005-07-11 12:40:50 +0000 UTC]

It's no problem, and my comments are just the truth, They are very beautiful

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catalyst2069 In reply to Just-Jo [2005-07-11 12:41:25 +0000 UTC]

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kill-the-system [2005-07-05 09:04:07 +0000 UTC]

very nice writting
so peaceful and smooth...

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catalyst2069 In reply to kill-the-system [2005-07-05 09:54:39 +0000 UTC]

a lot Mona...

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ClaireM [2005-07-04 11:45:16 +0000 UTC]

wow what a beautiful sky!

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catalyst2069 In reply to ClaireM [2005-07-04 12:03:23 +0000 UTC]

i am a sucker for skies...and clouds...
glad u liked it
thanks for posting

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ClaireM In reply to catalyst2069 [2005-07-04 12:11:08 +0000 UTC]

hehe i am too, and your welcome

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wilting-rose-887 [2005-07-04 09:01:43 +0000 UTC]

hey nic job i compleatly understand what you mean, but u have put it into words so very well its fantastic nic work the emotion u have included is heaps good well done - could u check out some of my stuff id b honered - keep it up

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catalyst2069 In reply to wilting-rose-887 [2005-07-04 10:00:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks for reading-posting
glad u liked it

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